广东省高考英语 任务写作的概括教学课件 人教新目标版 课件.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,welcome to our class,If the dream is big enough,the facts dont count.,如果梦想远大，就一定可以克服艰难险阻。,how to write a summary,of narrative in the,task-based writing,True or false,1.Copy the original sentence without any change.,2.Write it in the first person.,3.Include your own opinions.,4.Put the main points of a dialogue in indirect speech.,Revision,Mainly use the words and phrases in the original,passage,but,be sure to use our own words.,Write it in the,third,person.,You cant include your own opinions.,尝试篇,write a summary,Passage 1,I took a trip to a big lake in Indonesia with my family two years ago.It was really a huge lake with beautiful scenery all around.People were amazed by the endless view in front of our eyes.Later on,unlike other girls,I volunteered to go water-skiing alone,I put on the life jacket,got on the motorboat immediately and started my engine as soon as possible.,The lake seemed broad and endless,I was so thrilled to enjoy my trip among the mountains and waters that I sped my motorboat.Then,after some time,I found myself in the middle of the endless lake.A sudden fear came around me.,I didnt know where I was or even how far I had gone from the shore.What was worse,it began to rain and it became very cold and foggy.I rode everywhere but find my way back.It was useless for me to cry or shout for help.,I was so terrified that I began to think about all kinds of horrible things.After floating on the water helpless and hopelessly for a long time,suddenly I heard someone calling my name.Soon,a big steamboat sailed to me and they pulled me up to the deck and asked me if I was hurt,I couldnt say a word but cried out in my fathers arms.,What is the style of the passage?,narrative,How do you write a summary of narrative?,combination of elements,要素串联法,who,when,where,what,why,how,result,what to learn,the points you should pay attention to,1.,不需要把所有要点都涵盖。,2.,在这些内容中比重最大的是,what,，不要把,what,写得太详细，注意浓缩。,3.,找出叙事中夹带的议论，挖掘出文章的主题。,4.,用自己的话把主题和主要情节组织成摘要。,who,when,where,what,why,how,result,what to learn,材料分析,“,I”,two years ago,“,writer”,a trip to a big lake in Indonesia,got lost,went to water-skiing,alone,too,thrilled,father came to her,my version for the summary,Once,the writer was on a trip to a lake,where she went to water-skiing alone,.she was too excited and enjoyed herself,that,soon she got,lost.Fortunately,her,father came to rescue her.(35 words),We may begin like these:,1.The passage,is,about,the writers unforgettable experience to water-skiing,.,2.The writer,tells,us about,his unforgettable experience to water-skiing.,3.The story,is,about,the writer who went to water-skiing.,4.The author,tells,us that,the writer went to water-skiing,.,小试牛刀篇,write a summary,competition,passage 2,Everyone has an experience they would rather forget.Some are embarrassing,some are moving,and some teach us a lesson.Here is a story of mine.,Last Sunday I went fishing.After setting up my fishing rod,（钓鱼竿）,with bait,（鱼饵）,I sat down on the bank of the lake.But two hours later,I didnt catch any fish.I got very angry and began to pack up my stuff,（收拾东西）,preparing to go back home.,Just then,I saw an old man sitting near me.To my surprise,his basket was full of fish,so I went over to him,wanting to know why.“Excuse me,but how long have you sat here?”I asked.“About four hours,”he answered.,“,Four hours?”I couldnt believe my ears.“Yes.Its very important to be patient,”the old man said.“Dont consider fishing a tiring sport.Just enjoy it.”,Suddenly,I understood what he said.I must learn to be patient.Then I sat there and waited for fish patiently.I felt a fish touch the bait,but I didnt move and waited for the right moment to reel it in,（卷收钓鱼线）,.At last,I caught it.This made me very happy.In the following six hours,I caught over 10 fish.,On my way home,I thought what had happened on the bank.I gradually realized that the secret of success was patience.,who,when,where,what,why,how,result,what to learn,材料分析,the writer,an old man,on the bank of the,lake,was taught a lesson by an old man,caught 10 fish,when going fishing last Sunday,Patience is important.,Patience is the secret of success,.,In this passage,the writer mainly tells us his experience of,fishing and was taught an unforgettable lesson by an old man.,He knew the importance of patience and finally got some fish.(33 words,）,my,version for the summary,Homework,write a summary,Passage 3,A carpenter planned to retire,so he didnt build the house as carefully as before.When he knew that the last house he had built was a gift from his boss,he felt very sorry.,Passage 4,The author writes about a problem he faced when starting his new part-time job and how he solved it.He concludes that the best solution to any problem is to avoid it.,