英语四六级作文提分原则及30篇作文预测.doc

英语四六级作文提分原则一、字迹清楚，段落明朗(clear)：字体不要太大，也不要太小，以行间距的三分之一到二分之一为合适;另外，大小要一致，不要忽大忽小;字母的倾斜方向要一致，不要东倒西歪;要抵着给出的虚线写，不能上窜下跳;总之，要给阅卷人清楚、工整的感觉。段落一般为三段，采用段首缩进式，即每段开头;空4至8个字母的格，每段段首缩进的量要一致，要让阅卷人一目了然。二、内容完整，紧扣提纲(complete)：一般来说，四六级写作都会给出三点汉语提纲，考生应严格按照三点写成三段。不要有遗漏，也不要随意改变提纲要点的顺序。因为这是一个流水工作，阅卷人要在30秒左右的时间打出分数，所以不希望看到与提纲严重背离的作文。三、首先确保正确，再求闪光点(correct)：这一条是最核心的，因为在写作时间和篇幅都比较短的情况下，考生写出的内容几乎是差不多的，唯一的判断标准几乎就是语言的质量。要首先保证语法和拼写正确，哪怕用小词、短句也可以。有能力的话再追求闪光的词句。四、先总后分，连词用上(coherent)：即段落结构和连贯性的问题。英语文章特别喜欢先总后分或开门见山的格局，另外，段落之间和句子之间的形式连接手段特别明显，即关联词用的很多。在写作的时候，几乎就是把给出的三点提纲作为每段的开头句，然后再加上两三个扩展句即理由或例证句就可以了。五、语言简练，论据得当(concise)：不要啰嗦，不要过于重复和堆砌。有些考生背诵了一些经典的句型，为了凑字就全用上了，给人低层次的感觉。另外，尽管内容不及语言重要，但也肯定会影响分数的，考生应尽量在考场上用一些有力的理由和贴切的例证。六、要敢于表达自己的思想，不要一味地为了保证语言正确而裹步不前，只说一些小学生的话。如有同学第一段时写道：Some people think that names are important. They say that, if a person has a name, we can remember him. If he does not have a name, we cannot remember him. 这样的作文倒是没有语言错误，但开头写成这样，肯定也得不了高分。Wish U Everything Goes Well！一、Psychological Problems among Students Mind1. 当今，大学生心理健康问题值得重视；2. 分析大学生产生心理健康问题的原因（可从同学关系紧张；恋爱遭受挫折；贫困产生自卑；学习和就业压力等方面加以分析）；3. 作为一名大学生，我认为Psychological Problems of University StudentsNowadays, psychological problems are (1)becoming more and more common among university students, severely affecting their academic performance in the campus as well as their social performance in the future. (2)It is high time the schools and the whole society paid their full attention to the psychological health of the university students. (3)There are many reasons for this phenomenon. Some students are tortured by not getting along well with classmates or roommates, (4)more than too often they tend to settle the misunderstandings over violence, or choose to hide their emotions, which always lead to more serious psychological problems. Being frustrated in love can make the students think of extreme ways of ending their misery, taking revenge or committing suicide might happen in that case. Poverty can deprive a students confidence，making them feel inferior compared to their peers. And pressure from the study and the job-hunting competition are also contributors to all kinds of psychological problems. As a college student myself, (5) I think we should try to be strong and reasonable enough to face the new challenges in our new life, (6)and I sincerely recommend the schools to offer more psychological instructions.二、The Prevalence of Western Holidays1中国传统节日受到冷遇，西方节日却日益升温;2形成这种现象的原因;3你对这种现象的态度。The Prevalence of Western HolidaysIt is noticeable that western holidays are becoming increasingly popular day by day, while Chinese traditional holidays are being somewhat neglected. Old people often complain that Chinese New Year has lost its real meaning. To their astonishment, young people in China who are ignorant about Chinese traditional holidays are crazy about Christmas or Valentines Day.There are several possible reasons for this phenomenon. First, western nations, such as the United States and Britain, are powerful and dominant in every aspect. Everything in these countries is assumed to be superior and adored by some modern young people. Second, the prevalence of English as a world language and the development of globalization enable western culture to prevail in China. Overwhelmed by such a trend, Chinese unconsciously get involved in western culture. Last but not least, some Chinese people have blind faith in foreign things while miss our own possessions with contempt.I am critical of this trend. China boasts a brilliant history and splendid traditions. In modern times, Chinese tradition should be preserved and promoted. But it seems that young people no longer treasure the traditions. On the contrary, they turn to pursue enthusiastically a supposedly more modern culture. If this trend is allowed to continue, the priceless heritage of our ancestors will be replaced by western traditions. Nobody expects such a consequence. So lets join hand in hand to protect Chinese tradition, especially traditional holidays.三、On Mobile Phone1. 现在越来越多的人使用了移动电话：在各种公共场合都可以看到。许多大学生也有了移动电话。2. 移动电话得到广泛使用的原因：非常有用的通信工具，举例；流行的产品；价格下降。3. 但是移动电话也可能成为令人讨厌的东西：举例，考试中。Nowadays, more and more people are using mobile phones. In the street, on a bus, in a restaurant, actually in every other public places, you can hear someone speaking with a mobile phone. Many college students have bought mobile phones, too.The mobile phone is so popular because of many reasons. First of all, it is a very useful communication tool. When you are out and you need to contact someone urgently, a mobile phone will enable you to do this if there is no telephone box nearby. A beeper is not always sufficient for your purposes. Second, it is a fashionable product which many youths want to have. Mobile phone manufacturers have used famous stars as their propagandists. At last, the prices of mobile phones are dropping as a result of the scientific development. Ordinary people can afford a mobile phone now. The mobile phone is getting more and more accepted by the common public.However, the mobile phone can also become a nuisance sometimes. In a classroom when everybody is taking an important exam, the ring of a mobile phone causes almost some kind of sound pollution. Those who have mobile phones should avoid disturbing others in public places.四、Teaching Reform, 目前学校正在讨论是否应变单一的教学体制为立体式教学除单一课本授课外、采用多媒体及网络教学。请写一封信给学校报社说明你对此的看法。内容应涉及传统教学方法的局限性，立体教学优越性和局限性，二者互为补充。A letter to the University Newspaper on Changing Teaching System Dec, 23, 2006Dear Sirs,Im sending you this letter to offer my opinions regarding whether we should change traditionally unitary teaching system into a tri-dimensional one, which has recently become a heated issue in your paper.In my view, both traditional teaching and tri-dimensional one have their advantages and disadvantages. While traditional teaching does have such limit as restricting students vision, it offers a face-to-face communication between teachers and students that no other teaching can provide. Similarly, while tri-dimensional teaching offers a more convenient way of studying, it will somehow make students more passive simply because they have no opportunity to speak out.Personally I think it would be better to integrate these two teaching methods so as to fully utilize their advantages and avoid their disadvantages.五、必修课、选修课1. 中国目前的高校依然以必修课为主，学生必须修完所指定的科目，也有少量选修课程。2. 是否应让大学生根据自己的兴趣爱好来自行选择大学中的学习课程。你的看法。Should the College Students Choose the Subject by ThemselvesMost courses in universities and colleges today are compulsory, however, there are a few courses that are optional. Despite its small percentage, optional courses have given rise to the question whether college students should choose their courses at their own wills. As far as I am concerned, I think college students should be encouraged to choose courses they are interested in. As the saying goes, “interest is the best teacher”. Students will certainly study more efficiently the subjects they willingly choose than the ones they are forced to choose. Whats more, because the subjects they choose are no longer a burden, they may become more active in the study concerned.So I incline to say that colleges and universities should set up more optional courses for students to choose.六、Library Usages 假设你是李强，请你就本校图书馆的状况给校长写一封信，反映如下问题： 1. 图书馆内本专业藏书偏旧，不利于学生及时了解国内外新的学术发展。2. 阅览室灯光太暗、没有空调设备。3. 新开发的电子借阅系统有待完善 许多图书资料都无法使用该系统查到。A Letter to the University President about the Library Service on the CampusDear Mr. President,I am writing to express my concern over the library service on the campus.As a major in English, I find that most of the books in English in the library are outdated. So far, I have not come across a single book published after 1995. As a result, we fail to get the latest information of academic development both at home and abroad.In addition, the light in the reading room is far from bright, which does harm to our eyes. Worse still, there is no airconditioning and we are sweating heavily while reading.Last but not least, the newlydeveloped electronic information system does not work well and needs further improvement. A great number of books should have been listed in the system. There is no denying that the library has helped us a lot. But it is in urgent need of improvement. When improved, the library is certain to provide much more help with our study. Thank you for your time. I am looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Qiang七、大学生就业1. 大学生失业已经成为严重的社会问题2. 大学生失业的原因3. 提出自己对待这个现象的看法和认为的解决途径My Viewpoint on Unemployment of College GraduatesWith the policy of expanding recruitment of higher education and fierce competition of job-hunting market, the unemployment of college graduation is becoming the hot issue of the whole society. The college graduates constantly complain being rejected by some promising company in the job-hunting market. Even most jobs provided in the job-hunting declaredly excluded the graduates, only welcoming the experienced employers. Even worse, entering for the post graduation examination is becoming an approach to escaping the problem of unemployment.Is that really difficult for college graduates to hunt job? In fact, the answer might be “no” . There are three reasons for unemployment of college graduates. The first one is the deficiency of practical vocational skills and academic knowledge. The second is the inappropriately evaluation of his own value in job market. The third is the actually fierce competition resulting from the policy of expanding recruitment of higher education.To successfully compete in the job market as a college graduate, you must work hard to master the academic and vocational skills during you college life. Of course, consciously training your practical skills by taking part-time job will be advisable.八、 Self-establishing Business1 一些人认为高校学生休学创业应该鼓励。2 另一些人对休学创业有不同观点。3 你有何评论。Good or Evil of Suspending Study to Establish a Business? Some people believe that it is praiseworthy for some students to suspend college studies to launch their own career. Firstly, college students in China need to be bold in their endeavors to explore the outside world. Secondly, the chances of being successful are tremendous, particularly in the currently most fashinable I.T. industry. Thirdly, students who has worked out a promising plan have the possibility of getting venture investment. However, other people harbor opposite points of view. Their reasoning is as follows. Firstly, having a leading position in business does not solely depend on passion and courage. Management skills and mature personality weigh highly to ensure that a venture can survive, but some students dont possess these necessities. Secondly, learning as much as possible when one is young is vital to ones later development. They doubt whether suspending ones study is worthwhile. In my view, to suspend college study to launch ones own career should be either encouraged or curbed. The ambitious students need to give themselves an objective evaluation before theyre determined to be an entrepreneur right now. Certainly, it should not be the best choice of the majority of the students.九、作弊1当今的校园里出现了各种各样的作弊手段。2作弊的原因。3怎样杜绝作弊。How to Deal with Cheating?A large number of students tend to cheat in the exams. Some will copy the answers from their books. Some will talk with each other to share the right answers. Besides, some even write down the information on their palms of hands or on the arms.There are several causes leading to their cheating. Firstly, some students just play time away and want to get high scores without paying efforts. Secondly, some are under great pressure and they fear to fail the exams. Finally, some are afraid that they will fall behind others in the exams. Once the students are found or caught cheating, the teachers should punish them severely and explain the harm of cheating to them.There are at least two ways to eliminate cheating. In one way, we should explain the harm of cheating to the students. In another way,strict measures should be taken against cheating. As a result, the fair play in the exams can be achieved and students can pay attention to study instead of cheating.十、迟到现象1. 大学校园里，迟到，早退，旷课是常见的现象。2. 保证学生出勤水平对大学教育的重要性。3. 作为学生应该怎样做。Attend Your Classes RegularlyNowadays it is a very common phenomenon for some university students to belate for or even be absent from their classes. And still there are some students who slip out of the classroom before the class is over. Class attendance has become a thorny problem to both the students and the teachers.In fact, it is very important for the students to attend their classes regularly. First,it will ensure you to catch up with the teachers in your learning. That is very helpful to you if you want to do a good job in your study. Second, attending classes regularly is a way of showing respect to your teachers, too. Your teachers will feel bad if the students do not attend their classes, which, in return, will affect their teaching and be no good for both the students. Third, attending classes regularly will help to form a good habit of punctuality, which is of great importance for the students to do a good job in the future.Therefore, we university students should form the good habit of attending our classes regularly from now on. And some day we will benefit from it.十一、兼职1 有人认为大学生应作业余兼职。2 有人认为大学生兼职有很多弊端。3 你的观点。Taking a Part-Time JobMany college students take part-time jobs in their spare time. Whether it is good or bad is still subject to constant debate.Some people believe that taking a part|time job certainly brings about several advantages. To begin with, students can learn how to get along with people and know the society better by taking a part|time job. Furthermore, to take a part-time job provides the students with a valuable opportunity to put what he has learned from books into practice. Finally, students can make some money, which helps to unload their families financial burden. However, problems may also arise. Firstly, some students spend too much time doing part|time jobs while neglecting their studies. Secondly, when taking part-time jobs, the students may be distracted from their studies by the colorful lives in the society. Thirdly, some students may be cheated or hurt by their employers, because they dont know how to protect themselves. As for me, I share the view that college students need to step out of the campus and take some part|time jobs if their schedule permits. After all, it opens them a window to know about the society, which is essential to their maturity.十二、Internet1. 因特网在生活中逐渐普及。2. 因特网给人们生活带来的影响（好的方面，不好的方面）3. 你