2025年中考英语书面表达知识点总结复习及练习测试题2.doc

- 中考英语书面体现知识点总结复习及练习测试题经典

一、中考英语书面体现（含答案详细解析）
1．近年来，各大都市雾霾（haze）状况越来越严重，整个国家空气污染状况令人担忧。请分析空气污染现象，原因，应对措施，写一份英文倡议书，呼吁大家保护环境，减少对空气污染。
要点提醒：
（1）我国空气污染现象。（至少写2点）
（2） 空气污染产生原因。（至少写2点）
（3）减少空气污染措施。（至少写2点）
规定：
（1） 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
（2） 文中不能出现自已姓名和所在学校名称。
Dear students ,
As we all know , hazy days have been influencing our lives a lot in recent years . That warns us of the serious airpollution____________________________________________________________________________

【答案】Dear students,
As we all know, hazy days have been influencing our lives a lot in recent years. That warns us of the serious air pollution. Big factories, power plants and cars all can cause air pollution. For example, chemicals in the smoke from power stations cause a lot of damage. Besides, the people's activities are also the sources of air pollution such as throwing the rubbish and smoking. What's more, the more trees are cut down, the less polluted air can absorb. Air pollution is becoming more and more serious, so we should take some measures such as planting more trees and stop factories from sending out waste air, what's more, we had better walk or take a bus. Protecting the environment is our duty. Everyone should play a part in saving the earth.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇材料作文，根据材料中有关信息简介一下整个国家空气污染状况。所提供材料中列举了近年来，各大都市雾霾（haze）状况越来越严重，重要从空气污染现象，原因，应对措施三个方面去简介。时态为一般目前时。注意作文中必须包含材料上所有信息，并合适发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用我们熟悉句子或短语。语法要对，体现要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中合适使用连词，注意上下文联络紧密，符合逻辑关系，体现具有条理性。
【高分句型一】
We had better walk or take a bus. 我们最佳步行或乘公共汽车。这里had better表达最佳，背面跟动词原形，take a bus表达乘公共汽车。
【高分句型二】
Protecting the environment is our duty. 保护环境是我们职责。这里Protecting the environment 做主语，用是动词ing形式。

2．书面体现

假设你是某英文报纸“Teenagers”栏目编辑Betty，日前收到了Lucy来信。她在信中诉说了她烦恼，请你根据Lucy来信，用英语写一封90词左右回信。规定内容合理,信开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Lucy,
I’m sorry to know that you aren’t allowed to read eBooks.
_______________________________________
All the best!
Betty
【答案】Dear Lucy,
I’m sorry to know that you aren’t allowed to read eBooks.
In recent years, electronic books, as a product of information technology, have gained more and more popularity. It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits. For one thing, they are so convenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. For another, their appearance will make paper-waste less.
However, as every coin has two sides, electronic books also have some disadvantages. For example, long time of reading e-books does harm to our eyes. And there are more radiation which is harmful to people's body.
In my opinion, E-book cannot take the place of traditional book, but it's an useful product. I think that e-books are beneficial if we read correctly and properly instead of reading over.
All the best!
Betty
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如in recent years，as a product of，live in，more and more，so…that，for example，do harm to，be harmful to，in my opinion，take the place of，instead of等。同步For one thing, / For another,/ However,等使短文论述很有条理，而It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits./ they are so convenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. / And there are more radiation which is harmful to people's body.
/ I think that e-books are beneficial if we read correctly and properly instead of reading over.等复杂从句构造运用，丰富了短文内容，使体现多样化，是本文最大亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记某些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以合适引用，使文章体现更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
【点睛】
书面体现题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥作文。它规定将所规定材料内容经整理后展开思维，考察运用所学英语知识精确体现意思能力。因此，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自已熟悉单词、短语和句式，尽量使用高级词汇和较复杂句式构造以便得到较高分数。

3．（题文） 书面体现
在中学生机器人大赛上，出现了一种专门照顾老人新型家用智能机器人，它重要功能有：
1. 定期做饭、洗衣服； 2. 陪老人聊天、下棋、做运动；
3. 处理紧急状况（如：拨打120）
假如你是该机器人发明者，请你简介这个产品，并谈谈你未来设想。
规定：1. 意思连贯，语句通顺；
2. 词数80词左右；短文开头已给出（不计入总词数）
3. 参照词汇： at a fixed time 定期
emergency 紧急状况
ccompany sb. 陪伴某人
Ladies and gentlemen,
Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I’d like to introduce my new invention to all of you.
【答案】Ladies and gentlemen,
Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I’d like to introduce my new invention to all of you.
I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. It can cook meals and do some washing at a fixed time. When old people feel alone, it can also accompany them by having a chat, playing chess or doing exercise. What’s more, it can deal with some emergencies. For example, if an old man falls ill suddenly, the robot will call doctors immediately for help.
I’m sure my new invention will be a great help to the elderly. I think in the future people will live a more comfortable life with the help of new robots.
【解析】
亮点阐明：这篇习作层次清晰，内容饱满，体现流畅。文中使用了非常好短语，例如thank you for doing，I’d like to do，introduce sb. to，all of you，at home，do some washing，at a fixed time，have a chat，play chess，do exercise，deal with，a great help，in the future等。而Thank you for attending our robot show./ I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. / I think in the future people will live a more comfortable life with the help of new robots.等非谓语动词和复杂从句运用，丰富了习作内容，使体现多样化，是本文最大亮点。
点睛：书面体现题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥作文。它规定将所规定材料内容经整理后展开思维，考察运用所学英语知识精确体现意思能力。因此，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自已熟悉单词、短语和句式，尽量使用高级词汇和较复杂句式构造以便得到较高分数。

4．书面体现
假如你是华,你英国笔友对中国文化很感爱好,想到中国旅行感受中国文化。你想请他来你家乡一安徴一游,请你根据如下提醒用英文给他写一封电子邮件。
1位置:中国东部,安做省南部:
2.气候:春暖花开,秋季凉爽
3.景点:山和古村落:
4.文化:茶、黄梅戏
5.提议
提醒词:黄梅戏 Huangmei Opera
注意:1.词数80-100
2.可合适增长细节,使行文连贯。
3.文中不得出现自已真实校名和人名
4.开头和结展已给出,不计入总词数
Dear Dave
I know that you are interested in Chinese culture and Im glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not come to Anhui, my home town, to have fun?
【答案】Dear Dave，
I know you are interested in Chinese culture and I’m glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not come to Anhui, my hometown, to have some fun.
Anhui Province lies in the east of China. The best time to come here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats. There are many famous places to see. For example, Mt. Huangshan, where you will see wonderful plants and special rocks. Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on. As a fan of Chinese culture, don’t forget to try green tea in Anhui which smells good and tastes better. What’s more, come and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!
Welcome to Anhui! I’m looking forward to seeing you here!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文规定我们以李华身份给自已笔友Dave写信，邀请他来你家乡—安徽一游，题目中列出了文章提纲，审题可知，短文应从如下几种内容论述：首先简介家乡位置；然后简介来这里最佳时候；接下来是简介家乡景点和文化，并给出提议。短文应使用一般目前时，注意谓语动词对形式。写作时应合理安排几种内容，分清主次，并注意上下文连贯。此外，英语体现习惯和汉语是不一样，因此写作时不能按照汉语思维逐词翻译，应从句子整体构造出发，写完整句子。如可以使用简单句构造，易于掌握，不容易出错。但为提高文章档次，也应穿插某些并列句构造或复合句，以及使用某些复杂构造，如非谓语动词、被动语态等。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀作文，短文作者根据题目规定邀请Dave来自已家乡旅游，并简介了家乡景点和文化。短文有如下几种特点：首先文章内容完整，包含了题目中规定所有内容，并对细节进行补充和修饰，使内容愈加充实、丰富。短文先对Dave发出邀请，然后详细简介了家乡位置、景点、文化等，并提出了提议。全文论述清晰，层次清晰，主次分明。第二，短文中使用了对时态和人称，语法规范，用词精确，句式构造完整，符合英语体现习惯。短文以一般目前时来论述，注意了谓语动词第三人称单数形式变化。句式构造以简单句为主，也使用了并列句、宾语从句、状语从句等复合句，尚有某些好句型，如The best time to come here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats、Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on.、What’s more, come and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!、I’m looking forward to seeing you here!等。

5．书面体现
根据下列表格提醒，写一篇题为Changes in Our Hometown英语短文．（80词左右）文章内容必须包含所给所有信息．开头已给出，不计入总词数．
内容要点：
过去
目前
1旧房
1高楼
2河水肮脏
2河水清澈（clean and clear）．
3步行、骑自行车上班
3乘公交车、小汽车上班
4道路狭窄（narrow）．
4街道宽阔（wide），洁净整洁
5居住条件（living conditions）差
5生活越来越好，环境（environment）越来越舒适．

6你感想…（写两到三句）

Changes in Our Hometown
In the past ten years，great changes have taken place in our hometown．

【答案】Changes in Our Hometown
In the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown. In the past, there used to be old houses. The river was very dirty. The roads were narrow and the living conditions were terrible. People were not rich. They went to work on foot or by bike. But now, there are many tall buildings in our hometown. We can see the clean river and the clear water . Even we can see fish in the water. There are many wide and clean roads. Our life is better and better The environment around us is more and more comfortable. People usually go to work by bus or by car.
I am glad to see these great changes in my hometown. But I think it’s still important to remember the past. It tells that we should cherish the present life.
【解析】
【详解】
亮点阐明：这篇习作层次清晰，内容饱满，体现流畅。文中使用了非常好短语，例如take place，in our hometown，in the past，used to be，go to do，on foot，by bike，better and better，more and more等。而I think it's still important to remember the past/It tells that we should cherish the present life.等宾语从句构造运用，丰富了习作内容，使体现多样，是本文最大亮点。
【点睛】
书面体现题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥作文。它规定将所规定材料内容经整理后展开思维，考察运用所学英语知识精确体现意思能力。因此，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自已熟悉单词、短语和句式，尽量使用高级词汇和较复杂句式构造以便得到较高分数。

6． “漂亮琼海我家，人人都要保护她”。自双创以来，我们生活环境得到了很大改观，人人积极参与双创活动，让人点赞文明行为随地可见。作为一名中学生，请你写一篇短文号召大家加入到双创活动中来。

规定：
1.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法对，书写规范；
2.必须包含所给提醒，并做合适拓展；
3. 行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；
4. 词数80左右，（短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
Since the government created the civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.
As junior high students,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Let’s take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.
【答案】Since the government created civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.
As junior high students, on the one hand, there are a lot of things we can do. We should be polite to others and try to behave well. It’s kind of you to help people in need. Meanwhile, We can help clean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier. Also, we can plant more trees and keep off grass. On the other hand, there are many things we shouldn’t do. We shouldn’t make a lot of noise loudly in the public. We can’t spit anywhere and we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldn’t break traffic rules.
Let’s take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.
【解析】
【详解】
琼海正在进行“双创”活动，即创立文明都市、创立健康都市，都市生活环境有了很大变化。这篇作文规定我们用英语写一篇短文，号召中学生们都参与到“双创”活动中来。题目中并没有规定详细写作内容，而是用图表形式，列出了写作提纲。通过审题可知，这篇短文我们应从两个方面来论述：即应当做什么；不应当做什么。根据这个内容，写作时，把短文提成两个层次，这样可以使文章构造清晰、条理。整篇短文应使用一般目前时态，第一人称we来论述。写作时应注意：首先英语体现习惯和汉语是不一样，不能逐词翻译，写汉语式英语，而应从句子整体构造考虑，使用恰当词汇、短语和句型，以常见主谓宾或者主系表构成简单句为主，穿插使用并列句或者复合句，变化文章节奏，提高文章档次。语句之间使用恰当连接成分，使文意连贯、流畅。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀作文，短文作者根据题目规定，向中学生们发出号召，共同参与到都市“双创”活动中来。首先短文内容完整，文章根据题目中列出图表，补充了详细写作内容，从应当做和不应当做两个方面，对中学生平常行为提出了规定。文章条理清晰，有层次。另一方面短文中使用了对时态和人称，语法规范，语言精确，语句通顺，符合英语体现习惯。短文中句子构造以简单句为主，也使用了并列句和复合句以及某些较复杂高级句式，语句之间也使用了很好连接成分，如We should be polite to others and try to behave well. 、It’s kind of you to help people in need. 、Meanwhile, We can help clean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier.、We can’t spit anywhere and we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldn’t break traffic rules.等等。

7．2月20日，中央宣传部授予北京楷模优秀群体“时代楷模”称号。时代楷模充足体现“爱国、敬业、诚信、友善”价值准则。
某网站正在开展以“向时代楷模学习”为主题英语征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈生活中你该怎么做，以及这样做意义。
提醒词语：pick up, rubbish, study, honest, important
提醒问题：● What should you do in your daily life? ● Why do you do so?
As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models.

【答案】例文
As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models. First, we can protect the environment. For example, we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on. Second, we shall respect people around us. Respect others to start from small things. Third, behave well. We should be kind to others, warm-hearted to everyone, and generous to our friends. By doing so, our world will become more and more beautiful.
【解析】
【详解】
题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，但写作时要按照应用文格式写，写作时承接短文开头，详细写出怎样做以及这样做意义。
例文点评：例文采用是一段式，人称用是第一人称复数形式，时态重要用是一般目前时，描述详细怎么做时，描写细致，条理清晰。
高分亮点：
短语：protect the environment；pick up the rubbish；behave well；be kind to sb；more and more beautiful。
句型：By doing so, our world will become more and more beautiful；we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on。

8．书面体现（本题15分）根据规定完毕短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定位置上。
为了使生活更美好，社会需要正能量（positive energy）。生活中，我们需要他人协助，也要学会协助他人。请你在网上给What would you do?本期节目留言，内容包括：
1. 你对节目中挺身而出顾客见解；
2. 说说你协助他人或他人协助你一件事例；
3. 呼吁大家互帮互助，彼此感恩，让社会充斥正能量。
作文规定：
1．不得照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实名称和学生真实姓名。
2．语句连贯，词数80个左右。 作文开头已经给出，不必抄写在试卷上，也不计入总词数。
In the program, a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop. _______
【答案】In the program, a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop. I really admire her because she was brave enough to help the woman in need.
The other day I saw a little girl crying at a street corner on my way home. I tried my best to make her stop crying. When I knew she was lost, I helped her make a call to her dad and stayed with her until he arrived. I found it pleasant to give others a hand.
In my opinion, we are supposed to help each other and be thankful for others’ help. I strongly believe helping others will fill our society with positive energy. As the saying goes, “The rose’s in her hand, the flavor in mine.”（113w）
【解析】
【详解】
本文属于话题作文，描述对节目中挺身而出顾客见解、发生在你身上正能量事件以及鼓励大家互相协助，并让世界充斥正能量。根据要体现内容确定并精确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可合适增长内容。
亮点阐明：这是一篇优秀作文，很好完毕了试题规定任务，语言体现符合英语习惯，精确运用时态、主谓一致，尤其合用某些亮点词句，如be for, adj enough to do, the other day, try one’s best, make sb do, make a call, give sb a hand, in one’s opinion, be supposed to, be filled with, the rose in her hand, the flavor in mine等。增强逻辑关系，增长上下文意思连贯，用词精确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
【点睛】
写作时可以从如下几种方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面体现关键。审题时要注意试题规定，抓住要点，词数符合规定。
构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定有关写作材料。一般书面体现给出话题是开放，而详细内容规定学生自已发挥，因此选择恰当素材也是使短文中心突出、明确关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作过程中我们要注意句子精确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用词语、短语及句型尽量用自已有把握词。同步还要注意使用恰当连词，使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分必要环节。这一步我们除了检查短文多种错误外，还要检查语法构造与否合理，有无反复、啰嗦语言，大小写与否对，格式与否对，词数与否符合规定等。

9．书面体现
初中就要毕业了，校报“英语角”栏目向同学们征集毕业晚会计划。假定你是李华，请根据要点 写一封信，说说你计划。
活动
毕业晚会
时间
6月28日晚上七点
地点
学校礼堂school hall
参与者
全体初三学生和老师
活动内容
1.
邀请校长作演讲；

2.
互赠礼品送祝福；

3.
各班演出精彩节目

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规定：1.要点完整，可合适发挥，使句子通顺，连贯; 2.对使用语态，语法对，书写整洁。 3.80词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数; 4.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名。
Dear editor,
I am very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation party.
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