高中英语 作文指导Making amazing composition课件 牛津版 课件.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,Welcome to my class!,Making an amazing composition,作文题目,：假设你叫李毅,现在上高三,你的叔叔现在在美国工作,.,你觉得父母管得太严了,自己解决不了这个问题,于是发邮件给叔叔,希望他跟父母谈谈,劝说他们改变教育方式,.,要点如下,:,1.,学习上要求太高,自己达不到他们的期望值,并且经常拿自己和邻居家的孩子比,让自己很沮丧,;,2.,不准看电视,上网,;,3.,不准自己和女生交朋友,;,4.,觉得自己和父母有代沟,不能很好沟通。,注意,:1.,词数不少于,120,个字,;,2.,电子邮件的开头结尾已经写好,不计入总字数,注意：词数不少于,120,个左右；文章开头与结尾已给出，不计入总数,Dear,uncle,How are you these days?Im writing to tell you my trouble with my parents.,_,Best wishes,，,Yours,Li Yi,Step 1 Cross-question,审题,Style(,文体,):_,Person(,人称,):,第,_,人称为主,Tense(,时态）,:_,Key points:_,An email,一，三,一般现在时为主,作文题目,：假设你叫李毅,现在上高三,你的叔叔现在在美国工作,.,你觉父母管得太严了,自己解决不了这个问题,于是发邮件给叔叔,希望他跟父母谈谈,劝说他们改变教育方式,.,要点如下,:,1.,学习上要求太高,自己达不到他们的期望值,并且经常拿自己和邻居家的孩子比,让自己很沮丧,;,2.,不准看电视,上网,;,3.,不准自己和女生交朋友,;,4.,觉得自己和父母有代沟,不能很好沟通,.,注意,:1.,词数不少于,120,个字,;,2.,电子邮件的开头结尾已经写好,不计入总字数,学习上要求过高,达到某人的期望值,对,管得太严,拿,做比较,让某人沮丧,不准,某人干,阻止某人干,看电视,上网,劝某人不干,与,交朋友,与,沟通,觉得,verb.,代沟,15.,教育方式,1.expect too much of me,2.meet/reach ones expectations,be hard on sb/be strict with sb.,compare with/and/to,make sb upset/discouraged,dont allow sb to do sth,forbid sb from doing sth,watch TV,surf the Internet,discourage sb from doing sth,/persuade sb not to do sth,11.make friends with,municate with,13.sense/feel/feel like,14.a generation gap,15.the way of education,Step 2,Preparation for words and phrases,Step3 Make sentences,要点,1.,学习上期望太高，自己达不到他们的期望值,.,并且经常拿自己和邻居家的孩子比,让自己很沮丧。,1._expect too much of me.,2._not able to meet their expectation.,3._often compare me with the,neighbours children.4._ makes me upset.,Conclusion,表述要点时,确定,_,确定,_,They,Im,They,It/That,主语，人称,时态，语态,要点,2,不准看电视，上网,They dont allow me to watch TV or surf,the Internet.,Step 3 Make sentences,要点,3,不准自己跟女生交朋友,They discourage me from making friends with girls,forbid from doing,discourage from doing,prevent from doing,stop from doing,keepfrom doing,Step 3 Make sentences,温馨提示,表述要点时,所选择的词语,及短语应避免重复。,要点,4,觉得和父母有代沟，不能很好地沟通。,1.I feel that there is/exists a generation gap between parents and me .I cant communicate well with them.,Make sentences,温馨提示,遣词造句需要推敲,要点,5,自己解决不了这个问题,希望和父母谈谈,劝说他们改变教育方式,.,I cant solve the problem.I hope you can,persuade them to change the way of education.,Step 3 Make sentences,语法结构的运用,要点,1 a.,学习上期望太高，自己达不到他们的期望值,.,They expect too much of me _Im,not able to meet their expectations.,Conclusion,but,表达要点句子时,应理清句子间的,_,逻辑关系,.However,Im,;however,Im,Step4 Make amazing sentences,要点,1 b.,并且经常拿自己和邻居家的孩子比,让自己很沮丧,1.And they often compare me with the neighbours children.,It,/That,makes me upset.,Conclusion,2.And they often compare me with the neighbours,children,_makes me upset.,which,表述要点多尝试使用学过的,_,_;_,3.And what upsets me is _they often,compare me with the neighbours children.,that,定语从句和名词性从句 等,.,2,不准看电视,上网,;,不准自己跟女生交朋友。,2._,do,they discourage me,from watching TV or surfing the Internet;,_ they stop me from making friends.,Not only,but also,Conclusion,表述要点多尝试使用学过的句型。,1.They dont allow me to watch TV or surf,the Internet;_,do,they let me make,Friends with girls.,Step4 Make amazing sentences,nor,and nor do,3.They dont allow me to watch TV or surf the Internet;nor,do,they let me make friends with girls,saying_.,Step4 Make amazing sentences,it is a waste of time.,(,请补充细节,),it has a bad effect on,my study.,I am expected to,focus on my study.,温馨提示,表达要点时要,补充必要的细节,以增加句子的生动性和感染力。,Have a discussion with your partners.,4.As far as Im concerned,due,to,generation gap between parents and me,I cant communicate well with them,_,talking little but arguing a lot.,(,请补充细节,),Have a discussion with your partners.,Step4 Make amazing sentences,so that we talk little but argue a lot,Summary of writing skills,Conclusion,表述要点时,:,1.,确定主语,人称,时态,语态。,2.,理清句子间的逻辑关系。,3.,多尝试使用学过的句型。,温馨提示,1.,所选择的词语及短语应避免重复。,2.,补充必要的细节以增加句子生动性和感染力。,3.,遣词造句需推敲。,Dear Uncle,How are you these days?Im writing to tell you my trouble with my parents.,In my opinion,my parents are too strict with me.,To begin with,_,_.And_,Whats worse_,_.,_,_._,In a word,_,总,总,分述要点,_.,Now,_.,I would appreciate it if you_,_.,Im looking forward to your reply,.,Best wishes,Yours,Li Yi,参考范文,Dear Uncle,How are you these days?Im writing to tell you my trouble with my parents.,In my opinion,my parents are too strict with me.They expect too much of me,but,I really cant reach their,expectations,.,Besides,they often compare me with my,neighbours,children,which makes me rather depressed.,Whats worse,they even dont allow me to watch TV or,surf the Internet;nor,do,they let,me,make,friends with girls,saying loudly it is just a waste of time.,In,a,word,as far as Im concerned,with,a,wide,generation gap between us,we,cant,communicate well with each other,talking little but arguing a lot,.,Till,now,not knowing what I shall do,with it,I,would appreciate it,if you could,do me a favor,to talk to my parents and persuade them to change the way of education.,Im looking forward to your reply,.,Best,wishes,Yours,Li,Yi,Rome isnt built in a day,.,The more you read,，,accumulate and practise,，,the better your writing will be,！,Remember:,Homework,.at the page24,.Write a letter instead of,Li Ming concerning table,manners.,Dear Mike,Glad to receive your message.Ill tell you,Something about table manners.,If you are invited to dinner in China,try to be free at the dinner table.If you dont know how to use chopsticks,just watch other persons and follow,them.If,you still have no idea about,what to do,dont be shy to ask the person next to you.Its better to ask politely than to be uncomfortable and nervous.If you like the food,say so.You can thank the host and hostess for the meal and for their,kindness.,Hope to see you soon.,Yours,Li,ming,