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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,The Beauty of,Writing,1/73,Why is writing so tough?,Input,Output,2/73,高考作文高分卷特点,外在美,：第一印象很主要！书写清楚，字母匀称，词、行间距适当，卷面整齐。,结构美,：有合理段落层次，多为,3,段式，条理清楚；每段有每段主题。,3/73,词汇美,：,词汇反应你知识贮存量多少，也是衡量英语水平一个主要标志。,like,be fond of,be addicted to/help,do sb a favor,句式美,：,利用得当,高级句式结构,能够给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章所以而生辉。,衔接美,：,使用恰当,连接词,，对写一篇有“英语味”文章很主要，能使文章上下衔接自然、条理清楚。,4/73,你校英语社团部要组织一次英语赛，就“是否应该缩短中学生在校时间为,8,小时”这一论题进行辩论，请你作为正方代表，写一份讲话稿，内容关键点以下：,1.,确保充分睡眠,2.,提升学习效率,3.,增加自主学习时间 注意：,1.,词数,100,左右,2.,能够适当增加细节，以使行文连贯,3.,辩论稿开头已为你写好（不计入总词数）。,As a senior high student,I strongly recommend that,5/73,语法篇,6/73,这第一句写,7/73,I strongly recommend that This is right we as a senior high student.,8/73,I strongly recommend that should shorten school time into eight hours.,9/73,你再看这开头,10/73,I strongly recommend that the time students devoted to studying in school should be reduced to eight hours a day.The main reasons accounting for it are as follows.,11/73,这动词错,12/73,Short students time in school can have a good effect on study,it can important for students study xiaolu,and increase students own time.,13/73,原来改书面表示就是改错,14/73,In my opinion,we must have enough time to study,but we also should keep enough time to relax and sleep,either of them are important.Because of we have time to relax,we can study energetic.Reduce study time also can improve the quality of our school life.,15/73,这词汇,16/73,17/73,你再看这词汇,18/73,19/73,观赏一下这篇文章句式结构,20/73,If equal amount of work have to be accomplished with a declined school time,study efficiently is expected to be enhanced.Moreover,extra-curricular time will make up more of the students schedule.That is to say,chances are we can make a better use of our time.,21/73,卷面篇,22/73,养眼,23/73,24/73,25/73,26/73,27/73,28/73,29/73,30/73,当批到下午两点看到了它们,31/73,太挤了,32/73,太乱了,33/73,太空了,34/73,太潦草了,35/73,太花了,36/73,太没谱了,37/73,老师最恨作文,38/73,大锅，标点呢？段呢？,39/73,姐，你长发及腰字体难掩你每句都错事实啊！,40/73,神，你别抄阅读了解行不？俺们也会看试卷！,41/73,老师最喜欢作文,42/73,Great minds think alike!,43/73,一点提醒,44/73,好练字,45/73,笔,46/73,笔,47/73,过长,48/73,答题不可越界,49/73,作文五档：（从教师阅卷印象角度划分）,漂漂亮亮（,2125,分）,有模有样（,1620,分）,马马虎虎（,1115,分）,稀里糊涂（,610,分）,一塌糊涂 （,05,分）,50/73,Three Rules:,1.You learn to write by writing.,2.There is no good writing;only good rewriting.,3.When in doubt,refer to Rule No.1 and 2.,51/73,Five Steps:,Analyze the writing task.,Organize it.,Draft.,Revise.,Edit.,52/73,53/73,高考英语写作中,怎样使用复杂结构,54/73,1.,适当语态,2.,使用不定式,3.,使用过去分词,4.,使用,V.+ing,形式,5.,使用名词性从句,6.,使用定语从句,7.,使用虚拟语气,8.,使用倒装句,感叹句,怎样利用复杂结构：,55/73,怎样利用复杂结构：,1.,主动转被动,People suggest that the conference be put off.(,普通,),that the conference be put off.,(,高级,),The advisor is expected to work,4 hours a week.,We expect the advisor to work 4 hours a week.,It is suggested,56/73,2.,使用不定式,3.,使用过去分词,In order to earn money by myself and broaden my horizons,She walked out of the room and many students followed her.(,普通,),she,walked out of the room,.,(,高级,),，,I intend to look for a part-time job as a salesman.,（为了独立盈利和拓宽视野）,Followed by many students,57/73,4.,使用,v-ing,形式,2,）,Ill,visit some famous scenic spots such as Mount Tai during the vacation.,（天气允许话）,1,）,Now our school has three teachers.They teach 48 pupils.(,普通,),Now our School has three teachers,，,Weather permitting,teaching,48 pupils,.,伴随状语,58/73,What is the most important is that,5.,使用名词性从句,2,.,I can help children improve their English.(,最为主要是,),1.I am sorry.I didn,t reply without delay.,I am sorry that I didn,t reply without delay.,59/73,6.,使用定语从句,1,）,The girl is spoken highly of.Her composition was well written.(,普通,),The girl,was,highly,spoken of.,(,高级,),2,),maybe I will work as a volunteer for a school as a teaching assistant_.(,这将丰富我生活,),which is able to enrich my life.,which will make my life colorful.,whose composition was well written,enriching my life,60/73,7.,使用虚拟语气,我相信假如你是我，你也会做出一样选择。,I believe that,if you were me,you would make the same choice.,61/73,8.,使用倒装句、感叹句,earn money by myself,but also it will broaden my horizons.,(,我不但能独立盈利,),1.,I would read and reply your email as soon as I received it.,(,我多么希望,),2.not only,but also,引发倒装,How I wish,Not only can I,62/73,高考英语写作中,要,学会使用恰当关联词,63/73,III.,惯用,连接词,1.,表示递进,;,在同一话题上补充内容,另外，还有,：,whats more;besides;,also;moreover;in addition,2.,表示转折关系,不过，然而，相反,：,but;however;yet;,instead;on the other hand;,on the contrary.,64/73,3.,表示因果关系,因为，所以，所以,:,since;as;,because(of);so;thus;therefore;as a result;,4.,表示条件关系,假如，只要,:,if;on condition(that);,as long as,除非,:,unless,不然,:,or else,65/73,5.,表示时间关系,当,时候,:,when;while,在,之后,:,after,在,之前,:,before,直到,:,until,直到,才,:,notuntil,一,就,:,as soon as,以后，然后,:,later;,afterwards,很快,:,soon,最近,:,lately;,recently,自从,:,since,从那时起,:,from then on,66/73,6.,表示特定次序关系,首先,:,firstly,最主要,:,above all,其次,:,secondly,然后,:,then;next,最终,:,finally;in the end,7.,换一个方法表述,换句话说,:,in other words;,that is to say;,67/73,8.,进行举例说明,比如，比如,:,for instance;for example;,like;such as,that is to say,namely,actually,and so on,believe it or not,to tell you the truth,for this reason,9.,用于陈说事实,实际上,:,in fact;actually;,as a matter of fact,跟你说实话,:,to tell you the truth,68/73,10.,对一个话题进行总结,总而言之，总来说,:,on the whole;in short;all in all;in general;in a word,finally,in conclusion,generally speaking,as you know,in the end,其它惯用到副词,therefore;otherwise;finally;,furthermore;Thus;namely;,although;afterwards;personally;,69/73,12.,表示结果：,thus,therefore,so,as a result,seeing that,luckily,unfortunately,13,.,表示强调：,above all,indeed,surely,certainly,of course,after all,without any delay,at least,at most,most important,undoubtedly,70/73,背诵一些题材常识性语句,71/73,复习开学初所发个短句讲义！,72/73,73/73,
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