高三英语二轮复习 第二篇 分类写作1 邀请信课件.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,*,分类写作,一、邀请信,第二篇 分类写作,本书所有作文题的写作要求相同，为了避免累赘，不再每篇附上。统一附注如下：,1.,词数,100,左右；,2.,可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；,3.,不得出现真实的姓名及学校名称；,4.,如果有提供开头语或结束语，或者两者都有，所给内容不计入总词数；,5.,答案必须写在答题卡相应的位置上。,the nursing home,敬老院,show our respect,表现我们的尊敬,gain a better understanding,获得更好的理解,a romantic story,一个浪漫故事,sincerely,真诚地,be familiar with,对,熟悉,art gallery,艺术馆,judge,裁判,speech contest,演讲比赛,【必备词语】,deliver ones speech,做演讲,is convenient for sb./,sth,.,对,方便,locate,位于,promote students interest,提高学生的兴趣,theme,主题,participant,参与者，选手,compete with sb.,和某人竞争比赛,feel honored,觉得荣幸,dragon boat racing,龙舟赛,training camp,训练营,【必备词语】,1.Im now writing on behalf of the classmates to invite you to come and attend it,if you can spare the time.,我代表同学写信邀请您来参加，如果您能抽出时间的话。,2.Im sure that youll have a good time staying with us.,我相信您会和我们一起度过愉快的时光。,3.Looking forward to your coming.,期待着您的到来。,4.We would feel much honored if you could come.,如果您能来，我们会觉得非常荣幸。,【好句朗诵】,5.If you have any suggestions,please let us know.,如果您有任何建议，请告诉我们。,6.I sincerely invite you to watch the show because.,我诚挚地邀请您来看演出，因为,7.You can reach me through my phone number 44876655 at your convenience.,您可以在您方便的时候打我的电话，号码是,44876655,。,8.I wonder if youd like to go with me.,我想知道您是否想和我一起去。,【好句朗诵】,1.We hope you will accept our invitation if it is convenience for you.,1.convenience,改为,convenient,2.Let me know as soon as possible that you are able to come or not.,2.that,改为,whether/if,【单句改错】,每句只有一个错误,3.Since you are such eager to improve your English,it will prove to be a great chance.,3.such,改为,so,4.Ive read in the paper about a five-days tour,which I think suits you,so now Id like to recommend it to you.,4.five-days,改为,five-day,5.CCTY is inviting foreign students to perform at the Spring Festival Gala,that will be held at CCTV Station on the evening of February 9,the Chinese New Years Eve.,5.that,改为,which,【单句改错】,每句只有一个错误,6.Please let me to know as soon as possible so that I can make some arrangements.,6.,删掉,to,7.Im writing to tell you well have an English Corner active which will take place in the library on Saturday afternoon.,7.active,改为,activity,8.We have never been abroad ago,so we are very interested in what it is like in your country.,8.ago,改为,before,【单句改错】,每句只有一个错误,9.This is Li,Hua,a monitor of Class Two,Grade Three of,GuangMing,High School.,9.,删掉,a,10.Therefore,to make it a success,we would like to invite you to be our guide,give us some help with our spoken English.,10.give,改为,giving,；或,give,前加,and,【单句改错】,每句只有一个错误,【,2012,全国,2,卷：邀请外教参加生日聚会,】,假定你是李华。你班同学决定为小明举办生日聚会。请你写信邀请外教,Susan,参加，要点包括：,1.,时间：周五晚,8,点至,9,点,2.,地点：学生俱乐部,3.,内容：生日歌、蛋糕、游戏等,4.,要求：备小礼物,【真题满分佳作赏析】,满分佳作（一）,Hi,Susan,Were throwing a surprise party for,Xiaomings,birthday.,Just as the name suggests,the party is still kept a secret from him.This Friday evening,well gather at the Students Club at 8 pm to celebrate his 18th birthday.,Im now writing on behalf of the classmates to invite you to come and attend it,if you can spare the time.,The details of the celebration,which will last about an hour until 9 pm,are as follows.,At the start,the candle will be lighted and well sing“Happy Birthday”together for him,after which well enjoy the birthday cake and have fun together,playing games and singing songs.,Im sure that youll have a good time staying with us.,Looking forward to your coming.,Yours,Li,Hua,满分赏析,Just as the name suggests(,正如名字所说一样,),，语言运用地道，很自然地引出细节。,用到,Im now writing on behalf ofto(,我代表,写信,),，句式高级地道，点明写信目的；,if you can spare the time,又显示出交际中的礼貌，十分得体。,用到了,which,引导的定语从句；,are as follows,也是很好的引出列举的主题句。注意：,follows,不要漏了,s,，否则效果会归零。,用,after which,介词提前的定语从句和,playing games and singing songs,现在分词短语，有效地把信息整合在一起，句式显得高级，句法复杂度高。,本句是作者添加的细节，详略得当，内容合适。,满分佳作（二）,Hi,Susan,Were throwing a surprise party for,Xiaomings,birthday.,As scheduled,all the classmates in our class will gather at the Students Centre at 8 pm this Friday evening to celebrate,Xiaomings,birthday.We would feel much honored if you could come and enjoy it,which is to finish at 9,lasting an hour.As the party starts,we will light the candles and sing“Happy Birthday”for him.Then the birthday cake will be presented and cut for all of us to enjoy,following which well sing songs and play some small games.Whats more,as a surprise,well all prepare some secret birthday gifts for him,and itll be great to see how surprised he will be seeing the gifts.As its a surprise party,he will know nothing about it beforehand,and we do hope that you could manage to attend it.,Looking forward to your coming.,Yours,Li,Hua,满分赏析,We would feel much honored if you could,，语气委婉礼貌，句式高级，用,would,和,could,的过去式更体现出客气语气；且用到了,which,引导的定语从句和,lasting,现在分词，体现句法能力。,following which,是一大亮点，现在分词短语中包含一句定语从句。,用,whats more,连接自然，条理清楚；用,and,有效地整合了信息。,本句是自己添加的内容合适，且用,do,强调，更显邀请的诚意。,这是写信的必备用语，必须做到零差错。,【,2007,湖北卷改编：邀请国际学生慰问老人,】,作文原题,假设你是某中学学生会主席李华，你校与本地一所国际学校经常举办联谊活动，你计划在重阳节组织学生到养老院去慰问老人，拟邀请国际学校的学生参加。请根据以下内容要点给国际学校的学生会主席,Tony,写一封信。,要点：向老人赠送礼物,(,鲜花、自制贺卡,),；,为老人提供服务,(,做清洁、陪老人聊天,),；,为老人表演节目,(,唱歌、跳舞,),。,【模仿翻译】,作文翻译,亲爱的,Tony,，,重阳，中国传统的老人节日，即将到来。我们计划去敬老院庆祝这特别的日子，我们也想邀请你们学校的学生加入我们。,我们计划了几项活动。当我们到达那里时，我们会分小组在老人们的房间拜访他们，给他们送花和自制的卡片，以表达我们的尊重和爱。然后，我们会在护士的帮助下为他们搞清洁和洗刷。,因为有些老人觉得孤单，我们可以和他们聊他们以前的日子、我们城市的变化、或者他们感兴趣的任何事情。我们也可以给他们一些表演，例如唱歌、跳舞等等。,我坚信我们都会对中国的老年人有更好的理解。如果你有任何建议，请让我知道。,期待着你及早的回复。,你的,，,李华,Dear Tony,Chongyang,the traditional Chinese festival for the elderly,is coming around.We are planning to visit the Nursing Home to celebrate the special day,and we would like to invite students from your school to join us.,We have planned several activities.When we get there,we will visit the elderly in their rooms in groups,presenting them with flowers and self-made cards to show our respect and love.Then we will do some cleaning and washing for them with the help of the nurses.,As some old people feel lonely,we may chat with them about their old days,changes of our city,or anything they are interested in.We may also give them some performances,such as singing,dancing,and so on.,I am sure we will both gain a better understanding of the elderly in China.,If you have any suggestions,please let us know.,Looking forward to your early reply.,Yours,Li,Hua,【,2012,天津卷改编：邀请美国朋友观看演出,】,作文原题,假设你是李华，你的美国朋友,Chris,就读于天津某国际学校。他熟悉中国文化，特别是戏曲文化。,8,月,5,日下午,2,：,00,在新落成的天津大剧院将上演越剧,梁山伯与祝英台,。请你根据以下提示，用英语给,Chris,写一封电子邮件，邀请他一起观看演出。,1.,提出邀请并简述原因；,2.,提出观剧后活动建议（如参观附近的博物馆或美术馆等）；,3.,请求对方回复。,参考词汇：越剧：,Shaoxing,Opera,梁山伯与祝英台,Butterfly Lovers,天津大剧院,Tianjin Grand Theater,作文翻译,亲爱的,Chris,我有好消息告诉你。,8,月,5,日下午,2,：,00,在新落成的天津大剧院将上演越剧,梁山伯与祝英台,。它是关于中国的一个浪漫故事，典型的中国文化。我诚挚地邀请你去观看演出，因为你熟悉中国文化，特别是戏曲文化。,看完演出后，我们计划安排一些其他的活动。例如，我们可以参观附近的博物馆或美术馆，以便了解更多中国文化和艺术。,如果你有任何建议，请尽快联系我。我期待着你的答复。,你的,李华,Dear Chris,I have good news to tell you.,There will be staged,Shaoxing,Opera“Butterfly Lovers”in new Tianjin Grand Theatre at 2 p.m.on August 5.It is about a Chinese romantic story,typical of Chinese culture.I sincerely invite you to watch the show because you are familiar with Chinese culture,especially Chinese opera culture.,After watching the show,we plan to arrange some other activities.For example,we can visit the nearby museums or art galleries in order to know much more about Chinese culture and art.,If you have any suggestions,please contact me as soon as possible.Im looking forward to your reply.,Yours,Li,Hua,【,2015,新课标,2,卷：邀请外教去敬老院,】,假如你是李华，计划和同学去敬老院,(nursing home),陪老人们过重阳节,(the Double Ninth Festival),。请给外教露西写封邮件，邀她一同前往，内容包括：,1.,出发及返回时间；,2.,活动：包饺子、表演节目等。,Dear Lucy,.,Looking forward to your reply.,Yours,Li,Hua,e,【全真考场】,【2015,新课标,2,卷：邀请外教去敬老院,】,Dear Lucy,Id like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival.It is the day for the elderly in our culture.Well go and make dumplings and cakes with the elderly people there.Well also spend some fun time together singing,dancing and playing games,which we hope will make them happy.We should be back around 4 oclock in the afternoon.If you are able to come with us,please let us know and well wait for you at the gate at 9 in the morning.,Looking forward to your reply.,Yours,Li,Hua,【,2010,全国,1,卷：邀请外教做比赛评委,】,假设你是育才中学学生会主席李华。你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛,(speech contest),。希望附近某大学的外籍教师,Smith,女士来做评委。请参照以下比赛通知给她写一封信。,英语演讲比赛主题：人与自然时间：,6,月,15,日下午,2:00,5:00,地点：,501,教室参赛选手：,10,名学生联系人：李华（电话,44876655,）欢迎大家光临,内容要点：,1.,自我介绍,2.,邀请做评委,3.,演讲主题,4.,比赛时间,5.,参赛选手,6.,联系方式,Dear Ms.Smith,With best wishes,Li,Hua,【2010,全国,1,卷：邀请外教做比赛评委,】,Dear Ms.Smith,This is Li,Hua,President of the Student Union of,Yucai,Middle School,which is located near the university where you,re teaching.I,m writing to see if we could have the honor to ask you to be a judge in our coming competition.,You see,to promote students,interest in learning English,we,ve planned to hold an English speech competition,the theme of which is,“,Man and Nature,”,.It will begin at two on the afternoon of June 15th,lasting three hours.There will be ten participants competing with each other in Classroom 501.,We would feel much honored if you could join us.You can reach me through my phone number 44876655 at your convenience.Looking forward to your reply.,With best wishes.,Li,Hua,【,2015,北京卷改编：邀请美国朋友参加龙舟训练营,】,假如你是红星中学高三学生李华，请给你的美国朋友,Jim,写一封信，告诉他你打算参加龙舟训练营，希望他一起参加，邮件的内容包括：,1.,介绍训练营的相关内容（例如；时间，地点，参加者等）；,2.,说明你打算参加的原因；,3.,询问对方的意向。,参考词汇：龙舟训练营,Dragon Boat Training Camp,Dear Jim,Yours,Li,Hua,【2015,北京卷改编：邀请美国朋友参加龙舟训练营,】,Dear Jim,I,m writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holiday.As the dragon boat racing is a typical activity in the Dragon Boat Festival,I want to join a Dragon Boat Training Camp.I wonder if you,d like to go with me.,This camp will open on July 20,th,.It offers teenagers like you and me a chance to enjoy sports and learn about Chinese culture.If you are interested in it,please let me know and I,ll send you more information.,Hope to meet you at the training camp this summer.,Yours,Li,Hua,Thank You!,