读写任务型作文议论文市公开课一等奖省赛课微课金奖PPT课件.pptx

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,专题一 记叙文读写任务,专题二 寓言读写任务,专题三 说明文读写任务,读写任务型作文,专题四 议论文读写任务,第1页,Learning aims:,to learn the effective ways to summarize an argumentative passage.,2.to master the basic structures of an argumentative passage.,第2页,Type1,phenomenon+opposite opinions+conclusion,Type2,thesis+arguments+conclusion,第3页,请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇,150,词左右文章,Social practice has been more and more popular in schools.Senior school students are asked to enter society and get some ideas of it.Surely,social practice has many advantages.Firstly,social practice can offer students a chance to contact society and meet different kinds of people.In this way students can gain some precious social experience,which will be useful to their future career.Secondly,students can apply what they have learned in class to practical work,thus knowing themselves more clearly.Thirdly,social practice can bring them some financial reward and make them more independent of their family.,However,some problems may arise if no correct guidance is made.For example,some students get overly interested in social practice and want to work full-time and earn more money,thus neglecting their studies.And some students are likely to get in touch with the dark side of society,which will affect their future values.,In order to carry out social practice smoothly,students should first know their objective.They should put their studies in the first place and see social practice just as a useful supplement(,补充,),so they ought to try to strike a balance between social practice and their studies.,phenomenon,Type1 phenomenon+opposite opinions+conclusion,第4页,Social practice enriches students experience,put their knowledge into practice and reward them with money.However,there remains problems for lack of correct guidance,like neglecting studies and affecting future values,.,（,31words),details,off the point,phenomenon:,Social practice has been more and more popular in schools.,conclusion:,they ought to try to strike a balance between social practice and their studies.,Social practice has caught on in senior schools.Although it can benefit students a lot while it also has a bad effect on their studies and future values.Therefore,they should seek a balance between social practice and studies.,main point,to the point,Social practice has caught,.,on in senior schools,social practice and studies,Therefore,they should,seek a balance between,benefit,has a bad effect on,Tip 1,Learn through polishing up summaries,VS,第5页,Social practice has been more and more popular in schools.It has many advantages and some problems may arise.They should strike a balance between social practice and studies(27words),Tip2 paraphrase,Tip3 organization,It has many advantages and some problems may arise.,Social practice has been more and more popular in schools.,original,loose,Social practice has _ in schools,It has _and _ effects on students.,caught on,negative,positive,第6页,Social practice has been more and more popular in schools.It has many advantages and some problems may arise.They should strike a balance between social practice and studies(27words),Tip3 organization,with+O.+O.C.,Social practice has been more and more popular in schools.,With social practice_ _it has many benefits and problems.,attributive clause,Social practice has been more and more popular in schools.,It has many advantages and some problems.,Social practice has been more and more popular in schools,_has many benefits and problems.,passive voice,They should strike a balance between social practice and studies.,A balance between social practice and studies _.,should be struck/kept,becoming,which,more and more popular,第7页,Excellent version 1:,With social practice more and more popular,it is of great benefit to students.However,it also has bad effects on them,which encourages students to keep a balance between social practice and studies.,Excellent version 2:,Social practice has caught on in schools.Although it has positive influence on students,it brings about many problems.Therefore,students are encouraged to balance social practice and studies.,great benefit to,students.However,it also has bad,With social practice more and more popular,a balance between social practice and studies.,it is of,effects on them,which encourages students to keep,Social practice has caught on in schools.,it has positive influence on students,it brings about.,many problems,encouraged to balance social practice and studies.,students are,第8页,1.,Omit,detailed information and be,to the point.,2.Be sure to,paraphrase,the original words.,3.Try to well,organize,it.,Other tips:,4.Write it in the,third,person with the,present,tense.,5.Limit the number of words to about,30,.,6.Pay attention to,handwriting,.,Tips:,第9页,thesis+arguments+conclusion,Type2,topic,supporting reasons,第10页,Scientists find that hard-working people live longer than average men and women.Career women are healthier than housewives.Evidence shows that the jobless are in poorer health than the job-holders.A study shows that whenever the unemployment rate increases by 1%,the death rate increase correspondingly(,对应地,)by 2%.All this comes down to one point:work is helpful to health.,Why is work good for health?It is because work keeps people busy,away from loneliness.Researches show that people feel unhappy,worried and lonely when they have nothing to do.Instead,the happiest are those who are busy.Work serves as a bridge between man and reality.By work,people come into contact with each other.By collective activities,they find friendship and warmth.This is helpful to health.The loss of work means the loss of everything.It affects man spiritually and makes him likely to disease.,Besides,work gives one a sense of fulfillment and a sense of achievement.Work makes one feel his value and status in society.When a writer finishes his writing or teacher sees his students grow,they are happy beyond words.,From the above we can come to the conclusion that the more you work the happier and healthier you will be.Let us work hard and study hard and live a happy and healthy life,thesis,arguments,conclusion,第11页,Summary,：,thesis,Work is good for health.,arguments,1.Work keeps people busy,away from loneliness.,2.Work gives one a sense of fulfillment and a sense of achievement.,conclusion,The more you work,the happier and healthier you will be.,Many studies highlight that,Now there is a growing awareness that,The writer/passage informs us that,Start with,第12页,Possible version:,Now there is a growing awareness that,work is beneficial to health,because it keeps one occupied and off loneliness and makes one proud of their achievements,which contributes to a healthy body.,(33words),beneficial to health,work is,occupied and off loneliness and makes one,it keeps one,proud of their achievements,which contributes,to a healthy body.,第13页,Learning aims:,to learn the effective ways to summarize an argumentative passage.,2.to master the basic structures of an argumentative passage.,第14页,How to write the rest parts of an argumentative passage,opinions and reasons,related examples,effects on life or work,suggestions or measures,第15页,Exercise 2,:,W,ork and health,约120个词就“高兴学习,”,主题发表看法,包含以下关键点,（1)谈谈“高兴学习”对高三学习影响？,(2)举例说明你同学是怎样努力学习并保持健康乐观心态？,(3)简述怎样才能做到高兴学习？,(1)opinions and reasons,(2)a related example,(3)suggestions or measures,Group work,Exercise1:Social practice,约,120,个词谈谈你对“社会实践”看法，包含以下关键点：,你赞同“社会实践”这一观点吗？,(2),举例说明 你或你朋友所经历过一次社会实践,;,(3),你认为怎样协调好学习与社会实践关系。,(1)effects on studies,(2)a related example,(3)suggestions or measures,第16页,Exercise1:Social practice,Group1,opinions reasons,Group2,a related example,Group3,measures,Exercise 2:Work and health,Group4,effects,Group5,a related example,Group6,measures,Discussion,第17页,suggestions or measures,Effective measures are taken to deal with,It is necessary for me to put forward several suggestions concerning,effects on life or work,have a potential/positive effect on our life.,It plays an important role in,It brings about some problems.,opinion and reasons,The reason why I am in favor of is that,Many factors contribute to my view that,The reasons accounting for my support/objection are as follows.,general structure,a related example,A famous example/event in history occurs to me.,An example in daily life reflects the phenomenon,Lets take.for example.,第18页,Review what weve learned and complete the argumentative passage.,Homework:,第19页,Excellent version:,I am in favor of the view that social practice benefits students in many ways.,Nowadays,more students have opportunities to join in various social activities,such as military training,voluntary work in a community service,a part-time job in a super-market,from which they can learn how to serve,how to cooper ate and how to solve problems.Gradually they will become strong-willed,kind-hearted and enthusiastic in study and life.,Two years ago,I organized a team of classmates,to a Charity House where orphans and the disabled live.There we told stories to the blind;we drew beautiful pictures for the deaf;we helped friends in the wheelchair go around.It was the visit that made me realize that helping others should not be only an empty talk and that life is worth cherishing.,Of course,we must strike a balance between study and social practice,never allowing social activities to take priority over schoolwork.After all,senior school stage is a vital period for students to obtain knowledge and get prepared for their future.Therefore,I strongly suggest that we make full use of our spare time and holiday to participate in that.Only in this way can we refuse to shut ourselves on campus.,measures,opinions and reasons,a related example,第20页,