基础写作之人物介绍.ppt

Click to edit Master title style,Click to edit Master text styles,Second level,Third level,Fourth level,Fifth level,*,Basic Writing-,Character introduction,Just guess the man,Described in the following sentences,Born on the 18th of January,1979 in Taiwan,he was raised by his mother and was shy and quiet during his childhood.,Showing interest in music,he began learning to play the piano at the age of 3.,When his first album was released in 2000,he got the worlds attention.,His popularity sky-rocketed(,急速上升,),and he has received many awards for his songs.,His own unique Chinese R&B style is unparalleled by others and he continues to make breakthroughs as he takes risks in attempting new things.,Jay Chou(,周杰伦,),人物简介的一般步骤：,Give the right order,(,),教,育,：,education,(,),外,貌,性格,appearance,character,(,),生,平,big events in his or her life (in order of time),(,),评,估,evaluation,(,),概,况,age,sex,birth-place,background,概况,外貌,教育,生平,评估,Born on,the 18th of January,1979 in Taiwan,Jay Chou,a famous singer,was raised by his mother and was shy and quiet during his childhood.,分词结构,同位语,身份概况,尽量用分词短语、同位语结构，使文章简洁，通顺,Showing interest in music,he began learning to play the piano at the age,of 3.,When,Jays first album was released in 2000,he got the worlds attention.,His popularity sky-rocketed(,急速上升,),which allowed him to received many awards for his songs.,生平经历,省略句,状语从句,定语从句,注意尽量用非谓语动词,使文章精炼,尽量用复合句,倒装,非限定定语从句等，润色文章,His own unique Chinese R&B style is unparalleled by others and he continues to,make breakthroughs,as he takes risks in attempting new things.,评价,注意运用一些动词、形容词等短语、词组,B.,外貌,性格,:,译：我的历史老师是个漂亮女人，她长着两只大眼睛，留着长发,.,My history teacher is a beautiful woman,with two big eyes and long hair.,巧用,with,做定语,C.,教育经历：,可以用非谓语动词,使文章精炼,Having,graduated from the,English,department of,Zhongshan,University,she went on further education and received a doctors degree.,1.,在中山大学英语系毕业后,她继续学习,获得了博士学位,.,话题词汇，词组，句型：,外貌：,good-looking,相貌英俊的，,funning-looking,外表可笑的，,ugly-looking,丑陋的，,ordinary-looking,外貌平平的，,white-haired,白头发的，,near/far-sighted,近,/,远视的，,charming,有魅力的,时尚的,fashionable,苗条,slim,性格气质：,kind-hearted,好心的，,warm-hearted,热心的，,absent-minded,心不在焉的，,bad-tempered,坏脾气的，,a,strong will,很强的意志力，,naughty,淘气的，,smart/bright,聪明的，,wise,睿智的，,diligent,勤奋的，,humorous,幽默的，,attractive,有魅力的，,talkative,能说会道的，,confident,有信心的，,independent,独立的，,patient,有耐心的,生日、出生地、年龄,(who was)born in,is a,a,is a with a height of and a weight of,家庭背景：,was born in/into a poor/rich family,出生在贫穷的,/,富裕的家庭,as a child of years old,he,还是个,岁的孩子时,spend his childhood in,在,度过了他的童年,live a happy/hard life,生活很幸福,/,艰苦,教育背景：,be admitted to university,考取,大学,graduate from department of university,从某大学某系毕业,receive/get a doctors degree,获取博士学位,主要事迹：,serve as,做某种工作,devote oneself/ones effort to/be devoted to,一生致力于,concentrate/apply oneself to,专注于,make up ones mind to do/be determined to do,决心做,have a gift for/be gifted in,有,的天赋,成就：,one of the best/most important,最好的,/,重要的,之一,2.set a example to,为,树立榜样,3.be,honoured,as,被授予,；,win the prize,获得,荣誉,4.make great contribution to,为,作出巨大贡献,费孝通是我国著名的社会学家和社会活动家。,请根据下文提示，用英文写一篇短文介绍一下费孝通先生。,生平,1910,年,11,月,2,日生于一个富裕家庭。,2005,年,4,月,24,日因病于北京逝世。,经历,1,、大学时先从事于医学学习，但后来却改变主意。,2,、,1930,1935,年于清华大学学习，之后到英国继续深造，并获得博士学位。,3,、,1938,年后，曾任教于清华大学和北京大学。,评价,1,、致力于社会科学研究，促使中国农村经济发展。,2,、费孝通是一个活到老，学到老的人。,参考词汇：,社会学家,sociologist;,社会活动家,social activist,【,写作要求,】,使用,5,个句子表达全部所给的内容，并组织成连贯的短文。,How,do,you,do,the,Basic,Writing,?,The suggested steps:,1.,审题,:,确定文体、人称和时态,2.,整合信息,:,把所有内容整合成,5,句,3.,翻译句子：考虑语法结构,4.,连句成篇,5.,检查,费孝通是我国著名的社会学家和社会活动家。,请根据下文提示，用英文写一篇短文介绍一下费孝通先生。,生平,1910,年,11,月,2,日生于一个富裕家庭。,2005,年,4,月,24,日因病于北京逝世。,经历,1,、大学时先从事于医学学习，但后来却改变主意。,2,、,1930,1935,年于清华大学学习，之后到英国继续深造，并获得博士学位。,3,、,1938,年后，曾任教于清华大学和北京大学。,评价,1,、致力于社会科学研究，促使中国农村经济发展。,2,、费孝通是一个活到老，学到老的人。,参考词汇：,社会学家,sociologist;,社会活动家,social activist,【,写作要求,】,使用,5,个句子表达全部所给的内容，并组织成连贯的短文。,1.,他,1910,年,11,月,2,日生于一个富裕家庭,2005,年,4,月,24,日因病于北京逝世。,(due to),He was born into a rich family on November 2,1910 and died due to disease in Beijing on April 24,2005.,Born into a rich family on November 2,1910,he passed away due to disease in Beijing on April 24,2005.,2.,他大学时先从事于医学学习，但后来却改变主意。,When,he went to college,he first chose to work on medicine but then,changed his mind.,3.,他,1930,1935,年于清华大学学习，之后到英国继续深造,.(,further education),Between 1930 and 1935,he studied in,Tsinghua,University and then,went to England for further education,.,4,.,他获得博士学位。,He received his doctors degree.,5.,他一生致力于社会科学,(sociology),研究，促使,(,advance),中国农村经济发展。,He,devoted himself to,the research on sociology,and advanced the development of Chinas rural,economy.,Born into a rich family on November 2,1910,Fei,Xiaotong,a famous Chinese sociologist and social activist,passed away due to disease in Beijing on April 24,2005.,When going to college,he first chose to study medicine but then changed his mind.,Between 1930 and 1935,he studied in,Tsinghua,University and then went to England for further education,，,where he received his doctors degree,.,After 1938,he once taught in,Tsinghua,University and Peking University.,Fei,who studied hard all his whole life,devoted himself to the research on sociology and advanced the development of Chinas rural economy.,检查,(How to correct?),1,、,是否恰好五句话？,、是否每句都含必要信息？,、可否自由发挥？,、,pants,纠错原则：,1)pattern,2)agreement,3)number,4)tense,5)spelling,.,期中考试作文参考答案,A young man called“Brother Low-carbon”became a hit on the Internet in 2010 by suggesting we use less energy in our daily life so that we can help reduce the amount of carbon-dioxide given off.For example,he always picks up waste paper on the street and use the blank side to write something.While he is watching TV,he always turns down the brightness to a minimum and turns off the light.Also,he goes to work by bike instead of driving.As far as Im concerned,although what he is doing has no huge effect on global warming,he at least can enjoy a healthy life.,出 生,1923,年,5,月,香港,.,经历,1,7,岁丧父,家境贫困,;2,1955,年后,经营建筑,(,architecture),航运,石油等,成为国内外知名人士,;3,改革开放,(the reform and open policy),以来,先后捐资支持教育,文化,体育,和福利事业款项达,100,多亿港元,.,影 响,成为,感动中国,的人物,(,Moving China hero,).,请根据以下信息写一篇介绍霍英东的文章,.,牛刀小试,:,Now comes your turn!,In May 1923,Dr,Huo,Yingdong,was born from a poor family in Hong Kong.,At the age of ten,his father died.,After 1955,he was engaged in architecture,shipping,petroleum and became a famous person at home and abroad.,Since the beginning of the reform and open policy,he had donated over 10 billion dollars to sponsor education,culture,sports,and public welfare in Mainland.,He has made great contributions to constructing and benefiting our country,which makes him a Moving China hero.,