月考概要写作-slower-life-get-up-early.ppt

议论文概要写作：These days our society develops rapidly and forces people to rush.It appears that people have got used to being in a hurry.However,its better for people to take their time and live their life at a slower pace than to hurry to get things done.The main reason that convinces us to oppose doing work in a hurry is the possibility of doing wrongs in a rush.When people do their jobs or take action in a hurry,they cant make a sound decision and probably regret later.As the saying goes,“Haste makes waste.”We should think carefully before making a decision and do our work less quickly.We should not make mistakes by doing work hurriedly.Slowing down the pace of life helps people enjoy their life better.For example,taking a train to some place certainly will take more time than taking a plane.However,taking a train makes people have enough time to get to know a lot of new friends.Besides,it allows people to fully enjoy the beautiful scenery along the way.On the contrary,being in a hurry will make us lose chances of enjoying our lives.Finally,slower life pace provides better health conditions for us.As is known to all,taking action in a hurry bothers people and raises their stress.People think if they are not in a hurry,they will become a loser and that annoys them.But being in a hurry can hurt people both physically and mentally.According to some studies,people who have a slower pace suffer fewer diseases,tend to be happier and live much longer than those whose life is tense,even if the former finish jobs more slowly than the latter.In short,working quickly will bring about more material benefits to make our society more advanced.Yet,much stress cant bring enjoyment,friends and health,which are much more important than money and other material advantages.Therefore,take your time and live your life at a slower pace.1.知体裁，理框架“总分（总）”即“论点(introduction of the topic)-论据(body by reasoning)-结论(conclusion by restating,summarizing or suggesting)”，通过“转折词”找文章“论点”。议论文的主题句通常在首段或尾段，或者在各段的首句或尾句。These days our society develops rapidly and forces people to rush.It appears that people have got used to being in a hurry.However,its better for people to take their time and live their life at a slower pace than to hurry to get things done.2.根据文章的discourse marker“话语标记词”如”however,therefore”在文中划出各段“主题句”。1)However,its better for people to take their time and live their life at a slower pace than to hurry to get things done.2)The main reason（that convinces us to oppose doing work in a hurry）is the possibility of doing wrongs in a rush.3)Slowing down the pace of life helps people enjoy their life better.-On the contrary,being in a hurry will make us lose chances of enjoying our lives.4)Finally,slower life pace provides better health conditions for us.5)Therefore,take your time and live your life at a slower pace.3.完全用“自己简洁的语言”准确转述每一个要点（避免重复），可以用“词性变化或同义词/反义词替换”来转述。1)However,its better for people to take their time and live their life at a slower pace than to hurry to get things done.To live life at a slower pace is better than to live life in a hurry/rush.（Under the stress of fast-paced life,）it is more beneficial to live a slower life.2)The main reason（that convinces us to oppose doing work in a hurry）is the possibility of doing wrongs in a rush.The main reason is that doing things hurriedly will raise/increase the possibility of making mistakes.People are more likely to make mistakes when doing things in a hurry.It may be easier for people to make mistakes when in a hurry.Doing work hurriedly may easily lead to mistakes.3)Slowing down the pace of life helps people enjoy their life better.-On the contrary,being in a hurry will make us lose chances of enjoying our lives.Slower life pace can make peoples life more enjoyable.Live their life at a slower pace can bring more enjoyment to life.4)Finally,slower life pace provides better health conditions for us.Slowing down the pace of life can keep people healthier.Live their life at a slower pace helps people keep fit.Slower life pace is beneficial to/is of benefit to/does good to peoples health.合并：合并：Slowing down the pace of life will not only give people more chances to enjoy life,but(also)offer them better health conditions.Not only does the slower life give people enjoyment but also its beneficial to their health.Living life at a slower pace ensures a healthier and more enjoyable life.5)Therefore,take your time and live your life at a slower pace.Thus,slow down your life pace.Thus,be slow and enjoy your life.Thus,enjoy a slower life pace.Thus,lets slow down for a healthier and happier life.4.有效使用了语句间的连接成分，使所完成的概要结构紧凑连贯。习作1：To live life at a slower pace is better than to live life in a hurry.Firstly,people are more likely to make mistakes when doing things in a hurry.Secondly,slower life pace can bring more enjoyment to life.Lastly,it is beneficial to peoples health.So,be slow and enjoy life.(49 words)习作2：To live life at a slower pace is better than to live life in a hurry.The main reason is that doing things hurriedly will raise the possibility of making mistakes while slowing down the life pace can not only make peoples life more enjoyable but also keep people healthier.Thus,lets slow down for a healthier and happier life.(62words)议论文概要：Getting up early Getting up early has been regarded as a good habit since ancient timesMany years ago,people thought that if we went to bed early and got up early,we would be energetic the whole daySo,getting up early is of great importance to us allIn fact,morning is the best time of a dayIn the morning,the air is the freshest and people are usually in the best conditionsMany of us may have the experiences that we memorize some things more quickly and accurately in the morning than at any other time of the dayIf we do some morning exercise or only take a short walk in the morning,we can build our bodies and become much healthierAlso we will have enough time to make a plan and get ready for our work or study of the day if we get up earlyHowever,if we get up late,well probably have to do everything in a great hurryLet us remember getting up early is a good habit and try our best to keep itIf we stick to getting up early every day,we will certainly benefit a lot from it 议论文概要 及时练解题过程解题过程第一步，根据第一步，根据文体文体,找出要点。略读短文找出要点。略读短文,本文是典型的本文是典型的议论文议论文,第一段为第一段为_,第二、第二、三自然段为三自然段为_,最后一段为最后一段为_,首尾首尾呼应。呼应。论点、论据和结论分别为：论点、论据和结论分别为：即时练答案即时练答案论点论点论据论据结论结论 Getting up early has been regarded as a good habit since ancient timesMany years ago,people thought that if we went to bed early and got up early,we would be energetic the whole daySo,getting up early is of great importance to us allIn fact,morning is the best time of a dayIn the morning,the air is the freshest and people are usually in the best conditionsMany of us may have the experiences that we memorize some things more quickly and accurately in the morning than at any other time of the dayIf we do some morning exercise or only take a short walk in the morning,we can build our bodies and become much healthierAlso we will have enough time to make a plan and get ready for our work or study of the day if we get up earlyHowever,if we get up late,well probably have to do everything in a great hurryLet us remember getting up early is a good habit and try our best to keep itIf we stick to getting up early every day,we will certainly benefit a lot from it 即时练即时练 论论点点Getting up early has been regarded as a good habit论论据据(1)we memorize some things more quickly and accurately in the morning(2)build our bodies and become much healthier(3)have enough time to make a plan and get ready for our work or study of the day结结论论getting up early is a good habit and try our best to keep it范文1：The passage mainly tells us getting up early in the morning is a good habit that will benefit us a lot.It enables us to have a better memory,healthier body and better preparation for the day.(37words)范文2：Getting up early in the morning is a good habit that will benefit us a lot.First,it helps us in our studies because in the morning we remember things more quickly and correctly.Second,we can become healthier by breathing fresh air and doing exercises early in the morning.Third,it enables us to make a better preparation for the day.(62words)此课件下载可自行编辑修改，此课件供参考！此课件下载可自行编辑修改，此课件供参考！部分内容来源于网络，如有侵权请与我联系删除！感谢你的观看！部分内容来源于网络，如有侵权请与我联系删除！感谢你的观看！