2025年初中英语书面表达技巧和方法及练习题含解析.doc

初中英语书面体现技巧和措施完整版及练习题含解析

一、英语书面体现
1．书面体现
难忘初中生活即将结束。你们班计划举行“辞别初中生活”主题班会。假如你是班长，根据如下提醒，用英语写一则告知。要点如下：
1. 时间：6月26日下午3:00.
2. 地点:六楼会议室
3. 活动内容：
1） 对老师用话语体现谢意；2）与同学交流自已未来梦想；3）师生合影，互赠留言等等。
参照词汇：look back at , say goodbye to, express thanks to , talk about, take photos..
备注：词数100左右，告知开头已拟好，不计入总数。
Boys and girls,
The wonderful middle school life will go to the end._______________________
【答案】Boys and girls,
The wonderful middle school life will go to the end. In the past three years, we have studied and stayed together. Looking back at the days we spend together, how sweet we feel. In order to keep the happy times in our hearts for ever, we are going to have a class meeting on the afternoon of June 26 next week. The theme of the class meeting is saying goodbye to our middle school life. It will be held in Conference Room on the Sixth Floor.
We are going to have some meaningful activities. To express thanks to our teachers, we each should say a thankful word to our dear teachers. We can chat freely with our classmates and teachers about our plans of the summer vacation. We can even talk about the dreams of our future. Then, we are going to take some photos with our teachers and classmates. In the end, we may give our wishes to each other.
Don't be late! That's all. Thank you!
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如In order to，look back at，be going to，have a class meeting，say goodbye to，talk about，the dreams of，take some photos，in the end，each other，be late等。而复杂单句构造In order to keep the happy times in our hearts forever, we are going to have a class meeting on the afternoon of June 26 next week./ To express thanks to our teachers, we each should say a thankful word to our dear teachers.和Then, we are going to take some photos with our teachers and classmates.运用，丰富了短文内容，使体现多样化，是本文亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记某些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以合适引用，使文章体现更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
【点睛】
书面体现题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥作文。它规定将所规定材料内容经整理后展开思维，考察运用所学英语知识精确体现意思能力。因此，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自已熟悉单词、短语和句式，尽量使用高级词汇和较复杂句式构造以便得到较高分数。

2．假定你是David，来自美国，你QQ好友Li Ming想要在今年暑假去做志愿者，他来信向你理解有关这方面状况。请认真阅读下面邮件，并根据信中内容和实际用英语答复，可以有合适发挥。
To: davidwoodlandschool@
From: limingsunshineschool@
Subject: Volunteering
Dear David，
I’m writing to ask you for advice. I know you often do volunteer work in your free time. I’m interested in it very much. I’m going to do some this summer vacation. But I know little about it. Could you help me answer the following questions?
●Why do you want to be a volunteer?
●What kind of vo1unteer work is suitable for us students?
●Do you have any problems with volunteering?
●If my parents don’t allow me to do so, what should I do?
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best wishes，
Li Ming

注意：1.词数90左右。答复信开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数;
2.答复中不得提及真实人名、校名等有关信息。
Dear Li Ming,
Thanks for your letter. I'm glad you would like to be a volunteer. Now let me answer your questions.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope you love volunteering and do well in it. Looking forward to your good news.
Best wishes
David
【答案】Dear Li Ming,
Thanks for your letter. I'm glad you would like to be a volunteer. Now let me answer your
questions.
I volunteer because I enjoy helping others and can learn a lot from others. As students, we can take part in some interesting activities, such as looking after animals and working for sports matches. Also, we can join charity organizations to help protect the environment and so on.
It’s OK to have problems, because volunteering takes much time and energy. Sometimes I can’t balance my study and work. If your parents don’t allow you to volunteer, you should have a good talk with them. Try to let them understand you.
I hope you love volunteering and do well in it. Looking forward to your good news.
Best wishes
David
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文，给好友Li Ming回信，简介暑假做志愿者状况。。结合所给材料，可知本文重要考察一般目前时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子构造重要为系表构造和动宾构造，注意某些常见句式应用，例如：I'm glad……，we can……，It’s OK to……，If your parents don’t allow you to…….，you should……，I hope……等句式应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意论述次序，符合逻辑关系。
点睛：本文构造紧凑，语言简洁。开头为你想要成为一名志愿者而感到快乐，接下来简介我们可以从事志愿者工作以及志愿者工作带来某些问题，最终我但愿你喜欢志愿者工作。此处would like to, enjoy doing sth, learn from, take part in, such as, look after, allow sb to do sth, let sb do sth, look forward to 等这些词组运用也让文章增色不少。

3．书面体现
假定你是李华，近来你们班就低碳生活方式进行了讨论，你英国朋友Peppa向你来信
问询讨论状况。请你用英语写封回信，简单简介如下讨论成果：
1．节水节电． 2．垃圾分类 3．少用纸巾，重拾手帕
4．步行、骑自行车或公交出行、
参照词汇：low carbon低碳；tissue纸巾
词数：100词左右。开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Peppa,
Thank you for your last letter asking about our discussion on low-carbon lifestyle. Here is something about it．
_______________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peppa,
Thank you for your last letter asking about our discussion on low-carbon lifestyle. Here is something about it．
We can do a lot in our daily life to achieve the goal of low carbon life. First, we’d better turn off lights if possible and spend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet. Saving water also matters much. Besides, we should sort out the rubbish, hoping that we might recycle some, which will surely benefit us a great deal. In addition, we suggest using handkerchiefs instead of tissues so that we can prevent more trees from being cut down. More importantly, when we go out, walking, riding bikes or taking buses should be our first choice, which contributes to a cleaner world.
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇给材料作文，向我英国朋友Peppa写信，简介我们班就低碳生活方式进行讨论状况。
【详解】
结合所给材料，可知本文重要考察一般目前时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子构造重要为系表构造，注意某些常见句式应用，例如：We can do……，we’d better……，we suggest……，which contributes to……等句式应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意论述次序，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】
本文构造紧凑，语言简洁。开头我要简介我们班就低碳生活方式进行了讨论，接下来简介我们为低碳生活可以做事。此处ask about, turn off, sort out, in addition, instead of, contribute to等这些词组运用也让文章增色不少。

4．书面体现
每年4月23日是世界读书日，这个纪念日意义在于推进更多人去阅读。假如你校将开展“读好书，促成长”活动，请你根据这项活动主题，向全校同学发出倡议。
读书意义
1. 获取知识，开阔视野
2. 使人愉悦，益于学习
3. ……（自由发挥）
现实状况
1. 作业多，无良好读书习惯
2. 不懂得读什么书，不会选择
倡议
……（至少两点）

注意：1. 词数90左右。短文开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2. 短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可合适发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
3. 短文中不得出现真实人名、校名等有关信息。
Dear classmates,
Reading is very important in our daily life.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Let’s start reading now!
【答案】Reading is very important in our daily life．
First of all，reading will/can help us get knowledge from all kinds of books．It can also help to open up a whole new world to us．Second，reading will/can make us clever and happy．It is good for our study and it can help us grow up．Third，reading can help us think more and further and make our life more colourful．
However，there is usually so much homework for us to do that we don't have enough time for reading．Moreover，some of us don't have a good habit of reading but often spend too much time watching TV and searching the Internet．
In my opinion，our school can have a"Reading Week"once a term．Teachers should encourage students to borrow books from the library．We must spend more time reading some useful books．As a result，we can have a better future．
Let's start reading now!
【解析】亮点阐明：这篇习作层次清晰，内容饱满，体现流畅。文中使用了非常好短语，例如first of all，all kinds of books，help to do，be good for，more and further，so much，spend too much time doing，search the Internet，in my opinion，as a result等。同步First of all，/ Second，/ Third等时间副词和However/ Moreover / As a result等构造副词运用，既使文章思绪清晰、层次分明，还丰富了习作内容，使体现多样，是本文最大亮点。
点睛：书面体现题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥作文。它规定将所规定材料内容经整理后展开思维，考察运用所学英语知识精确体现意思能力。因此，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自已熟悉单词、短语和句式，尽量使用高级词汇和较复杂句式构造以便得到较高分数。

5． 亚洲文明对话大会近期在北京召开，你印度朋友Danny收看了大会有关报道，对华夏文明产生了浓厚爱好，来信向你理解中国文化。假设你是李华，请根据如下内容提醒用英语写一封回信给Danny。
要点
内容
历史文化
历史悠久，文化各异；老式节日，多彩习俗（举一例）
文明行为
互相尊重，以礼相待；互学共鉴，共同成长（或自拟）
身边文明
校园文明（自拟一点）

注意：1. 词数90词左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
2. 答复必须包括因此要点，可是当发挥，是短文连贯，通顺。
3. 文中不得提及真实人名、校名等有关信息。
参照词汇: civilized 文明
Dear Danny,
I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization（文明） of China, I would like to share something with you.

I hope you can come to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hear from you soon.
All the best,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Danny,
I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization（文明） of China, I would like to share something with you.
Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world. China is a country of 56 nationalities. Different nations have difficult cultures. In my country, we have many traditional festivals, such as, the Spring Festival, Mid-Autumn Festival and the Dragon Boat Festival . They are also called “three major Chinese holidays” in China. Here are the customs of eating Zongzi and racing dragon-boat on the Dragon Boat Festival.
China is a nation of etiquette （礼仪）. Chinese people can respect, trust and help each other. We all learn and grow together. Everyone in my school should protect the whole public environment. Climbing the trees, picking the flowers and throwing garbage at random are not allowed there.
I hope you can come to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hearing from you soon.
All the best.
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本文规定给你印度朋友Danny写一篇有关华夏文明回信。
【详解】
文章需要简介下中国文化。表格中列举了三个要点，写作时注意不要漏写。平时注意多多积累句型、短语。细心检查避免疏漏。以图表展示作文要以“读”为主，首先要认真读懂图表中规定，对所给信息加以分析、推断、筛选、概括，去粗取精；在写作时目要明确，要注意内容精确性和严厉性。
【点睛】
写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系，上下文之间可以合适使用连接词。如but, so, then等。可以合适使用高分句子。本篇文章写好句子有：Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world．中华文明是世界上最古老、最悠久文明之一。China is a nation of etiquette（礼仪），中国是一种礼仪之邦。

6．写作
81. 春天，许多人都喜欢参与多种户外活动。为了倡导中学生靠近大自然，某中学生英文报举行了一次征文活动，请你根据如下问题，用英语写一篇短文参与征文。
提醒：1）What’s the benefit （好处） of outdoor activities? （1-2 opinions）
2）Which is your favourite outdoor activity? How and why? （1-2 examples）
3）What do we need to pay attention to when we do outdoor activities? （At least 1 suggestion）
规定：1）体现清晰，语法对，上下文连贯；
2）必须包括提醒中所有信息，并按规定合适发挥；
3）词数：100词左右，开头已给出，不计入词数；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
It’s spring now. Many people like to go out for some activities. I think it’s great to get close to nature.

【答案】It’s spring now. Many people like to go out for some activities. I think it’s a good way to get close to nature.
When we are outdoors and in the natural world, we can not only breathe fresh air and enjoy the beautiful scene, but also relax ourselves for the coming study or work.
There are many different ways we can get out into the natural world, such as hiking, cycling, camping and climbing. Cycling is my favourite. I join a cycling club, and often go out with other members. While cycling, we can forget our worries and have fun together. Also, we can learn to be a part of a team and help each other.
Whatever you do, remember to stay safe. When you’re outside, it’s better to be with your parents or friends.
【解析】
试题分析：本篇书面体现以“outdoor activities”为话题，结合所给写作材料，写一篇报刊征文稿。根据内容提醒可知本文会使用到一般目前时态，注意某些常见句式应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富语句，注意论述次序，符合逻辑关系，最终最佳要体现出人物感想和见解。
写作亮点：本文构造紧凑，语言简洁、要点齐全。文中in the natural world, not only…but also, get out, such as, also等词（组）恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密；本文还采用了丰富句型，例如：It is +形容词+（for sb.） to do sth.；There be句型；时间状语从句等复合句，大大增长了信息容量，使文章增色不少，这是一篇不错范文。

7．共享单车自从在江阴投入使用以来，给人们带来了诸多便利，受到人们追捧，变化了人们出行方式，但同步也遇到了某些挑战，是国民素质“照妖镜”，请你根据表格中信息提醒，给二十一世纪英文报写一篇有关共享单车见解稿件。
社会现实状况
自从出现，饱受赞誉。
诸多优势
随地可见，出行以便
有益健康，减少污染
费用不高，承担得起
存在问题
未及时归还
占道挡路
你观点
我认为------

参照词汇：公共自行车public bicycles
注意事项：1.短文须包括表格中所有提醒内容，规定语句通顺，意思连贯。
2.表格中“你观点”一栏用2-3句话展开合理想象，做合适发挥。
3.词数在90个左右，文章开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。
Public bicycles are becoming more and more popular in our daily life.

【答案】Public bicycles are becoming more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared. Public bicycles have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that it’s easy for us to get around on public bicycles. Also, Riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution