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单元主题写作Unit 7 Work for Peace第1页话题分析话题分析 本单元话题为讨论本单元话题为讨论“争议争议”和和“处理方法处理方法”。怎。怎样用正确方式和他人相处以及处理相处中出现问样用正确方式和他人相处以及处理相处中出现问题是本单元写作重点。学生们应该能够经过对人题是本单元写作重点。学生们应该能够经过对人际交往知识了解，增强自己与他人相处能力，学际交往知识了解，增强自己与他人相处能力，学会处理生活中人与人之间矛盾和冲突。会处理生活中人与人之间矛盾和冲突。单元主题写作第2页经典例题经典例题 假如你叫李华，假如你叫李华，Jack是你笔友。是你笔友。Jack和他好朋友和他好朋友Peter吵架吵架了，了，Jack 很苦恼，于是发很苦恼，于是发email向你倾诉，请你给他回一封电向你倾诉，请你给他回一封电子邮件，提出提议，帮他处理问题。子邮件，提出提议，帮他处理问题。提醒：提醒：抚慰他，提议他采取一些方式来填补无辜过失。抚慰他，提议他采取一些方式来填补无辜过失。要求：要求：1.词数：词数：80词左右；词左右；2电子邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；文中电子邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；文中不不 得出现真实人名、地名。得出现真实人名、地名。单元主题写作第3页思绪点拨思绪点拨表示愿望表示愿望开篇点题开篇点题提出提议提出提议I have received your email and known your problem.I think youd better have a good talk with Peter.I hope you will make up as soon as possible.单元主题写作第4页素材积累素材积累重点短语重点短语1与某人吵架与某人吵架_ 2和好和好_3交朋友交朋友_4彼此彼此_5与与交流交流_6处理处理_7与与相处相处_have a fight with sb.make upmake friendseach othercommunicate with/have a talk withdo/deal withget on/along with单元主题写作第5页惯用句子惯用句子1Its common for us to have a fight with our friends.2We should understand and respect each other.3Its important for us to solve the problem in a proper way.单元主题写作第6页Dear Jack，Ive received your email and known your present problem.As your friend,Id like to give you some advice.First,dont feel so sad because of your fight with Peter.In my opinion,its a very common thing.高分模板高分模板单元主题写作第7页 Second,youd better have a good talk with Peter.And you two can express your own feelings about the thing face to face.You can try to look at the thing from his view.Third,if you are unwilling to talk to him now,you can send an email and say sorry to him.He must be sad like you now.So,be brave and act like a man.As we know,friendship is important to everyone.Dont give it up without any try.单元主题写作 I hope you two can make up as soon as possibleYours，Li Hua第8页名师点评名师点评文章以文章以“Id like to give you some advice.”开门见山，引出下文。开门见山，引出下文。first,second,third等词利用，使文章条理清楚。等词利用，使文章条理清楚。in my opinion,as we know，as soon as possible等短语使用增等短语使用增强了句子表现力。强了句子表现力。单元主题写作第9页小试身手小试身手情谊是幸福源泉之一。请你写一篇短文，关键点以下：情谊是幸福源泉之一。请你写一篇短文，关键点以下：1叙述一件你和好朋友之间发生事情；叙述一件你和好朋友之间发生事情；2表明这件事情中你在他表明这件事情中你在他(她她)身上学习到品质。身上学习到品质。注意：注意：1.词数词数80词左右；词左右；2.不得出现真实人名、校名等相关信息。不得出现真实人名、校名等相关信息。单元主题写作第10页One possible version：Mary and I are best friends.We always go to school together and share everything with each other.One day,we were reading a new magazine at the school library.But I broke the magazine.I was so shy that I was afraid to tell the truth.Mary took the magazine and told the teacher that she broke the book and said sorry.Friends should be honest.If you are honest,your friend can trust you.My best friend always tells me when I do something wrong.It hurts sometimes,but it makes me a better person,too.单元主题写作第11页