高中二年级英语必修5第一课时课件.ppt

,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,书面表达,-A letter of giving advice,写作要点：,1.,建议信：,作者就,有关问题,进行,分析,并针对这些问题提出自己的,看法和建议,。,2.,对象：,1,）,写给,个人,，就其遇到的,某个问题,提出自己的,看法和观点,；,2,）,写给,某个组织和机构,，就改进其服务提出,建议或忠告,。,3.,基本框架：,开头（,beginning,）,-,开门见山，向对方陈述自己的观点,.(state your idea),主体,(body)-,对所提出的问题进行分析并说明理由，接着提出自己的建议,(reasons and evidence),结尾,(ending)-,呼应开头，重申观点,(restate your opinion.),4.,注意事项：,1,）,建议信要写出写信的,原因,，建议的,内容,，提出建议的,理由,，提出的,理由要入情入理,，语气一定要,礼貌当先,。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。,2,）,建议的,角度要多样化,，避免重复。可从政治、经济、文化、伦理、法律以及个人等多角度给出建议。,3,）,符合英文信件的,基本格式,常用套语,A,建议信开头常用句式,(,照应材料,表明写作意图,),1,I am very glad to hear that you want to,2,I know you have trouble in,after reading your letter.,3.I am writing to you for the purpose of,4.I am writing to share some advice with you.,5.You have asked me for my advice about,English learning,.,B.,表达建议（,body,）,1.firstly secondly,then,，,after that,，,in the end,finally,meanwhile,whats more.,2.I think it would be more helpful if you could,3.If I were you,I would,4.In my opinion,it would be wise to take the following action.,C.,建议信结尾常用句式,1.I believe you will take my advice into consideration.,2.I hope you will find these suggestions useful/helpful.,3.I would appreciate it if you could consider my suggestions.,4.In the end,I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful.,书面表达如何写？,三个步骤,Step1.List the key points,Step2.Make sentences,Step3.Form a passage and polish,如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象,整体三部分,Heading,点题；一两个句子；概括性；暗示性,2.Body,中心记述部分；层次分明,3.Ending,小结；呼应主题,注意衔接词使用,:,表先后次序：,first,second,third.finally,firstly,secondly,，,finally,to begin with/to start with,at last,递进关系：,furthermore,moreover,；,not only.but also.,；,besides,；,in other words,；,on the one hand.,，,on the other hand.,；,meanwhile,；,at the same time,；,模板：,Dear _(,对象,),，,I am writing to express my views concerning _(,问题,).,First,，,_(,建议一,);in addition,_(,建议二,);,whats more,，,_(,建议三,).,I hope youll find these proposals useful.,Yours sincerely,Li Ming,假定你是李华,你的英国朋友,Peter,来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文,.,请你根据下列要点写回信,.,要点,:1.,参加中文学习班,;2.,看中文书刊、电视；,3.,学唱中文歌曲；,4.,交中国朋友。注意：,1.,词数,100,左右；,2.,可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；,3.,开头语已为你写好。,Dear Peter,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.,Dear Peter,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.Here are a few suggestions.First,it is important to take a Chinese course,as youll be able to learn from the teacher,and practice with your fellow,students.Then,it also helps to watch TV and read books,newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.Besides,it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs,because by doing so,youll learn and remember Chinese words more easily.You can also make more Chinese friends.They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.Try and write me in Chinese next time.,