高一英语必修一unit.pptx

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,2021/10/3,#,Writing,湛 师 附 中 余观秀,第1页,本节课学习任务,:,写一篇描述人外貌,(look),、性格,（,characters,）、,兴趣,（,hobbies,）,文章,第2页,short,1.What does he/she look like?,tall,第3页,thin,heavy/fat,What does he look like?,第4页,short hair,long hair,What does he look like?,第5页,2.Pair-work:,A:What does xxx look like?,B:He/She is,A:What is his/her character?,B:He/She is,A:What does he/she like?,B:He/She likes,第6页,描述外貌单词：,short,tall,thin,，,of medium height,，,strong,good-looking,nice,slim,苗条,描述穿着短语：,wear a T-shirt,wear a pair of glasses,描述性格单词：,lazy,quiet,friendly,shy,kind-hearted,善良,polite,有礼貌，,strict,严厉,out-going,外向,描述兴趣短语：,like reading,like to help others,like eating,like playing basketball,3.Word collection:,第7页,4.Write something about this boy.,(3-5,句话,),提醒词：,tall,，,thin,，,black hair;,wear shorts and a T-shirt;,polite(,有礼貌,),，,happy,第8页,Name,Ma Xiaotiao,Age,15,Look,tall,，,thin,，,black hair,wear shorts and a T-shirt,Favorite food,hamburgers,，,fried chicken,Favorite classes,science,art,PE,Things he likes,little animals,Things he likes to do,play with his good friends,help others,Character(,性格,),kind-hearted（善良）,polite(有礼貌),5.Writing task:,依据表格所提供信息写一篇短文，描述你笔友马小跳，,80,个左右单词,开头已经给出。,开头：,Ma Xiaotiao is my pen pal.He,第9页,6.,写作步骤,1),审题,2),列纲,3),连句,4),修饰句子,组织文章,5),检验纠错,（定体裁、人称、格式、时态）,（加上主谓宾，把短语连成完整句子）,（适当利用承上启下过渡词,使文章更完整更精炼）,（字数、内容关键点、主谓一致、,习惯使用方法、单词拼写、大小写,及标点符号）,（用单词、短语列出内容关键点）,第10页,Name,Ma Xiaotiao,Age,15,Look,tall,，,thin,，,black hair,wear shorts and a T-shirt,Favorite food,hamburgers,，,fried chicken,Favorite classes,science,art,PE,Things he likes,little animals,Things he likes to do,play with his good friends,help others,Character(,性格,),kind-hearted（善良）,polite(有礼貌),7.Writing task:,依据表格所提供信息写一篇短文，描述你笔友马小跳，,80,个左右单词,开头已经给出。,开头：,Ma Xiaotiao is my pen pal.He,第11页,8.Lets share some compositions.,第12页,9.Pair-correction:,Exchange your composition with your partner and correct the mistakes with your red pen.,第13页,Name,Ma Xiaotiao,Age,15,Look,tall,，,thin,，,black hair,wear shorts and a T-shirt,Favorite food,hamburgers,，,fried chicken,Favorite classes,science,art,PE,Things he likes,little animals,Things he likes to do,play with his good friends,help others,Character(,性格,),kind-hearted（善良）,polite(有礼貌),Writing task:,依据表格所提供信息写一篇短文，描述你笔友马小跳，,80,个左右单词,开头已经给出。,开头：,Ma Xiaotiao is my pen pal.He,第14页,10.,例文,:,Ma Xiaotiao is my pen pal.He is 15 year,s,old.,He is tall,and,thin.He has black hair and he like,s,wearing,short,s,and T-shirts.He looks very cute.He likes hamburgers,and,fried chicken best.His favorite classes are science,art and P.E.He like,s,little animals.He often,play,s,with,his good friends at school and helps others.He is very polite and kind-hearted.He is a good boy.I like him very much.,第15页,11.Write your compositions again after the corrections.Later,hand in your compositions to me.,第16页,Thank you!,第17页,