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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,*,十二、开放性作文写作,第1页,写作指南,惯用句型,写作实例,佳作向导,范文体验,第2页,写作指南,开放性作文是一个留给考生更多自由发挥空间书面表示题型。命题侧重考查两种文体:记叙文和议论文。侧重考查考生想象能力、发散思维能力、逻辑归纳能力、提炼及阐述自己观点能力。,针对开放性作文灵活性与开放性,考生能够按以下步骤写作:,一、认真审题,把握要求,找准提醒语中关键句。,开放性作文需要考生依据试题提醒要求进行立意,确定文章中心思想。立意基础是审题。所以,考生在着手写作之前,要认真审题,把握命题要求,找准提醒语中关键句。,二、依据关键句,草拟提要,梳理文章脉络。,经过认真审题,找准关键句以后,下一步任务就是安排已选定材料,为自己心中所构想材料草拟一个提要,梳理清楚先后次序。这么写起来就会有条不紊、条理清楚、详略得当,使得所写文章中心突出。,第3页,三、准确定位人称、时态。遣词造句要扬长避短或使用自己熟悉名句名言。,1.开放性作文通常以提供一个故事材料片段为主。大部分情况下,文中所使用动词时态以普通现在时为主,但人称使用较为灵活,考生应该依据文章提醒确定人称。,2.在人称、时态准确定位以后,考生应将重点放在文章遣词造句上。应尽可能利用自己熟悉单词、短语和句型来灵活表示。要防止单词、短语和句型重复使用。,简而言之,开放性作文写作思绪和汉语作文非常相同。首先要明确主题,然后依据主题构建文章主体结构,即写作提要,最终在写作过程中要突出主题、层次分明。,第4页,惯用句型,From the picture,I can see a mother bird flying in the sky.,从这幅图上我看到一只鸟妈妈在天上翱翔。,If I could give my younger self one piece of advice,I would,say“Take your education very seriously;your future depends,on it.”(,重庆,),假如我能给年轻我一点提议,我会说:“要尤其重视你教育,你未,来取决于它。”,We may have different opinions in organizing class activities.,(浙江),我们可能在组织班级活动中有不一样意见。,From this experience I have learnt that questioning can serve,as a bridge that helps us to seek the truth.(,湖北,),从这次经历中,我学会了提问能够作为一个桥梁,帮助我们寻找真相。,第5页,From my own experience,I learn that several words of praise,can make a great difference to someone,.(湖南),从我自己经历中,我学到了几句赞美话会对某人有很大影响。,As the old proverb says,.,it reminds us that.Indeed,we,can learn a lot from it.,正如俗语所说,它提醒我们确实,我们从中受益匪浅。,I think that this picture tries to tell us that we should,always look into the future with hope and confidence.我想这,幅图是想告诉我们应该一直满怀希望和信心展望未来。,From the picture we can draw a conclusion that.,从这幅图里,我们能够得出结论。,第6页,写作实例,“Planning is good,but doing is better”是一句英语名言。请以此为题用英语写一篇100词左右短文。要求以下:,1.简述你对这句名言了解;,2.用一个详细事例加以说明;,3.给出恰当结尾。,注意,:1.文章标题已给出(不计词数);,2.文中不得以任何形式透露地域、学校、老师或同学姓名等真实信息,不然按作弊行为认定。,Planning Is Good,But Doing Is Better,第7页,佳作向导,1.文体信息,(1)体裁:议论文格式,夹叙夹议;,(2)时态:简述名言用普通现在时,详细事例用普通过去时;,(3)人称:第一人称为主。,2.思绪点拨,从文章体裁分析,这是较经典开放性写作,主要让学生就“Planning is good,but doing is better”这一名言进行议论,发表自己看法,同,时需要结合详细事例而展开叙述。文章能够分三部分来写:,第一部分:了解名言;,第二部分:重点讲述事例,展现该名言作用;,第三部分:简明总结。,第8页,范文体验,Planning Is Good,But Doing Is Better,Planning is good as it decides in detail,.,(我们怎样做想做事情).However,a plan can bear no fruit without,(实际上被执行).,My experience in the English speech contest last October is a case in point.A month before the event,I spent hours working out a schedule,(列出了我目标和实际步骤).After that,I,(开始着手)read widely for an inspiring topic,wrote a speech,and practiced its delivery in beautiful pronunciation with good public speech skills.I finally came out of the contest,(作为一等奖取得者).,I know how I achieved my success.It came from,.,(好计划与更加好执行结合).,答案:,how we do what we want to do,being actually carried out,outlining my goals and practical steps,set out to,as the first prize winner,good planning and better doing combined,第9页,
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