精讲一、话题作文.doc

十、【2013北京】文段表达（1 5分）
根据中文大意和英文提示词语,写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文。所给英文提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
74。上学期间，学校的某些场所一定给你留下了美好的记忆，如教室、阅览室、操场等.某英文报纸正以"My Favourite Place at School”为题征文，请你投稿.描述一个你最喜欢的地方，并请说明原因。
提示词语：classroom, reading—room， playground， bright, quiet, large， help， improve
【参考范文】
My Favourite Place at School
Our school has a lot of places students like to hang out, such as playground， computer rooms， art room etc. My favorite place is library.
In library， people know how to restrict themselves， behaved more politely, and it is a good place for you to read plenty of novels and study your own subjects。 I am used to hang out in library after school, because even I go home， I may not have the mood or conditions to finish my homework, and it is a good place for you to meet some friends who have something in common and we can share experience on study or other subjects。
It’s really good to have such a quiet place!
【2013山东淄博】十、书面表达（满分15分）
请务必将短文写在答题卡的相应位置！
某英文报社正就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展题为How to keep good relationship with parents的征文活动。请你根据以下要点,写一篇100词左右的英语短文参加此次活动：
1。父母规矩太多、过于强调学习成绩、不理解自己等问题；
2。 你对这些问题的看法;
3。 你与父母保待良好关系的做法。
【答案】How to keep good relationship with parents
In my opinion, I have two many rules at home. My parents never allow me to go out with my friends at nights。 They don’t allow me to choose my own clothes, either. And they pay too much attention to my exam results。 I think my parents don't quite understand me。
However， I try my best to understand them。 Although they don't allow me to make my own decisions and give me too much pressure I know that it is because they really love me and want me to have a bright future.
In order to keep good relationship with my parents, I study hard, listen to them, talk to them as friends, tell them my troubles， and help them do more housework。

【2013贵州铜仁】III．写作（20分）
温馨提示：（作文书写于答题卡卷II规定的位置。)
在铜仁市开展“4+2”特色教育活动中，你是怎么做的。请根据内容提示,用英语写一篇短文。
内容提示：每天早上做早操.。。.。.
每天课外活动时间打球、唱歌、跳舞.。.。。
每天至少运动一小时
我擅长....。.

参考词汇: do morning exercises play basketball/ping pong dance song songs
have at least。..for sports every day be good at/do well in win
要求：
1.语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯；
2.书写工整、规范；
3.根据所给内容和参考词汇,可适当发挥；
4。 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名；
5。 词数：70词左右.文章的开头,和结尾己给出， 不计入总词数.

Students all take an active part in Tongren Four and Two Special Education Acitivities in our school.
Every morning, I

参考答案:
In these activities， I am happier and happier. What’s more， I can study much harder。.

Students all take an active part in Tongren Four and Two Special Education Acitivities in our school。
Every morning, I do morning exercises after the second class， and then play games, kick jianzi ir skip rope。 In the afternoon， I can do different kinds of outdoor activities, such as playing basketball and running. Sometimes I also draw, sing， dance， have a speech and so on. We have more time to have sports and we have at least one hour for sports every day. Now I do well in playing the piano. I won the first prize in our school last month。
In these activities, I am happier and happier。 What’s more, I can study much harder..
【2013湖南湘西】第三节 书面表达 （计15分）
近20年来各方面调查表明青少年体质的下降令人担忧。请你以How to keep healthy为题，写一篇60—80词的短文，说说你的看法和建议。
要求：主要包括以下内容，可以适当发挥。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
1. 体质下降的原因； 如：eat too much junk food ， have too much homework， …
2。 合理的健康建议.如：some useful advice, should do more exercise， eat a balanced diet（饮食平衡)， enough sleep…
How to keep healthy
Nowadays students physical fitness is declining（体质下降) year by year。 I think there are some reasons.

【参考范文】
How to keep healthy
Nowadays students’ physical fitness is declining year by year. I think there are some reasons. Students have too much homework to do, so they have little time to have sports. Some students eat too much junk food。 That’s also bad for their health。
Then, how to keep healthy？ Here are some useful advice。 First, students should do more exercise。 Second, students should eat a balanced diet。 They should eat more vegetables and fruits, and try to eat less junk food. Finally, enough sleep is also very important。
【2013辽宁锦州】（A）根据要求完成小作文，并把答案写在答题卡(纸）的相应位置。（共10分）
保护人类共同的家园—地球是每个人的责任和义务。我们在生活中的点滴小事上也能做出自己的贡献。根据表格内容,谈一谈曾经为保护环境做过哪些努力,将来还打算如何去做。
要求： 1. 词数不少于50词；
2。 开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3。 意思连贯,条理清晰,适当发挥.
turn off the lights when you leave a room
turn off the shower while washing hair
stop using paper napkins
take your own bags when shopping
stop riding in cars
ride a bike
recycle books and paper
【范文】It’s our duty to protect the earth. I always turn off the lights when I leave a room. While I am washing my hair， I usually turn off the shower. Besides， if I want to shop， I always take my own bags instead of using plastic bags. I have decided to do more things to protect our earth， such as recycling books and paper and stopping riding in cars。
【2013辽宁锦州】(B) 根据要求完成大作文,并把答案写在答题卡（纸）的相应位置。（共15分)
第十二届全运会即将在辽宁举行，在激动和自豪之余,请根据以下内容提示及要求向同学们发出倡议，号召大家行动起来，为展家乡风采，贡献自己的力量。
内容提示：1. 学习了解比赛的相关知识，做最佳观众(audience）；参考
2. 做全运会志愿者，并为之努力工作；
3. 尽力帮助各地游客,介绍我们的家乡；
4。 保持城市干净，保护家乡环境。
参考词汇：learn about， volunteer, work for…， help， introduce, clean, protect， hometown
要求： 1. 词数80词左右，开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2。 文中不得出现真实姓名，校名等信息;
3.条理清晰,语言连贯,适当发挥。
【范文】The Twelfth National Games is going to be held in Liaoning。 All of us feel excited and proud. It’s our duty to devote ourselves to our hometown.
We should learn about the knowledge about the match and try to become the best audience. It’s an honor for us to become volunteers and work hard for the game。 We must try our best to help tourists form all areas and introduce our hometown in detail。 Last but not least， we should keep our city clean and protect the environment。
【2013黑龙江龙东】87。(A)话题作文：“光盘行动"在全国开展以来，每一名中国公民都为此努力着,作为一名中学生,我们应如何从自身做起，勤俭节约,为构建节约型社会贡献一份自己的力量。请围绕这一话题展开思路谈谈你的感想。 （开头已给出.不计入总词数)
提示词：duty eat up take away necessary
All of us know that “Clean—up Plates” has been popular throughout China。 As a middle school students, _________________________________________________________________
All of us know what “Clean-up Plates” has been popular throughout China。 As a middles school student, it’s our duty to do something for it. What should we do?
Saving food is very important. I think when we eat out, it’s necessary for us to eat up the food t take it away。 It’s a bad habit to throw it away。 We shouldn’t order more food, either。
Besides/ What’s more， we can do much to save the things in our daily life. Don’t throw away half bottles of water。 Turn off the light when we leave the room. Use up the last little piece of the soup and so on。
If everyone can think about our future and save things like these, our life will be better。
【2013江苏宿迁】书面表达(满分15分）
研究表明音乐对人们的情绪有着重要的影响，因此人们用不同的音乐来调节心情。请根据下表提示内容，写一篇英语短文.
听音乐前的情绪状态
适用音乐
听音乐后的心境
压力大,过分焦虑
流行音乐
放松
沉迷电脑游戏，兴奋过度
乡村音乐
平静
困倦.疲劳
摇滚音乐
振奋
孤独.悲伤
(考生自拟）
（考生自拟）
注意：
1。词数80左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数；
2。内容必须包括上表中的要点;
3.条理清楚。语句连续；
4。文中不得出现真实的地名。校名和人名等信息。
（参考词汇：摇滚音乐rock music）
Research has shown that music has an important effect on one’s moods.

One possible version：
Research has shown that music has an important effect on one’s moods. So people use different kinds of music to change moods。 If you feel stressed and worry a lot， you can listen to pop music. After you listen to it， you will feel relaxed. Some of the students are crazy about computer games and feel over excited, they can listen to country music. After listening to it， they will feel calm and peaceful。 Some people feel tired and sleepy, they can listen to rock music。 After they listen to it， they will feel excited. Sometimes I feel lonely and sad, I often listen to disco music, after I listen to it, I feel happy again. Music is so wonderful。 I like it very much.本文为互联网收集，请勿用作商业用途

  【2013辽宁大连】Ｂ。书面表达（共20分)（解析:李希祥）
  74。旅游可以让人放松身心，增长见识……初中毕业在即，很多同学想利用暑假去旅游.请你根据下面的内容提示,写一篇短文，通过你校英语论坛,向大家推荐一个好去处，并给出旅行建议。
  内容提示：
  1. Where is the best place to go?
  2。 What is the place special for？
  3。 What should you pay attention to？
  要求:1.中心突出,语意连贯，层次清晰，书写规范;
  2。文中不得出现真实姓名、校名；
  3.词数80左右，开头已给出,不计入总词数。
It's a good idea to go travelling during the summer vacation. I think the best place to visit 
is                                                 
【范文】
It's a good idea to go travelling during the summer vacation。 I think the best place to visit is the Palace Museum. As we all know， the Palace Museum, also known as the Purple Forbidden City， is wonderful and famous for its long history in the world. We can see a lot of ancient buildings, including palaces， temples and towers. If we want to visit to the Palace Museum， we should pay attention to our safety。 We had better go with our friends or our family。
【2013青海】某英文报社以“My dream，the Chinese dream”为题开展征文活动,请根据以下提示和要求用英语写一篇短文投稿。
提示：1.谈谈你的梦想，并说明如何才能实现你的梦想；
2。只要每个人为自己梦想去努力，中国梦就能得到实现。
要求：1.短文要包含提示中的要点，但可以适当表达自己的观点；
2。短文不少于80词;
3。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My dream， the Chinese dream
Everyone has a dream . Dream is regarded as the goal of one’s life
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【答案】
My dream， the Chinese dream
Everyone has his own dream。 Dream is regarded as the goal of one's life。
My Dream is to be a good doctor. The reason why I want to be it is that some doctors saved my life after I was badly injured in a traffic accident。 Their superb medical skills impressed me deeply。 From then on, to be a doctor in the future has always been an inspiration to me。 I have been working very hard in order to turn my dream into reality。
One’s personal dream is a part of the Chinese dream。 Therefore, “long as everyone makes great effort to do their own jobs very well, it will be easier to reach our Chinese dream because we know ”the more people, the more strength".
【2013四川成都】四、书面表达（计15分。请直接书写在答题卡相应题号后的横线处）
成都是“美食之乡"，虽然餐馆里美味很多，但我更喜欢在家吃饭。现在，请以The Advantages of English at Home为题，写一篇90—110词的英语短文，内容须包括:
1. 更干净安全；
2. 省钱；
3. 再给出一条你的理由，并简要说明;
4。 适当的结尾.
The Advantages of Eating at Home
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A possible version
The Advantages of Eating at Home
Chengdu is home to delicious food （2）。 There are many restaurants that offer a lot of quality food （2）. Even so, I still prefer to eat at house （2）。 Let me tell you the reasons。
First, the food we eat at home is cleaner and safer （2）。 Besides， it is well—known to all that eating at home doesn't cost that much (2). Finally, it helps family members become closer, because preparing food at home is not only fun， but also encourages more communications in the house （3).
Eating out is great, especially at festivals, but it cannot bring us as much happiness as we can get when eating at home （2）!

书面表达
一、评分基本原则
1.本题总分为15分，按照所给要点评分；
2.评分时应注意三个方面:内容要点的完整性、词汇和语法结构运用的准确性、上下文语意的连贯性.
二、要点内容认定以分值
1. 成都是“美食之乡"（计2分）
2. 成都餐馆美味很多；（计2分)
3。 我还是更喜欢在家吃饭；（计2分）
4. 吃的更干净更安全；(计2分）
5. 在家吃饭省钱；（计2分）
6. 你自己在家吃饭的理由，并简单说明;(计3分）
7。 恰当的结尾。（计2分)

三、扣分参考依据
1. 每个要点意思完全不符合题意或要点缺失，扣2分；
2。 每个要点部分不符题意,视情况扣1分；
3。 时态运用不正确视情况扣1分；
4. 凡多次出现非关键性单词拼写错误或其他同类错误,原则上每4处扣1分；
5。 词数少于90或多于120词，从总分减去1分；
6。 书写潦草凌乱影响阅卷的，酌情扣卷面分1分；
7。 凡使用铅笔答题，或答题中使用了涂改液或不干胶条，一律0分计.

【2013新疆阜康、米泉】书面表达（满分15分)
某英文报纸以“I made it”为题举办征文活动，请你投稿。
在生活或学习中，有时会遇到一些困难，但是在你的不懈努力之下,最终克服了困难，取得了进步。请你谈谈你曾遇到了什么困难,你是怎样取得成功的，你有哪些感受。
要求：根据中文大意和英文提示词语,写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文.所给英文提示词语供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
提示词语：problem, improve， make a plan， try one's best, be proud

I made it _______________________________________________________________________
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【答案】
I made it
We'll have to take the PE test in May. But it was a big problem for me because I didn’t run fast enough. I must do something to improve。 So I made a plan。 Every morning, as soon as I got to school， I started running around the playground. I ran slowly at the beginning。 And soon I could run much faster。 I kept practicing and never gave up。 Now I am among the top ten runners in my class。 I am so proud that I made it. I'm sure I will pass the PE test in May.

【新疆乌鲁木齐】V.书面表达（满分15分）(录入 核对：黄继飞）
目前中学生学习任务重，学习压力大。而广泛的阅读有利于开拓视野，调节身心。在课业学习和业余生活中,你喜欢阅读吗？你喜欢阅读什么样的书呢？作为中学生的你，是如果看待阅读呢？请就这个话题，谈谈你的想法和理由，可适当给出建议.
注意：1。 词数：80词左右；
2。 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
3。 要求调理清楚,语意连贯,字迹工整，可适当发挥。
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【答案】
I love reading. I spend over four hours a week reading。 On weekdays I usually read before going to bed。 I read most at the weekend。 I'm interested in history books, and I like fiction too. I like the four great classical Chinese novels