高考英语书面表达专项训练课件.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,书面表达训练,请根据以下构思图，写一份关于你校植物园的英语简介：,参考词汇：植物园,botanical garden,要求：,1.,句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。,2,词数,:100,左右,写作步骤：,1.,审题,：,注重“三审”，把握解题思路,(1),审体裁,(2),审时态,(3),审人称,本篇是一篇应用文，介绍学校的植物园。,本篇的主体时态是现在时态。,根据写作着眼点不同，可以以第三人称为主，但可用第一人称，间或用第二人称。,2.,找要点：,（,1,）名称：,（,2,）历史：,（,3,）功能：,（,4,）概况：,（,5,）特色：,(6),其他：,学校植物园,20,年的历史,2008,年重建,美化校园 研究植物场所 休闲之地,校园西南角 面积,1000,平方米,各种花卉、树木、药用植物,观赏至少需要一小时,3.,提炼关键词,表达词语,连词成句。,（,1,）名称：学校植物园,表达词语：,botanical garden,连词成句：,a.There is a botanical garden in our school.,b.We have a botanical garden in our school.,（,2,）历史：,20,年的历史,2008,年重建,表达词语：,a history of 20 years,over 20 years old,20 years ago,two decades ago;,was rebuilt/built again/was set up again in 2008,连词成句：,The botanical garden is over 20 years old and was rebuilt in 2008.,Twenty years ago the botanical garden was set up and rebuilt in 2008.,Built two decades ago,the botanical garden was rebuilt in 2008.,The botanical garden has a history of 20 years and was rebuilt in 2008.,(3),功能：美化校园 研究植物场所 休闲之地,表达词语：,a.make our school more beautiful,beautify the school;,b.a place for research into plants;a place for relaxing oneself,连词成句：,a.The garden makes our school more beautiful and its fantastic place to study and learn about plants or relax for a while.,b.The garden beautifies the school and becomes a place for research into plants and for relaxing oneself.,（,4,）概况：校园西南角 面积,1000,平方米,表达词语：,西南角：,at the southwest corner/in the southwestern part of/in the southwest of;,面积：,cover(have)/spread an area of;with an area of;,1000,平方米：,1000 square meters,1000m,连词成句：,The garden is located at the southwest corner of our school,and spreads over an area of 1000m.,Located in the southwestern part of the school,the garden covers an area of 1000m.,The garden lies in the southwest of the school with an area of 1000m.,Situated in the southwestern part of the school,the garden has an area of 1000m.,(5),特色：各种花卉、树木、药用植物,表达词语：,各种：,different kinds of,different sorts of,a variety of,varieties of,various,various kinds of,药用植物：,herbs,medical plants,plants for medicine,连词成句：,There are different kinds of flowers,trees and herbs in the garden.,The garden contains a variety of/varieties of/various flowers,trees and herbs.,There are varieties of flowers,trees and medical plants in the botanical garden.,Various beautiful flowers boom,trees and herbs grow in the botanical garden.,(6),其他：观赏至少需要一小时,表达词语：,观赏：,view and admire,enjoy the sight of,需要：,need,，,spend,take,cost,连词成句：,We students need at least an hour to enjoy the sight of the garden.,We spend at least one hour in viewing and enjoying the garden.,It takes us at least an hour to visit the botanical garden.,It is worthwhile to spend one hour visiting the garden and enjoying its beautiful scenery.,4.,依写作要求，添加关联词，连句成篇,Our school has a botanical garden at its southwest corner.The garden has a history of 20 years and covers an area of 1000 m.Besides,it was rebuilt in 2008 and now there are a variety of beautiful flowers,trees and herbs there.And it makes our school more beautiful/beautifies our school and has made it a better place for us students to do research into plants and relax ourselves.If the garden appeals to you,you may find it attractive and will spend at least an hour in viewing and enjoying the garden.,范文,Located at the southwest corner of our school,the botanical garden covers over an area of approximately 1000 m.The garden is over 20 years old and was rebuilt in 2008.As you walk through the garden,you can see various kinds of beautiful flowers,trees and herbs.If youre planning to explore the garden,set aside at least one hour.The garden makes our school more beautiful and its a fantastic place for students to study and learn more about plants or simply to relax for a while.,优秀作品欣赏,Thank you!,Thank you!,