十月份调研课.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,How to improve your writing,I.Read the following sentences written by your classmates and,make corrections if necessary.,1.Yuelu Academy is in the west of the Xiang River,near,Yuelu,Mountain.,(By Renming),2.The academy is locate in Changsha of Hunan Province,(By Peng Hangxiang),3.It is one of the four famous academy.,(By Hunei),4.The academy was found in Song Dynasty.,(By Yonghao),to,located,academies,founded,Cooperate and research,5.It covered an area of 21,000 square meters.,(By Peng Hangxiang),6.It is the largest and best keeping academy.,(By Guo Jinrun),7.It name as a one-thousand-year-old academy.,(By Li Haopin),8.Today,the academy have many academic researches to do.,(By Hunei),covers,preserved,is,named/called,has,Try to write in accurate English,and avoid making any mistake!,What is the common feature of the following groups,of sentences?,1.A)Yuelu Academy,is located in,Changsha,Hunan Province.,(By Peng Yaobin),B)Yuelu Academy,lies in,Changsha,the capital of Hunan,Province.,(By Long Fengni),C)Yuelu Academy,stands in,Changsha,Hunan Province.,(By Zhou Huiming),2.A)Yuelu Academy,was set up,in Song Dynasty.,(By Li Haopin),B)The academy,was founded,in Song Dynasty.,(By Long Fengni),C)The academy,was built,in Song Dynasty.,(By Zhouhuiming),A)It,covers an area of,21,000 square meters.,(By Peng Yaobin),B),Its about,21,000 square meters.(,By Mao Runquan),C)It,has an area of,21,000 square meters.,4.A)It,has several areas,such as,a teaching area,a book,storage area and a garden area.,(By Yonghao),B)It,is divided into three parts,like,a teaching area,(By Long Fengni),C)It,consists of,a teaching area,a library and a garden.,(By Li Haopin),5.A)Today,the academy is still,taking the task of,academic,researches and,creating,a new chapter of its history.,(By Wangli),B)The academy is still,undertaking the mission of,academic,researches and,writing,a new historic chapter.,(By Peng Hanxiang),C)The academy is still,playing an important role in,academic,researches and,opening,a new chapter of its history.,(By Long Fengni),Try to enlarge your vocabulary and learn to use different words or phrases to express the same thing.,Assess and conclude,III,.,Read and compare the following two writing,pieces,:,Task 1 Correct the mistakes you have found.,Task 2,Which one do you like better?And why?,A writing piece:,Yuelu Academy,1,The famous Yuelu Academy is located in Changsha.It,was built in Song Dynasty.Its about 21,000 square meters,and,divide,into many different parts like a teaching area,a,library and gardens.Now,Yuelu Academy is proud as a one-,thousand-year academy.Many generations wisdom,make,up its glory.And now it,continue,its duty of academic,research,and,open,a new chapter of our colorful history.,divided,makes,continues,opening,By Mao Runquan,A writing piece:,Yuelu Academy,2,West of the Xiang River and east of the Yuelu Mountain stands Yuelu Academy,which is one of the four ancient,academys,.,The Yuelu Academy was built in Song Dynasty covering an area of approximately 21,000 square meters.It has several sections including lecturing,storage,and gardens.,It is because the government has attached great importance to the academy that up to now it has been preserved,perfect,and it is,wildly,recognized as a one-,thousand-year-old academy.,Today it still shoulders the responsibility of academic researches,writing a new chapter of its history.,academies,perfectly,widely,By Longxiang,(Try to use more grammatical structures and a variety of sentence patterns.),运用多种语法结构，句式灵活多变，可以使文章增色不少。,Conclusion:,I.Try to write in accurate English and avoid making,any mistake!,II.Try to enlarge your vocabulary and learn to use,different words or phrases to express the same thing.,III.Try to use more grammatical structures and a variety of sentence patterns.,Writing Practice:Introduce Our School,要点提示（可适当发挥）,1.,长沙铁路第一中学位于芙蓉区，创建于,1958,年，,1999,年成为了,省重点,中学。,2.,学校校园总面积,44.18,亩,漂亮的校园,3.,学校里有许多的优秀老师，其中我们班的,_,老师,Consolidate,