英语作文公开课.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,Unit,7,My life in 20 years.,No.4 Middle School,Zhao,Weiwei,Lets watch,viedos,.,1.Do you like the life in the video,s?,2.Why or why not?,3.Is the life the same as yours?,Some questions,3a,Dead Jills answer to the question“What will your life be like in the future?”Fill in the blanks with the words in the box.,meet work live look keep wear more less fewer take,In 20 years,I think Ill be a newspaper reporter.Ill _in Shanghai,because there will be_ jobs in that city.As a reporter,I think I will _ lots of,interesting people,so Ill have,more friends.,live,more,meet,Ill have _ pets,though,because Ill have _ free,time.And my apartment will,be no good for pets because itll,be too small.So Ill probably just,_a bird.During the week,Ill_ smart clothes.On the weekend,Ill_ less smart but Ill be more comfortable.In the future,people will _more so theyll probably have fewer vacations,but I think,Ill _ a holiday in Hong,kong,when possible.One day Ill even go to Australia.,fewer,less,keep,wear,work,take,look,neighborhood,job,free time activities,house,family,My life in 20 years,Lets talk about the life in 20 years.,job,house,family,free time,activities,neighborhood,Do you have some good ideas or good expressions?,Discussion,Topic,Pamer,imagination,Job,House,Family,Free time,activities,Neighborhood,.,Give a report about your jobs/houses/families,ending,The things we,shoud,do now.,My life in 20 years,S,tructure,+,You can choose three or four.,A 6-star article,Assessment:How many stars can it get?,All about the topic (,围绕主题,),Good structure (,结构合理,),Rich expression (,丰富表达,),Conjunctions&associated words,(,使用连词和关联词,),Correct spelling (,拼写正确,),Good handwriting (,书写优美,),Useful,sentences,First of all,Im going to be a .,beause,I.So I will,I will have a house,and,I love.,so I,will have.every day.And I will with,In my free time,I will Because I like/I am good at,There,will be .in my neighborhood.I will,This is.What about yours?,In a word,Thats all.,In 20 years,I think I will,_,_,Write,about your life 20 years from now.,Useful,sentences,First of all,Im going to be a .,beause,I.So I will,I will have a house,and,I love.,so I,will have.every day.And I will with,In my free time,I will Because I like/I am good at,There,will be .in my neighborhood.I will,This is.What about yours?,In a word,Thats all.,Assessment:How many stars can you get?,All about the topic (,围绕主题,),Good structure (,结构合理,),Rich expression (,丰富表达,),Conjunctions&associated words,(,使用连词和关联词,),Correct spelling (,拼写正确,),Good handwriting (,书写优美,),Correction,Love my life,Love my work,Love my family,Love myself,Have a dream,Please work hard and try your best!,future,Self-edit your own writing according to the writing evaluation table.,依据写作评价表对自己的文章进行自评。,2.After self-editing,revise your drafts.,自评完成后对草稿有针对性地加以修改。,Homework,