中考英语书面表达单元练习题含答案12.doc

中考英语书面体现单元练习题(含答案)（word）1

一、中考英语书面体现（含答案详细解析）
1．书面体现
伴随电子时代到来，西方文化如潮水般涌来，中国老式文化传承面临着巨大挑战。有人认为学校应当开设老式文化课（set up traditional culture classes），但也有人认为没有必要。假如你是Mike,请你用英语写一封邮件，给你校英文报投稿写一篇短文，词数80左右，谈谈你对开设老式文化课见解。
Your opinion
necessary or unnecessary
Your reasons
the root （根） of Chinese culture, know more about,
spread, develop
Your suggestion
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Dear editor,
As we all know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development if international technology nowadays. _____________________________________
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Yours,
Mike
【答案】Dear editor,
As we know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development of international technology nowadays. In my opinion, it’s necessary for schools to set up traditional culture classes.
First, traditional culture is the root of Chinese. As Chinese, we shouldn’t give up our traditional culture and run after Western culture. Second, traditional culture classes can give students chances to know more about our nation. They can raise their sense of national pride. Last but not least, setting up traditional culture classes can spread and develop our Chinese culture.
All in all, it is of great importance to set up traditional culture classes in schools. Let’s call on more schools to set up traditional culture classes!
Yours,
Mike
【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，谈谈我对开设老式文化课见解。结合所给材料，可知本文重要考察一般目前时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子构造重要为系表构造和动宾构造，注意某些常见句式应用，例如：Chinese traditional culture is facing……，it’s necessary for schools to……，we shouldn’t……，They can raise……，it is of great importance to……等句式应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意论述次序，符合逻辑关系。
点睛：本文构造紧凑，语言简洁。开头简介了中国老式文化面对问题，接下来简介我认为开设老式文化课必要性原因，最终号召更多学校开设老式文化课。此处because of， in one’s opinion, give up, know about, last but not least, set up, all in all, call on等这些词组运用也让文章增色不少。

2．书面体现
初中即将毕业，同学们都感到压力很大。就此问题，老师规定你在英语课上做一种以“Less Pressure Makes Life Better”为题汇报，谈谈你做法，与同学分享经验。请根据如下规定写一份发言稿，内容包括：
1. 普遍存在压力：同学关系；考试
2. 我过去压力：父母期望；学习
3. 我成功缓和压力措施及效果；……
规定：1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
2. 词数80左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Less Pressure Makes Better Life
Hello, everyone!
Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Most students in our class are under too much pressure. _____
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【答案】Hello, my classmates!
Pressure is a serious problem in today's world. Most students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can't get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much.
I was always under pressure, too. My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class. They always sent me to all kinds of after-classes on weekends. 
I had a talk with my parents and told them I had done my best. Finally, they understood me. In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies. 
Less pressure makes better life. Thank you.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文规定我们针对目前同学们普遍感到压力大这种现象，以Less Pressure Makes Life Better为题，谈谈自已见解，和同学们分享一下自已经验。审题可知，文章中应重要包括如下几种内容：首先简介同学们普遍感到压力这种现象；然后讲述自已过去曾面对压力；最终简介自已怎样成功缓和压力。题目中只给出了大概提纲，其中详细内容应由学生们自已发挥想象力来补充，并用对英语体现出来。学生们可以从自身经历和体会出发，选用生活中常见场景进行简介。文章应使用一般目前时和一般过去时，注意根据体现需要使用对时态，并变化谓语动词对形式。句式构造可以简单句构造为主，这样句式体现简洁、明了，易于掌握。但为提高作文档次，应穿插使用并列句和复合句，或使用某些复杂构造，如非谓语动词、被动语态等。语句之间使用恰当连接成分，使文意连贯。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀作文，短文作者根据题目规定，谈了自已对同学们普遍感到压力大这种现象见解，并分享了自已经历。短文有如下几种长处：首先短文内容完整，包含了题目中规定所有信息，且层次清晰，文章提成了四段，每一段中心话题也很明确。另一方面短文中使用了对时态和人称，文章重要使用了一般目前时和一般过去时，谓语动词形式精确。句式构造以简单句为主，论述清晰、简洁。也使用了并列句和复合句构造，如宾语从句、状语从句等。短文中使用了丰富句式，如Some students can't get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much.、My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class、In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies等等。

3．　　近年来雾霾天气在中国许多都市频频发生。雾霾天气引起大家极大关注。请你用英语写一篇有关雾霾短文向校刊“英语角”投稿,内容包括：
1. 雾霾危害 2. 雾霾产生原因（2个） 3. 应对雾霾措施（3个）
提醒：雾霾 smog poisonous 有毒
注意：1. 词数110左右； 2. 可以合适增长细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头语已为你写好（不计入总词数）。
In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people.
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【答案】　　In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people.
　　Smog has a bad effect on people’s health. Many people, children and the old in particular, suffer from illnesses caused by smog. Consequently, citizens are warned not to go out without wearing masks.
　　How does it come about? Scientists have found that it is human activity that has caused this. The poisonous matters in the air mainly come as a result of people’s burning coal, driving cars, industry production and so on.
　　What should we do to stop the situation from worsening? First, cleaner fuels for cars and stricter emission standards for factories are of vital importance. Second, for us individuals, living a green life like going to work or school by public transport is a good choice. 　　Also planting more trees to increase green areas is necessary. I believe every contribution counts. Only if we work together will smog weather disappear completely.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文规定我们根据提醒来简介有关雾霾状况，题目中给出了写作内容，我们应将这些内容用对英语体现出来。首先应注意在短文中要包括题目中给出所有信息，不能遗漏要点，并注意体现层次和条理。另一方面要注意使用对时态和人称，通过度析可知，这篇短文应使用一般目前时态，谓语动词用原形，尤其要注意谓语动词形式要变化，这是一种写作难点。最终要注意英语体现习惯，英语句式与汉语在语序和词性上使用是不一样，要注意不能逐词翻译，写汉语式英语。应从句子整体考虑，使用恰当词汇和句型来体现，语法规范。还应使用某些很好句型或者短语，增强文章体现力。

4．2月20日，中央宣传部授予北京楷模优秀群体“时代楷模”称号。时代楷模充足体现“爱国、敬业、诚信、友善”价值准则。
某网站正在开展以“向时代楷模学习”为主题英语征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈生活中你该怎么做，以及这样做意义。
提醒词语：pick up, rubbish, study, honest, important
提醒问题：● What should you do in your daily life? ● Why do you do so?
As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models.

【答案】例文
As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models. First, we can protect the environment. For example, we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on. Second, we shall respect people around us. Respect others to start from small things. Third, behave well. We should be kind to others, warm-hearted to everyone, and generous to our friends. By doing so, our world will become more and more beautiful.
【解析】
【详解】
题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，但写作时要按照应用文格式写，写作时承接短文开头，详细写出怎样做以及这样做意义。
例文点评：例文采用是一段式，人称用是第一人称复数形式，时态重要用是一般目前时，描述详细怎么做时，描写细致，条理清晰。
高分亮点：
短语：protect the environment；pick up the rubbish；behave well；be kind to sb；more and more beautiful。
句型：By doing so, our world will become more and more beautiful；we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on。

5．目前，许多中学生不重视课外阅读。请你根据下表内容写一篇短文，对这一现实状况进行分析并提出提议。
要点：

不重视课外阅读原因

1. 作业太多
2. 没有读书习惯
3. 时间花在电脑或网络上

课外阅读好处

1. 更多地理解世界
2. 学会怎样思考
3. 生活愈加丰富多彩

对学校或同学提议

……（至少一点）

注意：1. 词数: 80个左右（开头已给出内容不记入总词数）；
2. 内容必须包括上表中要点，可合适发挥，但不要逐字翻译；
3. 条理清晰、语句连贯；
4．文中不得出现真实地名、校名和人名。
At present only a few students do some reading after class. Here are several reasons.
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【答案】At present only a few students do some reading after class. Here are several reasons.
First of all, quite a lot of students are burdened with too much homework. Still others haven’t formed a habit of reading. They would rather spend their spare time on TV or on the Internet.
However, reading has many benefits. Through reading we can learn more about the world. Besides, it can help us think better. Last but not least, reading can make our life more colourful.
Here are my suggestions. For one thing, teachers are supposed to limit the amount of our homework so that we can have more time to read. For another, it’s a good idea to form reading clubs and learn from each other.
【解析】
略

6．请根据表格内Zhang Ying某些体现提醒用英语写一篇短文，把她简介给你外国朋友Mary。
Time

Good habits

Bad habits

In the morning

Get up early

Eat junk food for breakfast

In class

Ask some questions

Quarrel（争执） with her
classmates sometimes

After school

Always exercise

Go home late

In the evening

Help her parents with housework

Watch TV or play computer
games for more than an hour

规定：1、语言要通顺，体现要对。
2、文章规定包含表格中所有提醒。
3、词数不少于60个英语单词。
4、文章开头结尾已给出，不计入词数。
【答案】One possible version
Dear Mary,
I’m very glad to introduce（简介） my classmate Zhang Ying to you. She is a 14-year-old girl. She has a lot of good habits. She gets up early every morning. In class she likes to ask her teachers some questions. After school she always exercises （for a long time）. After supper she helps her parents with housework. （She is really a good girl. ）But she has some bad habits, too. She often eats junk food for breakfast. Sometimes she quarrels with her classmates in class. She doesn’t go home on time and she always watches TV or plays computer games for more than an hour in the evening. （This makes her parents unhappy. ）I think Zhang Ying is a very good girl. Do you think so?
Yours
Huang Deshun
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，题目中给出材料较为齐全。写作中注意将张颖状况简介清晰。根据材料可知，本文重要用一般目前时态，第三人称进行论述，写作中主语时态及主谓一致等问题。注意不要遗漏要点，做到语句通顺。为了使意思愈加连贯可合适使用连接词。
【亮点阐明】本文在写作中使用了诸多固定句式，如：be glad to do sth快乐做某事；a lot of许多；get up起床等。本文中时间词如After supper，Sometimes，in the evening等巧妙使用，使得本文看起来逻辑清晰，条理分明。在学习中，我们应注意总结,牢记某些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以合适引用,使文章体现更有逻辑性,更富有条理.
考点：考察提纲类作文

7．写作
某英文网站“ Student Life”栏目正在向中学生征文，标题为“ A time when I made someone happy”，请你写一篇英文稿件，内容需包括如下要点:
1. Who was the person you made happy?
2. When was it?
3. What did you say or do?
4. Why did it make him/her happy?
5. How did you feel at that moment?
注意：1．词数：100左右（题目不计入总词数）。
2.文中不得出现也许透考生真实身份任何信息。
【答案】Last summer,though it was hot,I volunteered to teach children English in rural area.When I arrived there,I couldn't adjust to the weather and life style.However,as time went by,I found myself quite happy when I saw the students I was teaching made great progress.In order to teach them,I had to keep on learning as well.As a result,my English improved a lot.Also,I made friends with some of my students.We are still keeping in touch by letter now.
In a word,not only did I help those in need,but also I myself learn a lot that summer.If I have another chance to do volunteer work,I am ready to go.
【解析】写作分析：这是一篇给定标题材料作文，需要逐条完毕要点问题回答，描述一次自已让他人开心快乐经历，是一篇记叙文，首先要读懂5个问题，另一方面要用恰当语言和衔接手段把这五个问题回答联络在一起，变成一篇短文，同步也要注意在描述过去故事时候要对运用过去时态。
写作亮点：既然这是一篇记叙文，就应当完整地展现故事，需要加上必要背景，指明时间（Last summer），地点（in rural area），简要概括事件（teach children English），这是文章首句点睛之笔，信息量丰富。短语和固定搭配对使用也为这篇文章增色不少，例如“adjust to…”（调整以适应…），“as time went by”（伴随时间流逝），“made great progress”（获得巨大进步），“keep on learning”（继续学习），“In a word”（综上所述）等等短语使用对。在收尾部分体现了作者积极人生态度，表达假如尚有机会自已还乐于参与，这样使得这篇文章构造完整，表意愈加清晰。

8．李华英国笔友Jessica来信说, 她想理解中国老式节日中秋节。假如你是李华, 请你给Jessica写一封信, 简介该节日。内容须包含如下所有要点：
1. 中秋节时间；
2. 中秋节老式习俗及庆祝方式：全家人一起吃饭, 赏月, 吃月饼等；
3, 我最期待活动。
规定：1.80--100词〔开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数）；2.语句通顺, 意思连贯, 书写工整。
Dear Jessica,
I'm glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the Mid-Autumn Festival to you._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jessica,
I'm glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the Mid-Autumn Festival to you. The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the 8th lunar month. It’s a big day for us Chinese people. All the family members get together to celebrate the festival. In the evening, we usually have a big dinner. And then we go outside and enjoy the full moon. The moon that night looks the brightest. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together to eat mooncakes, and share our stories.
For me, the best part is to enjoy the moon and eat mooncakes. Mooncakes taste very delicious. They look like the moon, big and round.

Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
本篇写作是以书信方式向笔友简介中国老式节日中秋节，要用一般目前时来写。全文可分两大部分，第一部分写中秋节时间、老式习俗及庆祝方式，第二部分写我最期待活动。
亮点阐明：这是一篇优秀作文，很好地完毕了试题规定任务，语言体现符合英语习惯，精确运用时态，主谓一致，尤其使用某些亮点词句，如get together，en