2025年中考英语书面表达单元检测附答案2.doc

中考英语书面体现单元检测（附答案）

一、中考英语书面体现（含答案详细解析）
1．近日，某中学 “iPad进课堂”消息引起了学生和家长们讨论。你们学校English Newsletter正在以iPads, coming into the classrooms为题举行征文活动，请根据右侧表格提醒内容，用英语写一篇征文。
学生们认为
1.不需要背沉重书包去上学
2.很新鲜，学习更感爱好
3.……
家长们认为
1.影响孩子视力
2.增长家庭承担
你观点
1.……
2.……

注意：
1）体现清晰，语法对，上下文连贯；
2）所写内容必须包括表格中所有有关信息，观点可作合适发挥；
3）词数：90词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
iPads, coming into the classrooms
Can you use an iPad in the classroom? The answer is yes! Recently, students and parents are arguing about the new teaching method.
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【答案】iPads, coming into the classrooms
Can you use an iPad in the classroom? The answer is yes! Recently, students and parents are arguing about the new teaching method.
The students don’t think they have to carry heavy bags any more. It’s cool to have lessons over iPads. It’s very interesting to study like that. They believe that they will learn more and better.
However,parents think using ipads for too long will influence children’s eyesight. And some poor families can’t afford to buy iPads.
I think in some ways iPads are good for us. We can search for information on the Internet at any time. It’s easy for us to chat with our classmates and teachers about our lessons.
【解析】根据题目规定，需要书写一篇议论文，探讨iPad进课堂这一现象，以及人们对此不一样观点和态度。文章需要使用一般目前时态，第三人称。结合观点式议论文段落格式，首先在第一段提出问题现象，第二段体现支持这种行为做法原因和好处，第三段描述反对人观点及原因，最终一段体现自已观点。注意多使用固定短语，固定句型，使文章增色。
点睛：对立观点式    
 第一段：提出现象。
第二段：Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X.  
They point out the fact that _______________________支持X 第一种原因。 They also argue that _____________________________支持X 另一种原因。  
  第三段：However, other people stand on a different ground.  
They consider it harmful to do X.  
They firmly point out that ________________________反对X 第一种理由。  An example can give the details of this argument: ________________一种例子。   
  第四段：There is some truth in both arguments.  
But I think the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages.  
In addition to the abovementioned negative effects it might bring about, X also may X 有一种害处。

2．书面体现
社会需要爱，时代呼唤爱。对善行、对爱心感动，存在于每个人心中。但诸多人缺乏不是感动，而是一种显示感动勇气。请为你身边人或事点赞，让“点赞”成为传递正能量一种行动吧！是什么行为让你点赞？讲述一件你点赞事情。你从他/她身上可以学到什么？让我们一起分享吧！请根据如下提醒要点，写一篇文章。
注意：1．词数：80左右；2．不要出现真实人名及校名。
Make a list of the persons that you should give a “like” button
Tell us one of the experiences that you clicked a “like” button
What could you learn from him/her?

【答案】I should give my uncle a “like” button. He is very tall and very strong. He punishes the bad people and protect the good people. He always helps others. He is my hero. He works hard.When I grow up, I want to be a policeman like my uncle. I want to help people and protect them, so they can live a safe life.
【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，讲述一件我点赞事情，我从他/她身上可以学到什么。结合所给材料，可知本文重要考察一般目前时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子构造重要为系表构造和动宾构造，注意某些常见句式应用，例如：I should……，He is……，He always helps……，I want to……，so they can……等句式应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意论述次序，符合逻辑关系。
点睛：本文构造紧凑，语言简洁。开头简介了我要点赞人，接下来简介他状况，最终指出我从他身上学到东西。此处give sb sth, work hard, grow up, want to do sth, live a …life等这些词组运用也让文章增色不少。

3．今天手机在我们平常生活中已广泛使用。但中学生在学校与否应当持有手机，某些学生和老师有不一样观点。你们学校校刊英文版正在就此举行征文活动，请根据下列表格提醒内容，用英语写一篇征文。

观点
理由
某些学生
赞成拥有
以便与家长联络；
某些老师
反对拥有
有学生用手机玩游戏；有学生用手机作弊；
你观点

1. 2.

规定：
1. 体现清晰，语法对，上下文连贯；`
2. 必须包含表格所给提醒信息，并作合适发挥；
3. 词数：80-100词左右（征文开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Mobile phones have been used widely in our daily life today._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Mobile phones have been used widely in our daily life today. With the development of economy, mobile phones are more and more widely used in our daily life. However, some parents and teachers have different ideas about whether the students should use mobile phones at school.
Some students are for it. They think that it is convenient to contact with parents. Mobile phones will make them more interested in learning so that they can learn more quickly and easily.
Some teachers are against it．They think that some students can't control themselves and often play games. What's worse, some students cheat in exams by using mobile phones. Besides, using mobile phones too much does great harm to students' eyes.
In my opinion, I think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way. Firstly，students can learn more knowledge using mobile phones. At the same time, parents and teachers should do something to help students. Only in this way can mobile phones be of help to their studies.
【解析】
【详解】
本篇写作需注意规定中所提供要点，不可遗漏。需在平时积累有关词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系，上下文之间可以合适使用连接词。如but, so, then等。可以合适使用高分句型。
【点睛】
高分句型：I think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way．我认为对方式使用手机对学生是有协助。
I think+宾语从句。
It is+形容词 for sb to do sth做某事对某人来说是…。

4． 假如你是李华, 你美国笔友Bill给你发了一封电子邮件, 想理解你梦想职业。请认真阅读下面邮件, 根据信中内容和你实际状况给他写封回信。
To: lihua@ china. com
From: bill006@ america. com
Subject: Your dream job
Dear Li Hua,
Our teacher told us China is developing fast. You are lucky enough to live in China.
Would you please tell me about your dream job in the future?
◆What is your dream job?
◆ Why do you like the job?
◆ Do you think your personality is suitable for the job? Why or why not?
◆ What do you need to do for your dream job?
Drop a few lines if you have time.
Best wishes,
Bill

规定:1. 参照提醒语, 可合适发挥；
2. 语句通顺, 意思连贯, 书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现你任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4.词数: 不少于70词（开头已给出, 但不计入总词数）。
Dear Bill,
Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. ____________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. Teaching is my dream job because I would like to share my knowledge with my students and help them solve problems. I am outgoing and helpful. I get on well with children. Besides, the school's environment appeals to me and staying with students helps to keep me young and alive. To realize my dream, I have to make full use of spare time to acquire the essential knowledge and enter a good university. What efforts are you making for your dream?
Tell me about your ideal job!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本题通过描写梦想中职业，让学生对未来有憧憬，给一部分提醒词，让学生有话可说。
【详解】
首先回答职业是教师。然后解释为何喜欢该工作，由于可以把自已知识分享给孩子们，并且喜欢学校环境。为了实现自已梦想，正在为此作出努力。最终向Bill提出问题，结束全文。
【点睛】
本文首先开篇功能句Thank you for your letter.然后开始重要内容，运用多种连接词，例如because，Besides，To realize my dream, 等使文章连贯性强，长短句结合，读起来朗朗上口，不失为一篇佳作。

5．　　近年来雾霾天气在中国许多都市频频发生。雾霾天气引起大家极大关注。请你用英语写一篇有关雾霾短文向校刊“英语角”投稿,内容包括：
1. 雾霾危害 2. 雾霾产生原因（2个） 3. 应对雾霾措施（3个）
提醒：雾霾 smog poisonous 有毒
注意：1. 词数110左右； 2. 可以合适增长细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头语已为你写好（不计入总词数）。
In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people.
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【答案】　　In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people.
　　Smog has a bad effect on people’s health. Many people, children and the old in particular, suffer from illnesses caused by smog. Consequently, citizens are warned not to go out without wearing masks.
　　How does it come about? Scientists have found that it is human activity that has caused this. The poisonous matters in the air mainly come as a result of people’s burning coal, driving cars, industry production and so on.
　　What should we do to stop the situation from worsening? First, cleaner fuels for cars and stricter emission standards for factories are of vital importance. Second, for us individuals, living a green life like going to work or school by public transport is a good choice. 　　Also planting more trees to increase green areas is necessary. I believe every contribution counts. Only if we work together will smog weather disappear completely.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文规定我们根据提醒来简介有关雾霾状况，题目中给出了写作内容，我们应将这些内容用对英语体现出来。首先应注意在短文中要包括题目中给出所有信息，不能遗漏要点，并注意体现层次和条理。另一方面要注意使用对时态和人称，通过度析可知，这篇短文应使用一般目前时态，谓语动词用原形，尤其要注意谓语动词形式要变化，这是一种写作难点。最终要注意英语体现习惯，英语句式与汉语在语序和词性上使用是不一样，要注意不能逐词翻译，写汉语式英语。应从句子整体考虑，使用恰当词汇和句型来体现，语法规范。还应使用某些很好句型或者短语，增强文章体现力。

6． 书面体现
请将短文写在答题卡对应位置上。
一直以来，同学们对作业持有不一样观点。在你班主题班会上，同学们进行了“Is daily homework necessary？”讨论，请你根据提醒和规定，并结合自已实际经验，刊登你观点。
Yes
No

Help us understand what we have learned；
Practice makes prefect；...

Take up too much time；
Make us less interested in studying；...

Your opinion：

规定：
1．80词以上。
2．文中不得出现真实人名、校名。
【答案】Dear students，
I'm glad to give a report about my ideas on daily homework. I think it's necessary for us to do daily homework.
Doing daily homework can help us understand what we have learned in class. For me, I always have some difficulties in mastering all of what I have learned in class. Through daily homework, I review the knowledge and think over the difficulties. Little by little, I have a better understanding. So I always believe “Practice makes perfect”．
In my opinion, daily homework is necessary for us students. But it shouldn't be too much. It can improve our skills. Daily homework should be different and colorful. It might be some extensive reading, a paper or even just a game. We should be left enough free time so that we can do things we really like to do.
That's all. Thanks.
【解析】写作分析：审题之后能明白写作任务是要写出一篇小论文，讨论每日作业究竟是不是必要。首先需要陈说正反两方面观点，另一方面结合自已实际经验，刊登自已观点。写作过程中要注意逻辑精确，注意对使用连词，借助实例、实际经验来佐证自已观点。
写作亮点：首先用一种自然段来阐明写作主题，体现出自已观点（认为作业是很必要），可以借助it is necessary for sb to do…这样句型。另一方面，开始详细陈说观点，陈说时候要合适使用实例，有关用到短语有have some difficulties in doing在做…时候有困难，review the knowledge复习知识，think over the difficulties来回思考难点，Little by little一点一点地。恰当谚语也为文章增色不少，例如用到了“Practice makes perfect”熟能生巧这个谚语。最终可以用说理方式来简介做作业必要性，例如用到了improve our skills提高我们技能，在这里也有一点亮点，就是说作业也要有变化性，要丰富多彩，体现了作者深度思考，总体来说杰出地完毕了既定写作任务。

7． 书面体现
共享单车（shared bikes）在苏州投入使用以来，给人们带来了诸多便利，受到人们追捧，变化了人们出行方式，但同步也遇到了某些挑战，是国民素质‘“照妖镜”，请你根据表格中信息提醒，给《二十一世纪英文报》写一篇有关共享单车见解稿件。
社会现实状况
自从出现，饱受赞誉。
诸多优势
1.随地可见，出行以便
2.有益健康，减少污染
3.费用不高，承担得起
存在问题
1.未及时归还
2.占道挡路
你观点
我认为……（考生自拟，至少2点）

注意事项：1.短文须包括表格中所有提醒内容，规定语句通顺，意思连贯。
2.表格中“你观点”一栏用2―3句话展开合理想象。作合适发挥。
3.词数在90个左右，文章开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。
Shared bikes are becoming more and more popular in our daily life.

【答案】Shared bikes are becoming more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared.
Shared bikes have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that it's easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What's more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford it.
But there are some problems too. Some people can't return shared bikes in time. Sometimes shared bikes take up too much of the road, so they are in our way.
I think we should encourage more people to use shared bikes properly. After all, it's a way of living a green life.
【解析】这篇作文规定我们给《二十一世纪英文报》投稿，谈一谈自已对共享单车见解。题目中运用表格形式给我们列举了短文重要内容，包括：共享单车优势；存在问题以及你自已对这件事情见解。前两个内容我们需要根据表格提醒用对英语体现，而自已观点则需要学生们自已发挥想象力，组织语言，并体现出来，规定至少两点。通过审题可知，这篇短文应重要使用一般目前时态，第三人称来论述，短文可以提成两段或者三段，一种内容一段或前两个内容合到一段。写作时，应注意英语体现习惯和汉语不一样，不能逐词翻译，而应从句子整体考虑，简单句、并列句和复合句交叉使用，变化文章句式节奏，使用不一样句式，避免单调。语句之间注意使用恰当连接成分，使整篇文章意思连贯、体现流畅。
点睛：这是一篇优秀作文。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目规定所有信息。短文提成了四段，第一段引出话题共享单车；第二段讲述了共享单车某些长处；第三段简介了某些问题；最终一段作者提出了自已见解。分段论述使文章构造清晰，主题明确，有层次性。另一方面短文中使用了恰当时态和人称，文章以第三人称、一般目前时态为主，语法规范，用词精确，句式富于变化。例如They can be seen everywhere so that it's easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What's more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford it.这几种长句；此外文章中还使用了恰当连接成分，如Also, What’s more, But, sometimes, After all等等。对文章行文连贯、语句通顺、体现流畅。

8．书面体现
“Life is like a box of of chocolate.You never know what you are going to get next.”
----Forrest Gump 中文译名：《阿甘正传》
“Hope is a good thing. Maybe the best of things and no good thing ever dies.”
----The Shawshank Kedemption 中文译名：《肖申克救赎》
“We are all running very hard. We are all dream chasers（追梦人）.”
----President Xi Jingping
以上材料告诉我们：生活是丰富多彩，有快乐幸福也有伤心失落。但既然选择了远方，便只顾风雨兼程。因此在学习和生活中，我们要满怀但愿、努力奔跑、追逐梦想。请以Dream Chaser为题，谈谈你自已观点。
要点提醒：
1.有自已目，并努力让它成为现实；
2.勤奋学习，使自已不停强大；
3.对面对困难，积极参与社会活动；
4.补充自已观点。
写作规定：
1.文中必须包含所有提醒要点，可合适发挥使行文连贯；