基础写作解题思路.ppt

Click to edit Master title style,Click to edit Master text styles,Second level,Third level,Fourth level,Fifth level,*,新题型基础写作训练,一,.,基础写作基本要求,I.,基础写作考我们什么能力,?,A.,信息处理或整理的能力,;,如,:,信息之间,能否合并为逻辑关系或处理先后顺序等,B.,组词造句能力,;,如内容和语言表达的准确,性和合适性,C.,连句成文,能力,;,信息内容的完整性和连贯性,1.,如何处理或整理信息,?,（,1,）,.,存在问题,I am quite satisfied with the travel agency,.,First of all,the local tour guide John was very,enthusiastic and considerate to all tourists,，,especially to the older people.,错误诊断：总体信息和细节信息不能合并,(2),错误诊断：因果关系的信息合并,However,the food provided in the restaurant didnt agree with many of us,and,quite a few of us had to buy extra food.,(He had a high fever,and,went to see the doctor.),(3)I am quite satisfied with the travel agency,the local tour guide John was very enthusiastic,he could concern old men in our group.,错误诊断：,一逗到底,”,的中式英语表达导致信息表达出现问题，不能用多个简单句表达多个不同类型的信息内容。,I am quite satisfied with the travel agency,.,The local tour guide John was very enthusiastic,and,he could concern old men in our group.,（,4,）连句成文,信息内容的完整性和连贯性,存在问题,I am quite satisfied with the travel agency.The local tour guide John was very enthusiastic and considerate to all tourists,，,especially to the older people.The local tour guide explained everything about the places we visited in a clear and lively way,it,helped us broaden our horizons.The food provided in the restaurant didnt agree with many of us,quite a few of us had to buy extra food.We wanted to be taken to the shops where we could buy good bargains but were not.,错误诊断：,内容缺乏连贯,I am quite satisfied with the travel agency.,First of all,the local tour guide John was very,enthusiastic and considerate to all tourists,，,especially to the older people.The local tour,guide explained everything about the places we,visited in a clear and lively way,which,helped us,broaden our horizons.,However,the food provided,in the restaurant didnt agree with many of us,and,quite a few of us had to buy extra food.,In addition,we wanted to be taken to the shops where we could,buy good bargains but were not.,II.,如何处理或整理信息,?,一、按信息内容或逻辑关系分为五大信息块；,例：,二、一个完整的信息用一个句子来表达；,三、信息之间如果存在逻辑关系就应该合并，,但如果它们之间没有逻辑关系就不能随便,合并。,四,、,总体信息和细节信息不能合并；,五、要正确使用标点符号避免影响信息的正确,表达,二,.,基础写作基本步骤,基础写作,步骤,审,抓,扩,连,改,抄,