英语中考英语书面表达知识点总结和题型总结12.doc

【英语】中考英语书面体现知识点总结和题型总结经典1

一、中考英语书面体现（含答案详细解析）
1．假如你是班长李华，今天你们班对即将到来暑假计划进行了讨论。你们班外教David对此很感爱好。请你根据如下信息，给 David写一封电子邮件，告诉他讨论状况及你自已本人计划及原因。
比例
计划
原因
50%
去国内外旅游
1.放松;2.欣赏美景
30%
多读某些书
1.增长知识；2.培养爱好
20%
参与社会实践
1.锻炼自已;2.认识朋友
你计划
? （至少一种）
？（请你补充）

注意：
（1）邮件应包含所有要点
（2）词数80个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数）；
（3）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分
注：社会实践 social practice activities
Dear David
I'm writing to tell you something about our discussion today.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours
Li Hua
【答案】Dear David
I'm writing to tell you something about our discussion today.
The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation. Half of the students plan to travel at home and abroad. They want to relax and enjoy the beautiful scenery. Thirty percent of students plan to read more books. They believe that reading can increase knowledge. Reading books can make people smart and develop interests. 20% of them plan to take part in social practice activities. They want to exercise themselves and make new friends.
I'm going to take part in social practice activities, too. I want to learn something new and get good experience from these activities.
Best wishes!
Yours
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如how to do，spend a meaningful summer vacation，half of，plan to do，travel at home and abroad，enjoy the beautiful scenery，take part in，social practice activities，make new friends 等。而非谓语动词构造The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation./ Reading books can make people smart and develop interests.和宾语从句They believe that reading can increase knowledge.运用，丰富了短文内容，使体现多样化，是本文亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记某些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以合适引用，使文章体现更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
【点睛】
书面体现题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥作文。它规定将所规定材料内容经整理后展开思维，考察运用所学英语知识精确体现意思能力。因此，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自已熟悉单词、短语和句式，尽量使用高级词汇和较复杂句式构造以便得到较高分数。

2．假定你是David，来自美国，你QQ好友Li Ming想要在今年暑假去做志愿者，他来信向你理解有关这方面状况。请认真阅读下面邮件，并根据信中内容和实际用英语答复，可以有合适发挥。
To: davidwoodlandschool@
From: limingsunshineschool@
Subject: Volunteering
Dear David，
I’m writing to ask you for advice. I know you often do volunteer work in your free time. I’m interested in it very much. I’m going to do some this summer vacation. But I know little about it. Could you help me answer the following questions?
●Why do you want to be a volunteer?
●What kind of vo1unteer work is suitable for us students?
●Do you have any problems with volunteering?
●If my parents don’t allow me to do so, what should I do?
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best wishes，
Li Ming

注意：1.词数90左右。答复信开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数;
2.答复中不得提及真实人名、校名等有关信息。
Dear Li Ming,
Thanks for your letter. I'm glad you would like to be a volunteer. Now let me answer your questions.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope you love volunteering and do well in it. Looking forward to your good news.
Best wishes
David
【答案】Dear Li Ming,
Thanks for your letter. I'm glad you would like to be a volunteer. Now let me answer your
questions.
I volunteer because I enjoy helping others and can learn a lot from others. As students, we can take part in some interesting activities, such as looking after animals and working for sports matches. Also, we can join charity organizations to help protect the environment and so on.
It’s OK to have problems, because volunteering takes much time and energy. Sometimes I can’t balance my study and work. If your parents don’t allow you to volunteer, you should have a good talk with them. Try to let them understand you.
I hope you love volunteering and do well in it. Looking forward to your good news.
Best wishes
David
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文，给好友Li Ming回信，简介暑假做志愿者状况。。结合所给材料，可知本文重要考察一般目前时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子构造重要为系表构造和动宾构造，注意某些常见句式应用，例如：I'm glad……，we can……，It’s OK to……，If your parents don’t allow you to…….，you should……，I hope……等句式应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意论述次序，符合逻辑关系。
点睛：本文构造紧凑，语言简洁。开头为你想要成为一名志愿者而感到快乐，接下来简介我们可以从事志愿者工作以及志愿者工作带来某些问题，最终我但愿你喜欢志愿者工作。此处would like to, enjoy doing sth, learn from, take part in, such as, look after, allow sb to do sth, let sb do sth, look forward to 等这些词组运用也让文章增色不少。

3．（题文） 书面体现
在中学生机器人大赛上，出现了一种专门照顾老人新型家用智能机器人，它重要功能有：
1. 定期做饭、洗衣服； 2. 陪老人聊天、下棋、做运动；
3. 处理紧急状况（如：拨打120）
假如你是该机器人发明者，请你简介这个产品，并谈谈你未来设想。
规定：1. 意思连贯，语句通顺；
2. 词数80词左右；短文开头已给出（不计入总词数）
3. 参照词汇： at a fixed time 定期
emergency 紧急状况
ccompany sb. 陪伴某人
Ladies and gentlemen,
Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I’d like to introduce my new invention to all of you.
【答案】Ladies and gentlemen,
Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I’d like to introduce my new invention to all of you.
I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. It can cook meals and do some washing at a fixed time. When old people feel alone, it can also accompany them by having a chat, playing chess or doing exercise. What’s more, it can deal with some emergencies. For example, if an old man falls ill suddenly, the robot will call doctors immediately for help.
I’m sure my new invention will be a great help to the elderly. I think in the future people will live a more comfortable life with the help of new robots.
【解析】
亮点阐明：这篇习作层次清晰，内容饱满，体现流畅。文中使用了非常好短语，例如thank you for doing，I’d like to do，introduce sb. to，all of you，at home，do some washing，at a fixed time，have a chat，play chess，do exercise，deal with，a great help，in the future等。而Thank you for attending our robot show./ I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. / I think in the future people will live a more comfortable life with the help of new robots.等非谓语动词和复杂从句运用，丰富了习作内容，使体现多样化，是本文最大亮点。
点睛：书面体现题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥作文。它规定将所规定材料内容经整理后展开思维，考察运用所学英语知识精确体现意思能力。因此，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自已熟悉单词、短语和句式，尽量使用高级词汇和较复杂句式构造以便得到较高分数。

4．（B）根据规定完毕大作文,词数:80-100
体育运动是中学生共同爱好.请根据下面提醒写一篇题为What We Get from Sports 短文,应当包含如下要点:
1,学生参与体育运动爱好不一样,理由各异.
2.多数学生学习疲倦时,通过运动来放松自已.
3.男孩参与各项体育运动,但愿运动能使自已更强健.
4.女孩也喜欢运动，但愿运动使自已减肥和保持健康,苗条.
5.你对运动观点.
6.注意:文中不得出现自已名字和学校名字
7.短文开头已给出,不计入词数.
8.参照词语:keep slim （保持苗条）
What We Get from Sports
Students in our school have one thing in common an interest in sports.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Students in our school have one thing in common an interest in sports. But different students have different reasons for taking part in sports.
Many students have sports when they feel tired after study. They just want to relax themselves and have fun. Most boys love sports. They take part in all kinds of sports in order to become stronger. They join in the sports that interest them most, such as soccer, basketball and volleyball. As for girls, they want to lose weight. They want to keep slim, so they also like taking exercise.
In my opinion, no matter what reasons we have, we all can get a lot from sports.
【解析】
【详解】
本篇写作重要是谈论自已对运动观点和见解，应当用一般目前时态，写作要点要包括：1.提出目前学生对运动不一样见解及原因。2.详细分析（多数学生观点、男生观点、女生观点）。3.提出自已对运动观点。
亮点阐明：这是一篇优秀作文，很好地完毕了试题规定任务，语言体现符合英语习惯，精确运用时态，主谓一致，在文中使用了时间状语从句，定语从句，尤其使用某些亮点词句，如have fun，in order to，as for，in my opinion等。增强逻辑关系，增长上下文意思连贯，句子通顺，行文连贯。

5．人们对于学生网上交友持不一样意见。请你用英语写一篇有关学生网上交友短文，简介人们不一样观点，并体现自已见解。
赞成理由
反对理由
你见解
1. 广交朋友
2. 可自由体现思想
3. 有助于外语学习
1. 挥霍时间
2. 影响学习
3. 也许上当受骗（be cheated）
1. ...
2. ...

注意：1. 所写内容必须包括表中各方观点并进行合理拓展。
2. 词数80词左右，短文开头已给出（不计入总词数）。
Nowadays many teenagers show great interest in making friends online. Some people think___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Nowadays many teenagers show great interest in making friends online. Some people think students should make friends on line? Some people say yes. The internet helps make many friends. Chatting on line, students can more freely express their feelings and opinions, and even get help with their foreign language studies. But others think students should not. They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated on line.
It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.
【解析】
【分析】
整体分析：这是一篇提纲话题作文。是一篇议论文，第一段要写赞同学生网上交友人观点，第二段要写反对学生网上交友观点，第三段要表述作者自已观点。
【详解】
本篇作文规定作者就上网交友刊登意见，写作之前要认真阅读所给提醒，确定文章中心。注意文体、人称和时态。文章要有层次、流畅。可以合适发挥，写作中合适使用连词，注意上下文紧密联络，要符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】
此类作文写作措施要注意认真审题，可以分三段写：赞成；反对；你见解。注意过渡性语言使用。做到：要点要全，体现要清晰明确，使用短语，句型要精确，注意避免拼写和语法错误。

6．书面体现
假如你是华,你英国笔友对中国文化很感爱好,想到中国旅行感受中国文化。你想请他来你家乡一安徴一游,请你根据如下提醒用英文给他写一封电子邮件。
1位置:中国东部,安做省南部:
2.气候:春暖花开,秋季凉爽
3.景点:山和古村落:
4.文化:茶、黄梅戏
5.提议
提醒词:黄梅戏 Huangmei Opera
注意:1.词数80-100
2.可合适增长细节,使行文连贯。
3.文中不得出现自已真实校名和人名
4.开头和结展已给出,不计入总词数
Dear Dave
I know that you are interested in Chinese culture and Im glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not come to Anhui, my home town, to have fun?
【答案】Dear Dave，
I know you are interested in Chinese culture and I’m glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not come to Anhui, my hometown, to have some fun.
Anhui Province lies in the east of China. The best time to come here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats. There are many famous places to see. For example, Mt. Huangshan, where you will see wonderful plants and special rocks. Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on. As a fan of Chinese culture, don’t forget to try green tea in Anhui which smells good and tastes better. What’s more, come and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!
Welcome to Anhui! I’m looking forward to seeing you here!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文规定我们以李华身份给自已笔友Dave写信，邀请他来你家乡—安徽一游，题目中列出了文章提纲，审题可知，短文应从如下几种内容论述：首先简介家乡位置；然后简介来这里最佳时候；接下来是简介家乡景点和文化，并给出提议。短文应使用一般目前时，注意谓语动词对形式。写作时应合理安排几种内容，分清主次，并注意上下文连贯。此外，英语体现习惯和汉语是不一样，因此写作时不能按照汉语思维逐词翻译，应从句子整体构造出发，写完整句子。如可以使用简单句构造，易于掌握，不容易出错。但为提高文章档次，也应穿插某些并列句构造或复合句，以及使用某些复杂构造，如非谓语动词、被动语态等。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀作文，短文作者根据题目规定邀请Dave来自已家乡旅游，并简介了家乡景点和文化。短文有如下几种特点：首先文章内容完整，包含了题目中规定所有内容，并对细节进行补充和修饰，使内容愈加充实、丰富。短文先对Dave发出邀请，然后详细简介了家乡位置、景点、文化等，并提出了提议。全文论述清晰，层次清晰，主次分明。第二，短文中使用了对时态和人称，语法规范，用词精确，句式构造完整，符合英语体现习惯。短文以一般目前时来论述，注意了谓语动词第三人称单数形式变化。句式构造以简单句为主，也使用了并列句、宾语从句、状语从句等复合句，尚有某些好句型，如The best time to come here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats、Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on.、What’s more, come and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!、I’m looking forward to seeing you here!等。

7．近来，美国总统特朗普外孙女由于说一口流利中文而成为“网红”。你美国朋友Sam 看过有关报道之后也很想学好中文,不过不懂得该怎样做。假如你是大明，请你根据如下提醒写一封邮件给他,提某些有关怎样学好汉语提议。
要点提醒 :
1.课堂上认真听讲,做好笔记;
2.不要胆怯出错误,与同学们用中文交流;
3.课下常常阅读中文杂志、报纸等,在网上看某些中文语言类节目;
4.常常用中文给外国笔友写电子邮件等。
注意 :
1.词数80-100;
2.可合适增长细节,以使行文连贯;
3.信中不能出现与本人有关信息;
4.开头和结尾已给出,不计人总词数。

Dear Sam ,
I'm happy to hear from you. I know you want to learn Chinese well. Here are some suggestions.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
In a word,if you have good ways of learning Chinese ,you will learn it well.
Yours
Daming
【答案】Dear Sam,
I'm happy to hear from you.I know you want to learn Chinese well.Here are some suggestions.
First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class. Second, it's a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese. And don't be afraid of making mistakes. Third, you'd better read Chinese magazines or newspapers after class. You can also watch Chinese programmes on the Internet. I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation. Lastly, you can write emails to me or other Chinese friends in Chinese.
In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it well.
Yours,
Daming
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文规定我们以大明身份给Sam写一封信，告诉他怎样学好汉语，题目中从四个方面提出了提议。通过审题可知，这是规定写一封提议信，内容应包括如下几种方面：首先应和Sam先做一种交流，然后引出写信目；接下来给出详细提议，根据题目中给出这四条，用对英语体现出来，还应注意补充某些内容，使文章愈加充实；最终写一种合适结尾，如但愿提议对你有协助等。文章应使用一般目前时，根据体现需要使用恰当人称。写作时应注意英语体现习惯和汉语不一样，不能按照汉语思维逐词翻译，写汉语式英语。应从句子整体构造考虑，写完整句子。如可以较常见主谓宾构造或主系表构造为主，简单句句型可以使文章论述清晰、简洁。为提高文章档次，可以穿插使用并列句或复合句以及其他某些复杂句式。语句之间使用恰当连接成分，使文章意思连贯，体现流畅。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀作文，短文作者根据题目规定给Sam写了一封信，对他汉语学习提出了某些好提议。首先短文内容完整，包括了题目中规定所有信息。文章重要提成三个部分：第一段是与Sam之间问候以及引出Sam学习汉语这一话题，并简介写信目；第二段中是提出详细提议，这是这篇文章主体，所在篇幅最大。这一段中使用了First，Second，Third，lastly等词，论述条理、有层次；最终一段用一句话对整篇文章做了总结。另一方面短文使用了对时态和人称，句式构造符合英语体现习惯。语法规范、精确，用词得体。文章中语句以简单句构造为主，也使用了并列句和复合句，调整了文章构造。文章中使用了较为丰富短语和句型，如First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class.、Second, it's a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese、I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation、In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it well.等等。

8．写作
某英文网站“ Student Life”栏目正在向中学生征文，标题为“ A ti