How-to-polish-your-writing11上课讲义.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,How-to-polish-your-writing11,(A),(B),19th CPC National Congress started,on October 18,th,in Beijing,.,It is,on October 18,th,that,19th CPC National Congress started in Beijing,.,(,强调句,),Task1:Which sentence is better?Why?,(A),(B),He is a handsome boy.He always appears in my dream.,He is a handsome boy,who,always appears in my dream.,(,定语从句,),Which sentence is better?Why?,(A),(B),Which sentence is better?Why?,She,masters,both English and Chinese.,She,has a good command of,both,English and Chinese.,高级短语,(A),(B),Which sentence is better?Why?,Their homework was finished,they felt happy.,With,their homework finished,they felt happy.,(with,复合结构,),(A),(B),Which sentence is better?Why?,(,高级词汇,),The little girl did a,good,performance,in,Chinese Poetry Conference.,The little girl did a,wonderful,performance,in,Chinese Poetry Conference.,Surounded,by fans,Zhao Liying had a photo taken.,Z,hao liying was surounded by fans.Zhao Liying had a photo taken.,Which sentence is better?Why?,(A),(B),(,非谓语现在分词作伴随状语,),We can use advanced words and,sentences to make our writing more attractive.,Polish our writing,advanced words,advanced words and sentences,advanced sentences,advanced words and expressions,Two ways,Way 1:Advanced words and exprssions,(1):Advanced expressions.,高级短语,I,want,an iphone 8.,I _ an iphone 8.,be eager/dying for;have a strong desire for;look forward to;,(2):Advanced words.,高级词汇,It is,good,to go for a spring outing.,It is _ to go for a spring outing.,(enjoyable,beneficial,worthwhile),long for,wonderful,(3).Transformation of part of speech,词性转换,It is,important,to have a short break from daily routine.,It is,of _,to,have a short break.,.,importance,(4).Avoid repeating,避免重复,Some students,think,that it s worthwhile to go for spring outing,while others,think,that it is a waste of time.,Some students,_,that,it is worthwhile to go for a spring outing,while others _ that it is a waste of time.,argue/insist/believe,claim/,suppose,Way1:,advanced words and phrases;,transformation of part of speech;,avoid repeating,；,Task2:Beautify words and expressions by using words.,1.,He was so,angry,that she had forgotten his birthday.,He was so _ that she had forgotten his birthday.,2.A short break from routine will,benefit,our study.,A short break from routine is _ our study.,A short break from routine is _ our study.,3.They are not,satisfied,with their academic results.,Their academic results,are,beyond their,_.4.It is,obvious,that a refreshed mind will handle your,school work more efficiently.,_,a refreshed mind will handle your school,work more efficiently.,beneficial to,satisfaction,annoyed,Obviously,of benefit,5.,He,spends,all his spare time,in,reading.,6.The Internet is playing a,more and more,important part in our life.,7.He,likes,playing computer games.,grow interested in;have a preference for;have an affection for;be keen on;,He,devotes,all his spare time,to,reading,The Internet is playing an,increasingly,important part,in our life.,He,is fond of,playing computer games.,8.,We should,use,every minute to study English.,We should,make,use of/take advantage of,every minute to study English.,9.The Internet,lets,us communicate with each other conveniently.,The Internet,enables,us,to,communicate with each other conveniently.,The Internet,makes it possible for,us,to,communicate with each other conveniently.,10.Plenty of memory work,is,undoubtedly,helpful to,English study.,Plenty of memory work will undoubtedly,contribute to,English study.,强调句,倒装句,with,复合结构,定语从句,名词性从句,非谓语动词,感叹句,Way 2:Advanced sentences,How many advanced sentences have you learned,？,句式多样，文章增,“靓”,被动句,Task3:Beautify sentences,：,Discuss with your partner in 2ms.,1.I like the,novel.Its cover is fascinating.,(,定从,),I like the novel whose cover is fascinating.,She always sings while walking her dog.,2.She always sings while she is walking her dog.,（状从省略）,3.You can solve this problem only in this way.,（,倒装句,）,Only in this way can you solve this problem.,Way2:Advanced sentences,As long as/If we study harder at English,we are bound to make progress.,5.He is a helpful teacher!,（感叹句）,What a helpful teacher he is!/How helpful a teacher he is.,6.We study harder at English.,We are bound to make progress.,(,条件状语从句,),4.My uncle was drunk.He soon found the car out of his control.,(sothat,句式,),My uncle was so drunk that he soon found the car out of his control.,8.When he spoke,he felt more and more excited.,（,用,the morethe more,句型,）,The more he spoke,the more excited he felt.,9.She came into the classroom.,She was smiling.,She came into the classroom,s,miling,7.He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.,(,使用强调句型,it be not until,被强调部分,that.,),It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.,(,非谓语现在分词作伴随状语,),With the difficult task finished,I felt proud.,10.The difficult task was finished.I felt proud,(with,复合结构,),11.,Although,Im weak,I will make efforts.(,表语,as,主系倒装,),Weak as I am,I will make efforts.,12.We,must take,measures to stop pollution.(,被动句,),Measures must be taken to stop pollution.,Task4:,Check yourself.,Polish a paragraph by using your advanced words and sentences in your group in 5ms,Our school is a modern school.,It,makes me very proud.,Many,students,try their best,to be admitted to key universities.,I am a student in N2 senior high school.In the school I learn a lot from my teachers.,I didnt know how to study English,until I was told by them.,I can write better writings only In the way.,Although my English is poor ,I have confidence in myself.,Suggested answers:read it and discuss with your partners.,1.,（定语从句）,:,Our school is a modern school,which,makes me very proud.,2.,A lo,t of/a quantity of/a great number of,students,spare no effort to,be admitted to key universities.,3.I am a student in N2 senior high school,（定语从句）,where,I learned a lot from my teachers.,4.,not until,强调句）,It was,not until,I was told by them,that,I knew the ways to study English.,5.,(,使用倒装句,),Only,In that way,can,I make better writings.,6.Poor,as,my English is ,I have confidence in it.,Im Li Hua.I have learned that there will be held a Chinese paper-cutting exhibition.,Its,subject is,about Chinese festivals.,Knowing that you,like,Chinese traditional culture,I am writing the e-mail to invite you to,visit,t,he exhibition.,The exhibition will be held in the museum from 9a.m.to 7pm.on June 15th.,It,will last for only one day.,The works of paper-cutting artists from all over China,will be showed.,You will be surprised.,Therefore,in the exhibition,you can enjoy the skills of these paper-cutting artists,when you are getting to,know more about the customs of our Chinese traditional festivals from these beautiful works.,It is,useful and valuable,for you.,You want to come there.Please contact me.,Task 5,：,2017,高考全国,2,卷作文,Im Li Hua.I have learned that there will be held a Chinese paper-cutting exhibition,whose,subject is about Chinese festivals.,（定从）,Knowing that you,are fond of/are keen on/have a preference for,Chinese traditional culture,(,短语优先,),I am writing the e-mail to invite you to,pay a visit to(,词性转换,),the exhibition.The exhibition will be held in the museum from 9a.m.to 7pm.on June 15th,which,will last for only one day.,（,定从,）,On that day,with,the works of paper-cutting artists from all over China,to show,，,you will be surprised(,with,复合结构,).Therefore,in the exhibition,you can enjoy the skills of these paper-cutting artists,when,getting,to know more about the customs of our Chinese traditional festivals from these beautiful works.,（省略状语从句）,It is of use and value for you.,(,词性转换,),If,you want to come there.Please contact me.(,条件状语从句,),Only in these ways,can we make our writing more cohesive,，,attractive and full of varieties.,Gifts in your future learning:,1.Collect advanced words/sentences;,2.Read more;,3.Practice makes perfect;,Homework,书面表达：,为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“,heart to heart”,专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑,Jamie,收到一封署名为,Worried,的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：今日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活收到了影响。请你用英文给该同学写一封回信。,内容要点,(key points),如下：,1,、表示理解并给予安慰；,2,、提出建议并说明理由,注意：,1,、词数,120,左右；,2,、信的,开头,已写好，不计入总词数。,参考词汇：,temper,n.,脾气，情绪,Hi Worried,，,Im sorry to know that youre having such a bad time at the moment.,此课件下载可自行编辑修改，仅供参考！感谢您的支持，我们努力做得更好！谢谢,