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,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,*,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,大学英语四级测试作文评分标准001,大学英语四级测试作文评分标准001大学英语四级测试作文评分标准001大学英语四级测试作文评分标准11分:切题,表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误。,14分:切题,表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯性较好,基本上无语言错误。,字数不够扣分。(各段已给出的主题句均不得计入),段落不够扣分。,大学英语四级测试作文评分标准,11分,:切题,表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误。,14分,:切题,表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯性较好,基本上无语言错误。,字数不够扣分。(各段已给出的主题句均不得计入),段落不够扣分。,检查语法,1.动词,时态,语态是否正确,2.名词,单数、复数、可数、不可数,专有名词大小写,3.主谓一致,分清主句和从句,使各自的主谓一致,4.形容词、副词,用法是否正确,比较级与最高级是否得当,5.介词、连词,搭配是否正确,6.其他关联词,用法是否正确,7.单词拼写 8.标点符号,九句话模板,1,.引导句(套入标题),2.,主题句,3,.展开句(简单描述),4.,主题句(提出论点),5.6.7.,论据1论据2论据3,8.,总结句(概括全文),9.,结束句(重复主题,第一段,第二段,第三段,Class work,套用九句话模板,Stop Smoking,(1)吸烟的问题越来越受到人们的关注,(2)吸烟的害处,(3)你的想法,Model 1 Model 2(developed),(1)There has never been an agreement as to the issue of smoking.(2)Recently,however,more and more people begin to pay attention to this question.(3)They have realized that smoking does great harm to health.,(1)There has never been an agreement as to the issue of smoking.(2)Recently,however,more and more people begin to pay attention to this question,and some even write to the government calling for policies to,stop smoking,.(3)They have realized that smoking does great harm to,the,health,of smokers and non smokers as well,.,Model 1 Model 2(developed),(4)The harm of smoking can be seen from the following.(5)First,it can cause cancer.(6)Second,it pollutes the environment.(7)Third,it causes great waste of money.,(4)The harm of smoking can be seen from the following.(5)First,it can cause cancer.,A recent survey by the WHO shows,of the diseases which cause death every year,nearly one third has to do with smoking,.(6)Second,it pollutes the environment.,Cigarettes ends may dirty our,air and water,.(7)Third,it causes great waste of money.,Is it wise to spend nearly thirty yuan each day for something which will kill you eventually?,Model 1 Model 2(developed),(8)In short,smoking does great harm to health.(9)Effective measures should be taken to stop smoking.,(8)In short,smoking does great harm to health.(9),It is high time that,effective measures be taken to stop smoking.,谢谢观赏!,2020/11/5,9,
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