谈半开放式高考英语作文的备考思路.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,*,谈半开放式高考英语作文的备考思路,2009,年浙江省英语高考题书面表达,5,月,1,日，高二（,3,）班的学生志愿者,Li,Yue,和,Zhang,Hua,去阳光敬老院开展志愿活动（送水果、打扫、聊天等）。假如你是校英语报记者，请按下列要点用英语写一则,100-120,个词的新闻报道。,时间、地点、人物、活动。,老人们的反应,;,简短评论。,注：报道的标题和记者的姓名已给出（不计词数）,审题,题目,由题目可知,主题,Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly,文章主题是关于学生对敬老院中老人的关怀,体裁,新闻报道,应用文,时态,5,月,1,日,一般过去时,人称,假如你是,-,人称用,“they”,字数,100-120,个词,大约,8-10,成文,内容要点,时间、地点、人物、活动。,老人们的反应,;,简短评论,文章分为,3,部分,提示词,Sunshine Nursing Home,要使用题目给出的专有名词，不可自己翻译,2.,构思,（,1,）,.,抓：提纲中的核心词,反应,评论,核心词,（,2,）列：围绕核心词,选：甄选候选内容,Brainstorm,事实报道,老人反应,简短评论,根据题目提供的信息，,简洁地将事实报道出来,考虑敬老院的老人们会,有什么样的反应,将整篇文章的深度加深，,精神上升到跟高层次,不要,要,要,Brainstorm,Brainstorm,Brainstorm,（,3,）组：重组提纲,将选出的内容按照提纲中要求的结构层次组合在一起。,第一段,事实,报道,时间,5,月,1,日,地点,阳光敬老院,人物,高二（,3,）的学生班志愿者,Li,Yue,和,Zhang,Hua,、敬老院的老人,活动,送水果、打扫、聊天,第二段,老人,反应,老人们非常感谢，他们将会永远记得这一天,第三段,简短,评论,志愿者,Li,Yue,和,Zhang,Hua,非常开心，他们的所作所为不仅给他人带来了快乐，也丰富了自己的生活。,当遇到“开展志愿者活动”这样较难表达的短语时，可以采用具体化的办法避开，而且具体化更加符合英文习惯,Students Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly,（,1,）,On May Day,Li,Yue,and Zhang,Hua,students from Class Three,Grade Two,went to Sunshine Nursing Home,and,did some voluntary work.,（,2,）,Upon their arrival,Li,Yue,and Zhang,Hua,were,warmly welcomed,and respectfully,they,presented the elderly with flowers and fruits,.,（,3,）,Then they started working at one,cleaning,the windows and,sweeping,the floor.,（,4,）,Everything done,they sat in the yard,chatting,with the elderly people.,（,5,）,When it was time for the volunteers to leave,the elderly people thanked them for their kindness.,（,6,）,They,said,it was,such,a beautiful day,that,they would remember it forever.,（,7,）,Li,Yue,and Zhang,Hua,were very happy.,（,8,）,What they did,has,brought joy to,others and,enriched,their own lives.,By Chen,Jie,School Newspaper,一、内容完整，表达到位，语言优美；,二、结构合理，层次清晰，行文连贯；,三、观点明确，发挥合理，逻辑严密。,一、加大语言输入，夯实英语基础,举例一：使用“高级词汇”,1,）,I cant find any way to solve the problem.,换作高级词汇：,I cant find,any solution to,the problem.,2,）,The question is really difficult to understand.,换作高级词汇：,The question is really,confusing,.,3,）,He had to face all the possible difficulties.,换作高级词汇：,He had to,cope with,all the possible difficulties,举例二：使用同义词,1,）,It will be very interesting.,换作同义词：,It will be,a lot of fun,.,2,）,He was such a clever boy that,换作同义词：,He was such a,smart,boy that,3)Last winter I visited Hainan Island with my parents.,换作同义词：,Last winter I,toured,Hainan Island with my parents.,举例三：适当利用短语取代单词,Suddenly I had a good idea.,换作短语：,Suddenly I,came up with,a good idea.,2,）,Take a moment to see what is happening around you.,换作短语：,Take a moment to see,what is going on,around you.,3,）,Everyone should do his or her best.,换作短语：,Everyone,is supposed to,do his or her best.,4,）,Im extremely busy now.,换作短语：,Im now,as busy as a bee,.,二、重视写作训练，养成良好习惯,举例四：应用较多的语法结构,1,）使用固定句式,The environment will never improve until everybody takes care of it.,使用倒装结构：,Not until,everybody takes care of it will the environment improve.,2,）使用非谓语动词短语，如：现在分词,Nowadays,we can easily travel from one place to another and this bridges the gap among different races or cultures.,换作现在分词短语：,Nowadays,we can easily travel from one place to another,thus bridging,the gap among different race or cultures.,3,）使用定语从句,定语从句的使用，不仅能使上下文更加流畅，也同时能充分展示写作者运用较复杂的语法结构的能力。,My favorite writer is,Roddy,Doyle.I think he is a genius.,用定语从句：,My favorite writer is,Roddy,Doyle,who,I think is a genius.,举例五：上下文的连贯性,1,、使用连接性副词,1,）,We have many things to do.We believe we can finish before the day is over.,使用连接性副词：,We have quite a lot to do.,Hopefully,we will be able to finish before the day is over.,2,）,The boy comes from a poor family.The boy does very well in his studies.The boy plans to work his way through college.,使用连接性副词：,Even though,he comes from a poor family,the boy does very well in his studies;,furthermore,he plans to work his way through college.,2,、使用从属连词,You work hard and never give up.You will succeed in your studies.,使用从属连词：,So long as,you work hard,you will succeed in your studies.,3,、准确使用过渡词,举例六：正反对比类写作题的常见写法,1,）（开头时可以用的表达方式）,We have a(heated)discussion about/,We have had a survey on,2,）（分别论证时用）,Opinions are divided on the question,3,）（分别论证时用）,Some students think/But others are opposed to/others are against/Some are in favor of,4,）（发表个人观点时用）,in my,opinion,Personlally,5,）（进一步论证时用）,Whats more;besides/in addition;what is more serious is that,6,）（提出多个论据时用）,FirstSecondThird/To begin with;Secondly;Besides,7,）（相似的比较）,in comparison,likewise,similarly,in the same manner,8,）（相反的比较）,on the other hand,conversely,whereas,while,instead,nevertheless,in contrast,on the contrary,compared with,三、关注社会生活，培养思维能力,总而言之，只要考生扎扎实实地打基础，认认真真地备考，掌握一定的写作技巧，以清醒的大脑和开阔的思路应考，攻克半开放式英语作文难关也是指日可待。,2008,年浙江省高考英语试题中的书面表达题：,人们完成工作的方式通常有,2,种：独立完成与合作完成。两种方式各有特点。请你以,“,Working Individually or Working in a Team,”,为题，按照以下要点写一篇英语短文：,独立完成：自行安排、自己解决问题,合作完成：一起讨论、相互学习,我喜欢的方式及理由,注意：词数,100-120,，文章的题目和开头已给出（不计词数）。,Working Individually or Working in a Team,There are basically two ways to get work done.,1,There are basically two ways to get work done.,2 One is to work individually.3In this way,people can decide for themselves when to start work and how to do it.4Whats more,they will be able to learn how to solve problems on their own.,5People may also choose to work in a team,where they can learn from each other and help each other.6Besides,they may work out better ways to get work done by discussion.,7Personally,I prefer to work in a team,which offers me a chance to learn how to get along with others and to share my experiences with them.8As the work can be divided among several people,it can be done efficiently.9Teamwork is always important.,