2025年初三英语英语书面表达汇编试题和解析及解析.doc

初三英语英语书面体现汇编试题(有答案和解析)及解析

一、中考英语书面体现汇编
1．（·北京中考模拟）（题文）假如你是中学生李华，你美国笔友 Jim 一周前给你发了电子邮件，问询你暑假里旅游计划及其他安排， 但由于某种原因你没有及时答复。请根据如下要点给他回封邮件： 没有及时答复原因, 你打算去哪儿旅游，以及你暑假其他安排。
提醒词语: exams, go on a trip， volunteer， visit some museums
提醒问题： • Why didn’t you reply to Jim’s email in time?
• Where do you plan to travel?
• What are your other plans for the summer holiday?

To: Jim
From: Li Hua
Subject: A plan
Dear Jim,
I'm terribly sorry I couldn't reply to your email in time because __________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

【答案】Dear Jim
I'm terribly sorry I couldn't reply to your email in time because I was busy preparing for the
exams.
I will go on a trip to Sichuan, where there are a great number of places of interest. I promise
to send you some wonderful photos then.
I’m going to do something meaningful during the coming summer holiday. First, I plan to do
some volunteer work in my community. Second, I’ll visit some museums to learn more
knowledge.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】这篇作文规定我们以李华身份给自已美国笔友Jim写信，内容包括：你没有及时答复他邮件原因；你暑假打算去哪里旅行以及暑假里其他安排。写作时，我们应根据题目给出这些内容要点，组织语言，体现清晰。首先应注意内容完整，要包含题目中规定所有要点，题目只是列出了一种提纲，没有规定要学生写什么，因此详细写作内容需要学生们自已来发挥，理由要充足、合理，暑假安排要符合平常生活和学生身份。另一方面注意使用对英语句式来体现。通过度析可知，这篇短文讲是暑假计划，应重要使用一般未来时态，be going to构造或者will+动词原形都可以。保证句式精确，注意英语体现习惯和汉语不一样，不能逐词翻译。使用简单句构造，点缀并列句和复合句，长短句结合，使文章富有节奏感。语句之间使用恰当连接成分，使上下文意连贯。
点睛：这是一篇优秀作文。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目规定所有要点。短文共分三段，第一段简介了自已没有及时答复邮件原因，用了一句话简洁、明了。第二段简介是自已旅行计划；第三段是暑假其他安排。整篇文章构造安排合理，层次清晰，内容充实。另一方面短文中使用了对时态和人称，语法规范、精确，句式体现符合英语习惯。文章中简单句和复合句交叉使用，长短句结合，句式不单调，有节奏感。如I'm terribly sorry I couldn't reply to your email in time because I was busy preparing for the exams.这个长句，使用了宾语从句和原因状语从句；再如I will go on a trip to Sichuan, where there are a great number of places of interest.中使用了定语从句。尚有某些很好句型和短语，如be busy doing sth, promise to do sth., do something meaningful, plan to do sth.以及to learn more knowledge等等。整篇文章体现流畅，意思连贯。

2．（·河北育华中学中考模拟）你有无由于没能好好管理时间而影响了学习经历?请你写一篇文章谈谈这件事及你见解。
内容包括：1.你没完毕学习任务经历（事情，原因及后果）；2.针对怎样管理好时间给出几点提议。
作文规定：1.短文须包括所有提醒内容，可合适发挥。2.文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名。
3.词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Once, I couldn't make good use of time and it had a bad influence on my study.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Once, I couldn't make good use of time and it had a bad influence on my study.
I had an experience like this. Last weekend, my good friend, Jim taught me how to play a kind of computer game. It was interesting. So I spent more time on it. I forgot to do my homework in the end. My teachers and parents were angry with me. I was also upset.
How to make good use of our time? I think we should make a weekday plan. We should write what we are going to do on the paper, mark the deadline of each thing clearly and put the paper up somewhere we can see it easily. It can help us to remember what we have to do next.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如make good use of，last weekend，how to do，play a game，a kind of，spent more time on，forget to do，in the end，be angry with，be going to do，on the paper，put up等。而特殊非谓语动词构造Jim taught me how to play a kind of computer game.和I think we should make a weekday plan. /We should write what we are going to do on the paper, mark the deadline of each thing clearly and put the paper up somewhere we can see it easily. /It can help us to remember what we have to do next.等复杂从句构造运用，丰富了短文内容，使体现多样化，是本文亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记某些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以合适引用，使文章体现更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
【点睛】
书面体现题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥作文。它规定将所规定材料内容经整理后展开思维，考察运用所学英语知识精确体现意思能力。因此，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自已熟悉单词、短语和句式，尽量使用高级词汇和较复杂句式构造以便得到较高分数。

3．（·贵州遵义十一中中考模拟）亲爱同学们，初中生活即将结束，你们一定有诸多感触.假如你是Tony,名城中学九（1）班学生。请以 My junior high school life为题,写一篇80词左右短文。
提醒：
1.个人基本状况简介
2.校园（校园洁净而漂亮，活动非富多彩）；老师（传授知识，教会做人,常常鼓励）；同学（和睦相处，互相学习，共同进步）。
3.对学校、老师、同学体现感谢和祝福。
规定：
1. 文章包含以上提醒内容，合适发挥。
2.文中不能出现真实校名和人名。
【答案】My junior high school life
My name is Tony. I am studying in Grade 9.As time goes by, my colorful junior middle school life is coming to an end. I’m glad to tell you something about my school life.
Our campus is clean and beautiful, and there are all kinds of activities. Our teachers teach us rich knowledge and how to behave ourselves. They also encourage us to work hard. We all get on well with our classmates. Besides, we learn from each other and make progress together.
I thanks for my school, my teachers and my classmates. Wish them better.
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇给材料作文，简介我初中生活。
【详解】
结合所给材料，可知本文重要考察一般目前时和一般未来时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子构造重要为系表构造和动宾构造，注意某些常见句式应用，例如：My name is……，I’m glad to……，Our campus is……，Our teachers teach us……等句式应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意论述次序，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】
本文构造紧凑，语言简洁。开头简介了我个人状况，接下来简介我们校园，老师和同学，最终对学校、老师、同学体现感谢和祝福。此处go by, come to an end, tell sb about sth, all kinds of, behave oneself, encourage sb to do sth, get on with, learn from, make progress等这些词组运用也让文章增色不少。

4．（·甘肃中考模拟）近年来，各大都市雾霾（haze）状况越来越严重，整个国家空气污染状况令人担忧。请分析空气污染现象，原因，应对措施，写一份英文倡议书，呼吁大家保护环境，减少对空气污染。
要点提醒：
（1）我国空气污染现象。（至少写2点）
（2） 空气污染产生原因。（至少写2点）
（3）减少空气污染措施。（至少写2点）
规定：
（1） 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
（2） 文中不能出现自已姓名和所在学校名称。
Dear students ,
As we all know , hazy days have been influencing our lives a lot in recent years . That warns us of the serious airpollution____________________________________________________________________________

【答案】Dear students,
As we all know, hazy days have been influencing our lives a lot in recent years. That warns us of the serious air pollution. Big factories, power plants and cars all can cause air pollution. For example, chemicals in the smoke from power stations cause a lot of damage. Besides, the people's activities are also the sources of air pollution such as throwing the rubbish and smoking. What's more, the more trees are cut down, the less polluted air can absorb. Air pollution is becoming more and more serious, so we should take some measures such as planting more trees and stop factories from sending out waste air, what's more, we had better walk or take a bus. Protecting the environment is our duty. Everyone should play a part in saving the earth.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇材料作文，根据材料中有关信息简介一下整个国家空气污染状况。所提供材料中列举了近年来，各大都市雾霾（haze）状况越来越严重，重要从空气污染现象，原因，应对措施三个方面去简介。时态为一般目前时。注意作文中必须包含材料上所有信息，并合适发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用我们熟悉句子或短语。语法要对，体现要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中合适使用连词，注意上下文联络紧密，符合逻辑关系，体现具有条理性。
【高分句型一】
We had better walk or take a bus. 我们最佳步行或乘公共汽车。这里had better表达最佳，背面跟动词原形，take a bus表达乘公共汽车。
【高分句型二】
Protecting the environment is our duty. 保护环境是我们职责。这里Protecting the environment 做主语，用是动词ing形式。

5．（·北京中考模拟）假如你是李华，你们学校准备组织学生本周五去北京世园会参观。你打算邀请外教 Peter参与。请用英语写一封电子邮件，告诉他集合时间和地点，在那里可以做什么，以及参观时需要准备什么。
提醒词语： school gate, nature, culture, food and drink
提醒问题： ●When and where are you going to meet?
●What are you going to do there?
●What do you advise Peter to prepare for the visit?
Dear Pete,
How is it going?
I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition in Yanqing.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua

【答案】
Dear Peter，
How is it going?
I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition. We will meet at the school gate at 7:00 a.m. this Friday. Then we will go to Beijing International Horticulture Exposition together. We can do a lot of things there. We can not only enjoy the special and beautiful plants but also learn different cultures in various indoor or outdoor shows. We plan to stay there for a whole day. You'd better wear a pair of comfortable sports shoes and take some food and drinks with you.
I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours, Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
1. 题干解读：这是一篇给材料作文，属于应用文写作。本文已经给出了重要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，写作中，应注意描述全面性，尽量将提醒内容运用上；提醒问题就是写作基本方向，然后围绕要点合适发挥即可。

2. 例文点评：文章采用邮件格式，时态以一般未来时态为主。语言表述应当符合语法构造，语言精确，语意连贯，体现清晰，具有逻辑性。

3. 高分亮点：
短语：school gate；invite sb. to do；a lot of；plan to do。
句型：not only…but also；You'd better …；I'm looking forward to…。

6．（·山东中考模拟）书面体现
下图描述了李明和家人去年五一假期（May Day Holiday）外出旅游经历。请根据图片提醒，用英语写一篇100词左右短文。

规定：1. 完整论述图片内容，可合适发挥；
2. 结合自已实际状况陈说个人观点或给出提议。
【答案】Last May Day holiday, Li Ming and his family went to Qingdao seaside. They paid a visit to Qingdao by bus. There are many places of interest in Qingdao. They went to the beach, visited the Museum. But there were many people on the beach. What you see at the seaside is not the scenery, but the numerous shaking heads. At the seaside, people don't pay attention to hygiene. There's rubbish everywhere. In my opinion, when traveling, people should not only pay attention to safety, but also pay attention to hygiene and not throw rubbish everywhere. We should avoid the rush hour and choose some unknown places.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇看图作文，根据图片内容简介一下李明和家人去年五一假期（May Day Holiday）外出旅游经历。重要是要完整论述图片内容、结合自已实际状况陈说个人观点或给出提议。时态为一般过去时，人称为第三人称。在陈说个人观点或给出提议时用一般目前时来写。注意作文中必须包含图片上所有信息，并合适发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用我们熟悉句子或短语。语法要对，体现要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中合适使用连词，注意上下文联络紧密，符合逻辑关系，体现具有条理性。
【高分句型一】
What you see at the seaside is not the scenery, but the numerous shaking heads. 你在海边看到不是风景，而是无数晃动头。句子What you see at the seaside做主语。
【高分句型二】
In my opinion, when traveling, people should not only pay attention to safety, but also pay attention to hygiene and not throw rubbish everywhere. 在我看来，旅行时，人们不仅要注意安全，还要注意卫生，不要到处乱扔垃圾。该句话运用了not only…but also…。

7．（·重庆一中中考模拟）书面体现。
“开心是暑假如期而至；期望是我们独自旅行；烦恼是父母不予支持。我们，可以独自出游么？”这是本月我校英语“烦恼墙”上最令人关注内容，并引起了大家热烈讨论。同为青少年你觉得在没有父母陪伴下出游可行吗？请你按规定写一篇英语作文。
参照要点：
1. 解读“烦恼墙”内容；
2. 陈说你观点及理由；
3. 提出合理有关提议。
规定：
1. 词数80-120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不能出现自已真实姓名和所在学校名称。
Can Teenagers Take a Trip Alone?
Nowadays, there is a message on the Trouble Wall attracting most of the students’ attention.
______________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Can Teenagers Take a Trip Alone?
Nowadays, there is a message on the Trouble Wall attracting most of the students’ attention. The summer vacation is coming, and we hope to take a trip alone, but our parents don’t allowed us to do that, what should we do then? I like to travel to different places with my friends, so in my opinion, teenagers should be allowed to travel by ourselves. Here are my reasons.
Firstly, we can see the beautiful scenery and get to know the different cultures. Secondly, our parents are too busy, so it’s difficult for them to accompany us all the time, we have to learn to look after ourselves. Traveling is a good way to train our self-care capacity. But we need to get ready to deal with something unusual that may happen during the trip. But considering the safety, we must make plans in advance. Take notes of some important self-help knowledge. All in all, traveling alone is good.
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇话题议论文。
【详解】
英语作文一般分为三部分：
第一部分：阐明论点。解读“烦恼墙”内容并陈说自已观点——青少年应当被容许独自旅行。
第二部分：主体部分。分条逐一阐明理由并提出合理有关提议。
第三部分：再次重申论点。

8．（·浙江中考模拟）今年我国初次将高考作弊列入刑事惩罚，称为史上最严高考．此事引起社会广泛关注．作为一名中学生，请你根据如下提醒，就"学生考试作弊"这一话题，谈谈自已见解．
作弊行为
携带纸条或电子产品
作弊原因
努力不够，想考好；…
你观点
…

规定：
1．词数80-100；开头已给出，但不计入总词数．
2．文中不能出现自已姓名和所在学校名称及其他有关信息，否则不予评分．
3．参照词汇：exam-room 考室exam-cheating 考试作弊 electronic products 电子产品 micro-earphones 微型耳机 competing environment竞争环境
It's very common for students to cheat in the exams．This year,our country has passed a law that fights against this kind of law-broken behavior．It is reported that …_______
【答案】It's very common for students to cheat in the exams．This year，our country has passed a law that fights against this kind of law-broken behavior．It's reported that some students carry some important information or notes into the exam-room．Some students copy others' answers．What's more，others use electronic products，such as mobile phones，micro-earphones to pass on the answers．
There are many reasons for students to cheat in the exam．Some students are too lazy to work hard．They want to get good grades in order to enter a good high school or a good university．Some students have too much pressure from their parents and teachers．They only want to make them happy．
In my opinion，it's dishonest of the students to cheat in the exams，and it's unfair for other students．In order to create a fair competing environment，we should say NO to the exam-cheating．
【解析】
【详解】
高分句型一：Some students are too lazy to work hard．某些学生太懒了而不努力学习．
句中使用了"too…to…太…而不能…"构造。
高分句型二：In order to create a fair competing environment，we should say NO to the exam-cheating．为了营造公平竞争环境，我们应当对考试作弊说不．
高分句型三：it's dishonest of the students to cheat in the exams．学生考试作弊是不诚实

句中使用短语有：“in order to do sth 为了做某事”，“say No to…拒绝…”，“copy others' answers抄袭他人答案”，“get good grades获得好成绩”。

9．（·江苏扬州教育学院附中中考模拟）你校正在举行以“社会主义关键价值观”为主题英语演讲比赛，你准备从“和蔼”这一点展开论述，请根据提醒，以“Kindness is a gift”为题，写一篇英语演讲稿。

规定： 1）体现清晰，语法对，上下文连贯；
2）必须包括提醒中所有信息，并合适发挥；
3）词数：100词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Kindness is a gift
Dear classmates,
I think kindness is a special gift to everyone. How can we show it to others in our daily life?

That’s all for my speech. Thank you!
【答案】例文Dear classmates,
I think kindness is a special gift to everyone. How can we show it to others in our daily life?
When we’re at home, it’s important to show our respect to our parents. Helping them do some housework will make us close to each other. We should also be kind enough to our neighbours in our neighborhood. While they’re away from home, we can keep an eye on their houses. At school, tell our classmates to ask for h