应用文之感谢信市公开课一等奖省赛课微课金奖课件.pptx

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,感谢信,第1页,【感激信三要素】,1.,提出感激,2.,感激原因,（他人做了什么事让你感激）3.,怎样回报（,好好学习，继续努力等）,【优异句式】,1.I am writing to,extend（,给予;发出,）my gratitude to you,because,2.It is your unreserved help that,enables me to obtain,this,splendid opportunity,of further education.,3.For the following two years I will study hard to,reciprocate(回报)your sincere help and expectations with excellent grades,.,第2页,1Thank you so much for.非常感激,2I would like to,thank you from the bottom of my heart,for.我由衷地感激你,3Im writing to,express my sincere gratitude for,.写此信来表示我真挚谢意,4,Im grateful to,you,for,.因你，我深表谢意。,5I truly,appreciate your,.我真诚感激你,6,Words fail to convey my gratitude,to you.我对你感激之情难以用言语表示。,7I take the opportunity to express to you,my deep appreciation for,.我借此机会向你表示我深深谢意,8Its kind and generous of you to do this for me and I do,appreciate it,more than I can say.你如此善良和慷慨地帮助我，我不胜感激,第3页,【写作模板】,Dear_，,I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for_(感激原因)If it had not been for your assistance in_(对方给你详细帮助)，I fear that I would have been_(没有对方帮助会产生后果),Everyone agrees that it was you who_(给出细节),Again，I would like to express my warm thanks to you！Please accept my gratitude.,Yours sincerely，,Li Hua,第4页,假定你是李华，你们学校和一所美国中学签署了教师交流协议。在过去一年里，你们英文老师是来自这所中学Sue Wood。很快前她返回美国任教。请你依据写作关键点和要求给Sue写封电子邮件。,写作关键点：,1.对她表示感激之意;(议论),2.介绍她离开后你自己及班里发生事情;（记叙）,3.希望了解她近况。（问询）,要求：1.短文须写在答题卡指定区域。,2.短文词数不少于100（不含已写好部分）。,3.内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯；,4.书写须清楚、工整。,5.邮件中不能表示本人真实信息。,第5页,【优异满分范文一】,Dear Sue,Im Li Hua,one of your students in China.Its almost a month since you left us.We all miss you and,are very grateful for what you did for us,.,We are busy as usual.We,had,an English speech contest,the other day,.I won the first prize!This again,reminds me of,all your kind help.Do you still remember the trees we planted together on the hill behind the school?Yesterday,we went there and watered them.The tree you planted yourself is growing well,and the whole class decided to name it Sue Wood.Will you come back to see Sue Wood?,How is everything with you lately?We hope to know more about you and your American students.Hope to,keep in close touch,.,All the best.,Yours,Li Hua,第6页,【优异满分范文二】,Dear Sue,How are you doing?,I am writing this letter,to say thank you.,First and foremost,it is clear that you,just like our foreign mother,were very patient to us.,Additionally,needless to say,you taught me a lot,not only English knowledge but also your life wisdom；,consequently,all of us,have fallen in love with,English and study.,Last but certainly not least,there is no doubt that we had a great time together,which we will,keep in mind,forever.,By the way,I cant wait to tell you something new about my class.After you left for the America,we had an English competition.We all did very well,using the knowledge,you told us.,No one can deny,you helped us so much!,Sue,can you give me some information about your life in America?I miss you so much.I am looking forward to your early reply!,Best wishes!,Yours love/truly,Li Hua,第7页,假设你是李华，梁教授去年六月推荐你去悉尼大学深造，现在你已经被悉尼大学化学学院录用，请写封信向梁教授,表示感激,。,Dear Professor Liang,I am writing to,extend my gratitude to you,because with your help I am now a student of Chemistry Department of Sydney University.Last June,when I,applied to,become a graduate student of Sydney University,you really gave me a lot of valuable help.You not only wrote a recommendation（推荐）for me to Professor Wells who works in the Sydney University but also,gave me careful and patient instructions,on how to,fill the application forms and write the application letters,.It is your unreserved(无保留）help that enables me to obtain this splendid（极好）opportunity of further education.For the following two years I will study hard to reciprocate（回报）your sincere help and expectations with excellent grades.,Yours truly,Zhang Ying,第8页,假设你是李华，你上星期参观伦敦，当初你爸一个朋友Rogers先生对你照料有加，请写封信表示你对他,感激。,Dear Sarah,I am,terribly sorry,to tell you that I am unable to attend your birthday party next Thursday evening.That is,owing to,the fact that my younger brother suddenly fell ill and was taken to a hospital this morning.I have to go there immediately and take care of him.,As told by the doctor in charge,it will take around five days for him to recover and I have,asked,my boss,for a leave,.I,really regret,that I cannot go to celebrate your birthday personally and would miss the perfect chance of enjoying myself with all our old friends.I have chosen a small gift for you and will send it to you tomorrow to show my best wishes.Besides,please,give my regards to,our friends when you meet them at the party.,Cordially,（sincerely）,Li Hua,第9页,假设你叫李华，暑假期间在纽约旅游时借宿在父亲朋友格林先生家，请依据以下提醒，写一封电子邮件,谢谢,格林先生一家招待。,1.谢谢格林先生和夫人热情款待及照料；,2.格林夫人做菜非常好吃，希望以后还有机会吃到；,3.感激格林先生和夫人陪你练习英语口语；,4.欢迎格林先生和夫人来中国旅游。,注意：,1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；,2.词数100左右；,3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。,Dear Mr and Mrs Green,I am writing to thank you for your warm hospitality which I enjoyed when I was in New York.,Yours sincerely,Li Hua,第10页,Dear Mr and Mrs Green,I am writing to,thank you for your warm hospitality,which I enjoyed when I was in New York.,It was very kind of you to,offer,me a comfortable and clean room in your house when I was in New York.I like the delicious food cooked by Mrs Green,which made my journey more unforgettable,.,Hopefully,I can have the chance to,taste it,in the future.,In addition,I really,appreciated your practicing oral English,with me and I have,made great progress,in my spoken English.The stay in New York has greatly,enriched my experience and widely broadened my mind,.,I really hope you can come to China for a visit when,it is convenient for you,.,Yours sincerely,Li Hua,第11页,假如你是小华，上个月刚才过了18岁生日，以为自己已经是大人了，于是你想就父母对你关心和你今后打算，以书信形式同父母谈谈。信主要内容以下：,1.对父母关心和照料表示感激之情；,2.取得高考好成绩，进入理想大学；,注意：,1.词数120左右；、2.能够适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；,3.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。,Dear Mum and Dad,Im writing to you about my gratitude for your having brought me up and my future plan.,Yours sincerely,Xiao Hua,第12页,Dear Mum and Dad,Im writing to you about,my gratitude,for your having,brought me up,and my future plan.,I celebrated my 18th birthday last month,which means that I have been already an adult.I am so,grateful to,you that I dont know how to express it.,First,thank you for,providing me with good living environment,.,Second,when I meet with difficulties,you always give me encouragement and good advice.,Besides these,you are always teaching me how to become a good man.,Now,I am a senior three student.The most important thing that I am facing is the National College Entrance Examinations.I am determined to try my best to pass the competitive exams.I believe I can,enter my ideal key university through my efforts,.,On the other hand,I want to be,an independent man.With the development of this society,I will,face a more competitive society,in the future,so I will develop myself and,make good preparations for,it.,Yours sincerely,Xiao Hua,第13页,第14页,