广东英语高考作文读写任务如何拓展要点.pptx

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,读写任务-如何拓展要点,1/17,评分标准及解题要求,读写任务写作（,25,分）,概括（,5,分）概括全方面，表述清楚,写作内容（,20,分）,:,主题明确，内容丰富,几年来写作内容,2,都是三个关键点,三个关键点最好依次用三个段落来写,每个段落前最好用一个主题句,这么做既不会遗漏关键点,又层次清楚,能让阅卷老师一目了然,2/17,段落主题句模式,2.,表明立场,1.,回答关键点,3.,重述关键点,4.,总述原因,5.,提出提议、原因、,方法、办法、步骤等,6.,引出经历,3/17,如何拓展写作要点：提出建议或措施,4/17,哪些是属于“,提出提议、原因、,方法、办法、步骤等”关键点,?,比如：,1,，怎样道歉才能取得好效果。,2,，你认为儿女有哪些方式能够表示对父母爱。,3,，说说人们对环境保护所采取办法。,4,，你认为人们应怎样防止过于肥胖。,5,，你认为应该怎样对待肥胖人群。,5/17,“,提出提议或方法,”指处理某一个问题可能方法，,提议要切实可行,，不能泛泛而谈，还要,从多方面入手，不能只局限于某首先,，包括面要广，尤其是社会问题，,要从政府、家庭、企业、个人等方面要采取对应方法，方法要详细,。惯用套用模板有：,I suggest some possible solutions to,.For one thing,，,.For another.,对,我提出以下可能处理方法。首先，,；另首先,6/17,Some workable advice/measures may be taken to,.First of all,，,.In addition,，,another way contributing to success of solving the problem is.,对,可采取一些切实可行办法。首先，,；另外，,；能成功处理这个问题方法还有,Here are some suggestions on how to deal with.,To begin with.,，,Moreover.,，,Finally.,下面是对于怎样处理,方法。第一，,；另外,，最终,7/17,We should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.,Firstly,，,.Secondly,，,.Finally,，,.,我们应该采取一系列有效办法来处理这种情况。第一第,；二,；最终,8/17,惯用这类关键点主题句句型：,We,should take,some effective measures.,We,should try,our best to overcome/conquer the difficulties.,We,should solve,the problems that we are faced with.,It is necessary that proper actions/steps,should be,taken,to end the phenomenon.,9/17,(,月考试题关键点,2),你认为人们应怎样防止过于肥胖？,思索：,写这个关键点时，要从,(,),等方面来提出详细有效方法。,健康饮食、体育锻炼和养成良好生活习惯,10/17,词组：,1,avoid obesity /,reduce the number of the fat people,2,have/keep a balanced/healthy diet,3,do more physical exercises/exercise more,4,get rid of the bad habits/,give up the habits that damage ones health,11/17,I suggest some possible solutions to,reduce the number of fat.,First,people should have a healthy diet,such as eating more vegetables and fruit.We mustnt eat junk food,which is bad for our health.,Second,it is necessary for us to do more exercises.,Third,it is useful for us to have a good living habit.,Whats more,fat people should be treated with full respect and as equally as any human being in the society.,12/17,Notes,1.,抓住各写作关键点,中心词,。,(,经历,;,影响,;,主要性,;,看法,/,态度,【,赞成,;,反对；利弊；有益；有害,】,；理由；提议；利弊,),2.,每个关键点都可用“,主题句,+,扩展句,”模式，大约用,4060,个词,来拓写。,注意人称，时态，语态，语气。,（你,-,我 你们,-,我们）,13/17,即时练习,(,惠州三模关键点,2),人们应该怎样防止交通事故？,点拨：,写这个关键点时，要从汽车司机、骑自行车人、行人等方面来提出详细有效方法。,14/17,15/17,Some workable advice may be taken to,avoid traffic accidents.,First,，,everyone must obey the traffic rules and goes their own ways.Besides,，,drivers should keep their emotions under control and never drive after drinking.,16/17,Never do they make phone calls when driving.,Finally,，,everybody should keep the road signs beside the roads in mind and pedestrians must walk along the pavements.,Only by everyones effort,can the road accidents be reduced.,17/17,