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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,雅思写作task 1,By Eileen,1/12,一图表介绍：,图表分类：,图表通常分为两大类。一类是数据图，包含曲线图（graph/line chart），柱状图（bar chart/column chart），饼状图（pie chart）和表格（table）。,另一类是示意图/流程图（diagram/flow chart）。,当前在雅思索试中主要出现是数据图。,图表出题频率：最多柱状图，其次曲线图，再者饼状图，表格。,图表大忌：切忌发表个人观点和看法，切忌照搬题目、切忌简单罗列数据、防止词汇重复,写作注意事项：,词汇语法：,词汇准确多样，不能重复,those who work in=people working in=the employee in,句子：结构不能太简单，一句话要同时写两个对象特征。,逻辑：句子里，句子与句子之间，段与段之间都要使用表示对比，转折，相同连词或副词。,时态：第一句使用普通现在时，主体部分大多用普通过去式。,2/12,单条曲线（,single line graph,）,You should spend about,20 minutes,on this task.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph below.You should write,at least 150 words.,3/12,内容,分析,The graph shows the number of cases of X disease in Someland between the years 1960 and 1995.As an overall trend,it is clear that the numerber of cases of the disease increased fairly rapidly until the mid seventies,and remained constant for around a decade at 500 cases before dropping to zero in the late 1980s.,1.起始段，对曲线信息进行概括。,2.对整个曲线进行了概括性描述；使用了连接词and，until，befor来组成连贯句子。,In 1960,the number of cases stood at,approximately,100.That number rose,steadily,to 200 by 1969 and then more,sharply,to 500 in 1977.At this point the number of cases remained,stable,until 1984 before,plummeting,to zero by 1988.From 1988 to 1995 Someland was free of the disease.,1.对曲线各个组成部分进行了细致描述。,2.段落中使用了不一样程度动词、形容词和副词来准确描述曲线。将时间和数字包含进来反应曲线信息。,In conclusion,the graph shows that the disease was increasingly prevalent until the 1980s when it was eradicated from Someland.,再次对曲线进行总结,4/12,引言：,1.直接开门见山,给曲线下定义，即日期，地点，曲线讲述了什么内容。（第一句，,注意时态用普通现在时,）,The graph shows.,(chart,table,diagram)(indicates,illustrates,describes,gives,presents,reveals),eg：,The graph shows the number of cases of X disease in Someland between the years 1960 and 1995,2.第二句，第三句要总结出曲线总体趋势（,要注意使用时态,）,eg：,It can be clearly seen that X disease increased rapidly to 500 cases around the 1980s and then dropped to zero before 1999,while Y disease fell consistently from a high point of nearly 600 case in1960 to less that 100 cases in 1996,5/12,主体：,曲线普通以,年代次序,来显示信息，所以最恰当逻辑次序是从最早时间一直写到最晚时间。,6/12,结束句：,汇报要用一两句话来概括内容，得出一个相关结论,eg：,In conclusion,the graph shows that the disease was increasingly prevalent until the 1980s when it was eradicated from Someland.,7/12,防止重复：,假如是准确使用了各种结构和大量词汇，得分就会很高。,8/12,两条曲线,You should spend about,20 minutes,on this task.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph below.You should write,at least 150 words.,9/12,考生答卷一：,The graph shows the rate of smoking in Someland.,I,n1960,600 men in every 1000 was smoking.This number decreased gradually to 500 by 1974 and continued to decrease but more steeply to 300 in 1996.In contrast the rate of women smokers in1960 was very low at onlt 80 in every1000.This number incresed to 170 by 1968 and increased again but more steeply to 320 in 1977.The rate of female smokers then remained stable at 320 until 1984 at which point the figures began to decline and had dropped to 250 by 1995.,考生答卷二,The graph compares the rate of smoking in men and women in Someland between the years1960 and.It can be clearly seen that the rate of smoking for both men and women iacurrently declining and that fewer women have smoked throughout the period.,In 1960,600men in ever 1000 was smoking.This number decreased gradually to 500 by 1974 and continued to decrese but more steeply to 250 in.In contract,the rate of smoking in women in1960 was very low at only 80 in ever 1000.By 1968 this increased to 170,and increased again but more steeply to 320 in 1977.The rate of female smokers then remained stable at 320 until 1984 at which point the figures began to decline and had dropped to 200 by.,In conclusion,we can see that the rate of smoking in men dropped throughout the whole period but was always at a higher level than the female figures,The rate of smoking inwomen increased until 1977 but then decreased for the rest the period.,10/12,考生答卷一：,The graph shows the rate of smoking in Someland.,I,n1960,600 men in every 1000 was smoking.This number decreased gradually to 500 by 1974 and continued to decrease but more steeply to 300 in 1996.In contrast the rate of women smokers in1960 was very low at onlt 80 in every1000.This number incresed to 170 by 1968 and increased again but more steeply to 320 in 1977.The rate of female smokers then remained stable at 320 until 1984 at which point the figures began to decline and had dropped to 250 by 1995.,考生答卷二,The graph compares the rate of smoking in men and women in Someland between the years1960 and.,It can be clearly seen that the rate of smoking for both men and women is currently declining and that fewer women have smoked throughout the period.,In 1960,600men in ever 1000 was smoking.This number decreased gradually to 500 by 1974 and continued to decrese but more steeply to 250 in.In contract,the rate of smoking in women in1960 was very low at only 80 in ever 1000.By 1968 this increased to 170,and increased again but more steeply to 320 in 1977.The rate of female smokers then remained stable at 320 until 1984 at which point the figures began to decline and had dropped to 200 by.,In conclusion,we can see that the rate of smoking in men dropped throughout the whole period but was always at a higher level than the female figures,The rate of smoking inwomen increased until 1977 but then decreased for the rest the period.,11/12,三条曲线,12/12,
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