高考英语复习写作第17讲如何写开放类作文牛津译林版.pptx

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,*,第17讲怎样写开放类作文,第1页,一、魔法导航,1.仔细观察,认真审题。审题对开放类作文写作相当主要,经过审题确定文,章主题、时态和体裁。,2.直奔主题,重点突出。尽管开放类作文考生发挥空间较大,但一定要紧紧,围绕主题展开写作,在文章结构上必须做到重点突出。,3.内容充实,紧紧围绕主题。全文要紧紧围绕所给信息主题,进行合理阐述,并表示,自己感想。在这一部分,只要用简单语言讲出道理即可,没必要过深地挖,掘信息,同时要确保文章立意是主动向上。,4.过渡自然,结构紧凑。要让一篇文章读起来通顺、流畅,就应该注意段落之,间过渡衔接。所以,有必要在上下文之间添加一个过渡词或过渡句。,收放自如,文采飞扬,5.全方面审核,仔细检验。写完文章后,要注意对照写作要求仔细审核,看所写内,容是否符合题意,内容是否充实,句型是否正确,有没有拼写错误等。,第2页,二、惯用句式,1.分析原因,(1)There are.reasons for.,(2)The reasons for this are as follows.,(3)The reason for this is that.,2.表示主要、必要、困难、方便、(不)可能,(1)It is important/necessary/difficult/convenient/possible for sb.to do.,(2)It plays an important role/part in.,(3)be of importance/significance to.,(4)attach importance to.,3.说影响,(1)have an impact/effect on.,(2)do great harm to/be harmful to.,第3页,4.列办法,(1).can do many things to.,(2)A good many/A variety of things can be done to.,(3)Strong/Effective measures should be taken to.,5.展望与呼吁,(1)appeal to sb.to do/urge sb.to do/call on sb.to do.,(2)try/do one,s best to do.,(3)do what/all that sb.can to do.,(4)spare no effort to do/make the greatest effort to do.,(5)do everything in one,s power to do.,6.表示好处,(1)It has the following advantages.,(2)It does us a lot of good.,第4页,三、典题示例,真题在线,(湖北),请依据以下提醒,并结合详细事例,用英语写一篇短文。,Small things make a big difference.The small things we do can make us a respon-,sible member of the society.,注意:无须写标题;,除诗歌外,文体不限;,内容必须结合你生活中详细事例;,第5页,文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;,词数不少于120,如引用提醒语则不计入总词数。,第6页,审题谋篇,写作类型,开放类作文,中心人称,第一人称,主体时态,普通现在时,普经过去时,关键点,布局,第一段:引入话题,如说明自己经历一件小事对自己影响等。,第二段:记叙一件证实自己观点事例,说明“小事不小”道理。叙事时一定要紧紧围绕主题,扩展要得当,过渡要自然。,第三段:自己认识和感想,升华主题。,第7页,考场作文:,From a thing some days ago,I know that it isn,t too hard to become a responsible member of the society.,I can still remember a incident which hap-pened on a rainy Sunday afternoon.I was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten was knocked down by a passing car,which drove off quickly.A man immediately rushed to the girl to give her first aid.I also joined in without hesitation.Comparing with the es-caped driver,I am proud of what I did.,As a member of the society,I realize that,re-sponsibility plays a very important role in creat-ing a better society,.,文章提升:,1.修改错误:,1)incident读音以元音音素开头,故应将a改为。,2)wait是不及物动词,故应在waiting后加介词。,3)compare与其逻辑主语I之间是被动关系,故将Comparing改为。,2.提升提议:,将画线部分改为强调句型:,阅卷现场,第8页,参考范文:,During the last summer vacation I experienced many things but it was one small thing that was the,most unforgettable.,On a sunny Saturday,I was taking a bus to visit my uncle.So many people were there on the bus,that some persons had to stand,including an old woman.On seeing this scene,I offered my seat to,her without hesitation because I thought respecting the old is a virtue in traditional Chinese culture.,When seeing the smile on the woman,s face,I felt very proud.,From this small thing I came to understand that small things make a difference to the world.Only,when everyone places a high value on responsibility for the society can we create a better society,to live in.,第9页,答案,1.修改错误:1)an2)for(3)Compared,2.提升提议:it,s responsibility that plays a very important role in creating a better,society,第10页,四、高分秀场,(江西高三十校第一次联考),北大前任校长王恩哥说过:作为新时代学生,我们应该插上两个翅膀理,想和毅力,结交两个朋友图书馆和运动场。请就以上话题展开想象写一,篇文章,阐述你对此了解。,注意:1.词数100左右;,2.能够适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。,3.参考词汇:理想 ideal;毅力perseverance,第11页,答案,One possible version:,As Wang Enge,former President of Peking University once put,“Give yourself,two wingsideals and perseverance;make two friendsthe library and the play-,ground.”,What he said is surely of great importance and benefit to us.Ideals reflect what,we value and cherish in the world,which will shape us in the future.Without,them,we may get lost and don,t know where to start in life.On the contrary,if,you stick to them and persevere,never quitting halfway,you will make it.,第12页,And then we should have another two friendsthe library and the playground.,The library is where knowledge is stored.Equipping us with knowledge is a must,for us to survive or even fly higher.Meanwhile,the playground is another friend,we can,t ignore.Without good health,you can do nothing but lie down,sighing,all day and left in deep sorrow.,第13页,