PETS-5写作概述.ppt

Click to edit Master title style,Click to edit Master text styles,Second level,Third level,Fourth level,Fifth level,*,*,PETS 5,写作概述,Sept.2015,1,写作形式和内容,40,分钟,25%/110,答题卡,2,根据主题或情景性的提示或问题写一篇不少于,250,词的短文（不含标点）,议论文，要求表达观点，赞同,/,反对,书面表达能力,英语各项能力的综合性考查,2,写作评分规定,评分原则,总分,25,分，按,5,个档次给分，每档,5,分,文章长度不得少于,250,词。,100-150,之间，得分不超过,2,档；低于,100,词得分不超过一档；,300,词以上的部分不予评阅,阅卷时根据总体评分标准与具体评分细则评分,主要依据：内容的相关性和完整性、结构和语言的准确性、语域和格式的恰当性、句式和词汇的广泛性,拼写与标点错误视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑，英、美拼写均可,3,写作评分规定,评分标准,第五档（,21-25,分）：很好地完成了规定的任务,开头得体，结尾有力；,内容完整，层次分明，具有说服力；,使用了丰富的语法结构与词汇，显示了较强的语言驾驭能力；,条理性强，段落清晰有效，采用了多种衔接与转折手法；,语言自然流畅，极少语言错误；,格式与语域恰当贴切,对目标读者产生了很好的预期效果。,4,写作评分规定,评分标准,第四档（,16-20,分）：较好地完成了规定的任务,第三档（,11-15,分）：基本完成了规定的任务,第二档（,6-10,分）：未能按要求完成规定任务,第一档（,1-5,分）：未完成规定的任务,0,分：所传达的信息或所用的语言太少，无法评价，内容与要求无关或无法辨认,5,写作评分细则,内容：作者既可以赞成也可以不赞成题目中的观点。所写文章必须包含作者本人对写作题目的了解与观点。考生应给出一个论据和一个实例支持自己的观点。,广泛性：应使用论述与说明性语言，但可能会用到描写性语言。语法结构要多样，用词要丰富。,组织结构：层次分明，段落恰当，适当地使用衔接与转折手法。,格式与语域：较正式。,目标读者：读者阅读后应了解作者的观点及理由。,6,大纲样题,You have read an article in a magazine which states,“,Economic development will inevitably generate industrial waste which in turn will cause pollution to the living environment.Economic prosperity and a clean environment can not coexist.You have to make a choice between the two,.,”,Write,an article for the same magazine,to clarify your own points of view towards this issue.You should use your own ideas,knowledge or experience to generate support for your argument and include an example.You should write no less than 250 words.Write your article on,ANSWER SHEET 2,.,7,大家应该也有点累了，稍作休息,大家有疑问的，可以询问和交流,8,课程安排,9,课程安排,10,Lecture I,How to sharpen your language sense for better writing,11,Linguistic Competence of the Writer,想,我想你是对的,我想游泳,他很想家,容我想想,准备,我准备让你们多做点练习,你准备走了吗？,你准备今天干什么？,我正准备去那儿。,你准备在会上讲点儿什么吗？,做,做功课,做计划,做手术,做报告,做游戏,介绍,介绍新书,介绍一位客人,介绍经验,介绍情况,12,Linguistic Competence of the Writer,想,I believe you are right.,I want to have a swim.,He missed his family.,Let me think a moment.,准备,I intend to give you more exercises.,Are you ready to leave?,What are you going to do today?,I am about to go there.,Do you want to say something at the meeting?,做,d,o ones homework,m,ake a plan,p,erform an operation,g,ive(make)a report,play a game,介绍,r,ecommend a new book,i,ntroduce a guest,p,ass on experience,p,rovide information,13,Linguistic Competence of the Writer,一个好人,a good man/person,Kind,honest,just,generous,sympathetic,warm-hearted,selfless,brave,honorable,一座（间）房子,a house,Mansion,villa,chateau,cottage,cabin,hut,shack,shanty,shed,barn,14,PETS,考生存在的问题,Spelling mistakes,Collocation mistakes,Monotony,Chinglish,Odd and uncommon words,Your are not tested how many words you know,but how well you use the words you know,!,15,The knowledge I received is worth more than gold and wealth.,Nowadays many adults are taking additional training courses to learn new skills to satisfy the demands of market economy.,Recently he worked very hard and got great progress in his English learning.,Come to see me when you have a free time.,In my opinion,I think that women should be paid as much as men for the same work.,16,The knowledge I acquired is,Nowadays to meet the demands of,made great progress in,when you are free.,In my opinion,women should,17,Complete sentences,sentence fragments and punctuation,It was raining hard,they could not work in the fields.(?),It was raining hard;they could not work in the fields.,It was raining hard.They could not work in the fields.,It was raining so hard that they could not work in the fields.,It was raining hard,so they could not work in the fields.,As it was raining hard,they could not work in the fields.,18,Complete sentences,sentence fragments and punctuation,I was born in a small town,in the town there was only one school,I studied there for six years.(?),I was born in a small town.In the town there was only one school.I studied there for six years.,In the small town where I was born,there was only one school,and I studied there for six years.,I was born in a small town,where there was only one school.I studied there for six years.,I studied for six years at the only school in the small town where I was born.,19,Coherence,A man is judged not only by what he says but also by his deeds.,A man is judged not only by what he says but also by what he does.,A man is judged not only by his words but also by his deeds.,To get ready for the trip,all the things she needed were put into a suitcase.,To get ready for the trip,she put all the things she needed into a suitcase.,20,The following data suggests that the living standard of Chinese people has been improved greatly.,Jerry devoured a steak,and an entire half a gallon of ice cream was eaten by him.,I want to study English.Because it is an international language.,He is a person who is very attractive.,21,PETS,考生存在的问题,Grammatical mistakes,Redundancy,Lack of variety,22,有,30,人在这次车祸中丧生。,Thirty people died in the accident.,Thirty people were killed in the accident.,The accident killed thirty people.,There were thirty people dead in the accident.,In the accident,thirty people lost their lives.,The accident resulted in thirty deaths.,The death toll was thirty in the accident.,23,Considering the consumption level of the Chinese,the salary is rather high.,His job is a teacher.,When he told me what had happened we all felt surprised.,One should be careful when he/she is crossing a street.,There is only one problem that is difficult to solve,and that is we haven,t enough fund to finish the experiment.,24,The consumption level of the Chinese being taken into consideration,the salary is rather high.,He is a teacher./His job is teaching.,When he told me what had happened,I felt surprised.,One should be careful when crossing a street.,Only one problem is difficult to solve:we have not enough fund to finish the experiment.,25,Our teacher,who came from the South,has worked in the city for several years.,I met a strange woman in the library when I was reading there.,I came to realize how useful the course was because I had learned a lot about human behavior from it.,26,He had just missed seeing me on his visit to my house,but we talked later on the phone and appointed a meeting in the park the next day.,The reading room in the building contains many computer books that I know litter about.,I met him in the drug store with his two sons for companion.,27,I had tried in vain to finish writing my essay before the wonderful TV show was over.,Kind as he appeared to be,he didn,t want to help when I was in trouble.(Sitting back in his armchair with a seemingly kind smile on his face,he didn,t),We used to talk a lot by telephone,but we have never seen each other again since I left that city.,28,