高考英语书面表达应急训练-.ppt

,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,2013,年高考英语书面表达应急训练,高考书面表达各档次的给分范围和要求,第五档（,21-25,分）,完全完成了试题规定的任务,:,准确、清楚地表达了短文的内容，要点无遗漏,应用了较多的语法结构和词汇,语法结构和词汇有少许错误，但为尽可能使用较复杂表达方式所致；具备较强的语言应用能力,有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑,完全达到了预期的写作目的。,第四档（,16-20,分）,完成了试题规定的任务,:,比较准确、清楚地表达了短文的内容,应用,语法结构和词汇,能满足任务的要求,语法结构和词汇应用基本准确，少许错误主要是因为尝试较复,一家英文报刊在其网站上环保征集志愿者。假设你叫李华，是该报的一名读者，请给该报编辑部写一封信，谈谈你的申请的优势和理由。内容包括,:,你有做志愿者的经历,你对环保的想法和建议,你英语上的优势,Dear Editor,I am Li Hua,a reader of your paper.,Yours,Li Hua,审题,草稿,1.,列提纲,/,要点,2.,连词成句,3.,连句成篇,4.,润色修正,定稿,写作步骤,:,体裁,人称,时态,要求,字数,内容,应用文（书信格式）,第一,三人称,一般现在时,/,过去时,1.It is a great honor to be,2.have the experience in.,3.environmental problems,3.suggestion,4 how to contribute to,5.your advantages over others,1.,列提纲,/,要点,.Beijing hosted the 29th Olympic Games with great success.,The 29th Olympic Games were hosted in Beijing with great success.,2.,连词成句,The 29th Olympic Games;,over/finish/end/hold;Beijing,“,主动不如被动巧,”,(2006)“,我们每次可以借五本书,最多借十天”,E.g.:“We can borrow five books at most,and we can keep them for ten days.”,改成,At most five books can be borrowed at a time and they can be kept for ten days,.,collect some advice;how to use/make use of/make the best of the stadiums;Olympic Games,“,宾语从句是活宝,”,I hear,you are collecting some advice,on how to make the,best of,the stadiums after the 29th Olympic Games were hosted successfully,.,（,2005,）咨询旅游价格,Id like to know,if you have any special price for students.,（,2004,）推荐美国朋友参加比赛,I read in a newspaper today that,a“Learn Chinese,Sing Chinese Songs”Foreigners Talent Show will be held in Beijing Television Station on July 18.,contribute;suggestions,“,一些模板要记牢,”,I would like to contribute the following suggestions to you.,（,2007,）首,Im writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor.,尾,I look forward to hearing from you soon.,（,2006,）首,Thank you for your last letter asking about our library.,尾,Best wishes.,（,2005,）首,Im writing for more information about the day tour to London.,（,2004,）首,I read in a newspaper today that,尾,If there is anything I can do for you,I would be more than glad to help.,（,2002,）首,Im writing to tell you about the discussion,（,2001,）首,How nice to hear from you again.,尾,Best wishes,open;people/public;be used for/as;be made to;do some exercise/build our body/strengthen our bodies,“,定语从句必须要”,The stadiums can be opened to the public,where they can strengthen their bodies.,（,2007,）描述想找的笔友,In my mind,she is someone,who is interested in traveling,swimming,and playing table tennis.,The stadiums can be rented to sport companies which organize matches.,They can bring in more money/make more profits,“,分词结构不能少”,The stadiums can be rented to sport companies which organize matches,thus bringing in more money/making more profits.,giveto/rentto/be rented to;sport companies which organize matches/organizing matches make/create money;bring in money/make more profits,（,2009,）“,At about one oclock this afternoon,Tracy called,saying that,she couldnt meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to.”,(2005),咨询旅游价钱“,Because I am a student,Id like to know the price for students.”,改成”,Being a student,Id like to know the price for students.”,use it as/be used for/as/take it as/open it for;places of interest/tourist attractionsattract tourists/appeal to visitors/be attraction for visitors,They can be used as tourist attractions.And they can attract many visitors.,“,肯定不如双否好”,They,can never fail to,be used as tourist attractions which can attract many visitors.,In my opinion/as far as I am concerned./from my point of view,；,not waste/value/bring a bright future to their value;appreciate;,From my point of view,we should do what we can to make full use of the stadiums.,We bring a bright future to their value.,I would appreciate it very much if,you would take my advice into deep consideration.,高分口诀,“,主动不如被动巧,”,“,宾语从句是活宝,”,“,定语从句必须要,”,“,分词结构不能少,”,“,肯定不如双否好,”,“,陈述不如倒装妙,”,“,长句短句结合造,”,“,一些模板要记牢,”,增加高级结构,二,.,使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档,三,.,巧用倒装增强句子表现力,四,.,一,.,使用较高级词汇,强调句,五,.,With,短语复合结构,1.Many people want to visit the stadium,.,2.The stadium is useful.,Many people are dying to visit the stadium.,The stadium is of great value.,一,.,使用较高级词汇,1.The 29th Olympic Games were successfully ended.It left many stadiums unused,The 29th Olympic Games were successfully ended,leaving many stadiums unused.,二,.,使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档,1.We can let the stadiums make sense.Only when we make full use of the stadiums,2.The stadiums can be rented to the physical company to create more economic profits.they can be the places to appeal visitors to pay a visit.,Only when we make full use of the stadiums can we let them make sense.,Not only can the stadiums be rented to the physical company to create more economic profits,but also they can be the places to appeal visitors to pay a visit.,三,.,巧用倒装增强句子表现力,We should take,the Olympic stadiums,into consideration after Beijing hosted the games successfully.,The 29th Olympic Games were ended successfully.we start talking about how to use the stadiums properly for our daily lives,It is the Olympic stadiums that we should take into consideration after Beijing hosted the games successfully.,With the 29th Olympic Games ended successfully,we start talking about how to use the stadiums properly for our daily lives.,四,.,强调句,五,.,With,短语复合结构,注意：“中式英语”的问题,这些体育馆场地可,向公众开放,用来健身,The stadiums can,open to people,for do exercise use.,The stadiums can,be opened to,people for,doing,exercises.,表妹,watch sister/clock sister,cousin,好好学习，天天向上。,good good study,day day up.,Study hard,/(Get down to your studies,)and you will make progress everyday.,人山人海,people mountain and people sea.,a large crowd of people/a sea of faces,七上八下,seven up and eight down.,Unsettled/AT SIXES AND SEVENS.,等车,wait the bus,wait for the bus,句号,。,.,省略号,红茶,red tea,black tea,大雨,big rain,heavy rain,打六折,60%discount,40%discount,气球在桥上,汉语,可以指气球在桥面上，也可以指气球在桥的上空,英语,要用不同介词来描写点、线、面和体的不同维度关系。,The balloon is on the bridge.,表示气球是接触桥面的，是静止状态,The balloon is above the bridge,说明气球在桥上面，但不一定在垂直的上方,The balloon is over the bridge.,表示气球在桥的上空，很可能是飘过的，是动态的。,It is a great honor to be an environmental volunteer.,I have the experience in doing such a kind of job,The present environment problems as flows;carbon emission,global warming,I would like to contribute the following suggestions to you.,These problems wont get solved until everyone does something to stop them.,3.,连句成段,/,成篇,句间连词：,1,）,first,second,third,last,2,）,firstly,secondly,thirdly,finally,3,）,the first,the second,the third,the last,4,）,in the first place,in the second place,in the third place,lastly,5,）,to begin with,then,furthermore,finally,（强烈推荐）,6,）,to start with,next,in addition,finally,（强烈推荐）,7,）,first and foremost,besides,last but not least,（强烈推荐）,8,）,most important of all,moreover,finally,9,）,on one hand,on the other hand,（适用于两点的情况）,10,）,for one thing,for another thing,（适用于两点的情况）,使用恰当的连接词,逻辑角度,合适的过渡性词汇,排序关系,并列关系,举例关系,转折关系,因果关系,归纳总结,递进关系,first;firstly;second;secondly;last but not least,and;too;as well as;along with;together with,for example;for instance;like;such as;as to,but;however;while;though;on the contrary,because;since;thanks to;as a result/consequence(of);thus;therefore,in a word;in short;to sum up;in conclusion,whats more;besides;to make matters worse;whats worse;worse still;furthermore,4.,润色修正,I hear you were advertising for environmental volunteer.In my opinion,it is a great,honor to be an environmental volunteer.,First of all,I would like to introduce some of my advantages to be the volunteer.I was,once an volunteer in an non profit organization so I have the experience in doing such a,job.Secondly,everyone in the world has realized the environmental problems such as,carbon emission,global warming and so on,which have caused great trouble to the world,we live in.we wont have a green world until everyone does something.Finally studying,abroad for four years I have the language advantage.I speak perfect english.Considering,all above I cant wait to apply for it,I would appreciate it if you can give me the chance.I am looking forward to your reply.,问题小结：,1.,时态语态问题,2.,介词短语问题,3.,连词问题,4.,词性混淆问题,5.,冠词问题,6.,定语从句关系词问题,7.,非谓语动词问题,8.,结构问题,9.,固定搭配问题,10.,代词问题,定稿：誊写,合 格,