高考英语作文完美行文四步骤【十句作文法】.pdf

|1|a P p y.-高中英语作文全攻略-STEP1：确定文章框架，包括：时态、语态、格式、展开方式、开头结尾等。STEP2：确定内容要点，包括：主要人物、时间地点、重要细节、合理发挥等。STEP3：正式开始写作，整理思路成篇，行文连贯。STEP4：检查全文，主要检查语法以及粗心犯下的错误。重点诠释：十句作文法是有关专家总结出来的一种高分作文方法，考生在经过短期训练之后便可较大幅度地提高 写作水平。其基本模式为：1.第一段为开头，包括两句。第一句为主题句，点明全文主题；第二句为扩展句，进一步说明和支持主 题句。两者关系也可倒过来，由第一句说明情况，第二句点明主题。2.第二段为正文，共七句。第三句为主题句，提出本段的主题，它应与第一段的主题相关或一致。第四 至九句为扩展句，说明和支持本段的主题。句与句之间要注意好过渡，以使段落逻辑合理，结构得当。3.第三段为结尾，简化为一句，也是全文的总结句，它将前面的内容总结为一个结果，表明自己的论点。注意：要提高语言表达的档次，在句式运用上就不能一味地使用简单句和称述句，而应该根据实际情况灵 活运用所学的各种句式。丰富的句式有助于考生在高考中出类拔萃，赢得高分。写作典例：电视在人们的日常生活中占有很重要的地位，电视传播不断深层次地影响着每一个人。请以Television 为题，写一篇有关其所带来的积极影响的英语短文。分析：1。这篇书面表达的中心思想是电视所带来的积极影响。2。电视对现代生活的影响是多方面的，考 生不要试图面面俱到，如果涉及面太多，文章反而显得松散，我们只选择几个方面进行写作，可用举例的 方法合理安排语言材料。范文：TelevisionTelevision presents a vivid world in front of us.1（主题句）Through TV,we can learn what is happening half way across the world.2（扩展句）Television also plays an important educational role in our daily life.3（主题句）For one thing,the TV university provides an opportunity for people who can not go to formal university.4（扩展句）For another,children can broaden their scope of knowledge by watching such popular programs as“The Animal World and“The Mickey Mouse and DuckDonald”.5（扩展 句）Besides,women can learn about the latest fashion of dresses and the best recipe for making fruit cakes.6（扩展句）Furthermore,we can learn many world advanced technologies from TV programs.7（扩展句）And also we can learn singing,dancing and doing physical exercise in some special TV training courses,8（扩展句）In short,the effect of TVs educational role is becoming more and more obvious.9（扩展句）Having viewed these aspects,and with many more TV programs produced,I believe that our life will become even more significant.10（总结句）针对练习：（用十句作文法和三段式表达）1.下面是你班班会上以“中学生是否能佩带手机”为题进行讨论的情况。请你写一封信给21st Century 报的编辑说明该情况，并附带表明你自己的观点。by乘”权它内史美语作文全攻略HaPpy比例40%学生赞同60%学生不赞同理由1.便于同亲友联系；2.可以上网查资料；3.空余时间玩玩游戏调节大脑；4.储存有用信息。1.手机辐射对人健康有害；2.响铃影响自己和他人学习；3.属奢侈品；4.容易引起相互攀比。注意：1.要包含所有的要点，但不要逐条翻译；2.字数约100字。3.信的开头和结尾已写好 Dear Sir,Im writing to tell you_Best wishes范文：Dear Sir,Im writing to tell you something about our discussion on the topic“Whether Middle School Students Can Carry Mobile phones(Cell phones)at the class meeting.Forty percent students agreed,for they thought it was convenient for them to communicate with their relatives and friends.They also thought they could surf the Internet to search for some information and store some useful information in the meantime.Besides,they could play games for rest if they feel BY乘”权HaPpy卡高中英语作文全攻略，tired after a long times study.However,sixty percent of us were against it.They said the radiation of cellphones was harmful to health,and the ringing sound did somewhat affect the cellphone holders and others.Also,cellphones were luxurious things for middle school students and it was easy to lead them to compare with each other.As far as I am concerned,I agree with the majority.It is not suitable for middle school students to have cellphones.We can get in touch with others by other means and we can read more books to enrich ourselves.BY乘”权|1|a P p y.-高中英语作文全攻略众-Best wishes.2.随着科技的进步，多媒体已走进很多学校的课堂。课间休息时，有些学校利用它来播放音乐。你班 就课间是否要播放音乐”展开讨论。请你根据下表所提供的信息用英语写一篇短文，陈述讨论结果及你个人的看法、建议。（字数120词左右，不计开头）大多数同学认为部分同学认为个人看法能活跃气氛；能使大脑得到放松，减轻学习的疲劳，使大家在快乐的氛围中做好下一堂课 的准备；能给大家带来快乐课间时间太短，播放音乐达不到预期 的效果；课间需要的是安静而不是嘈杂的声 音。考生陈述Our class held a discussion about whether music should be played during the break or not._范文：Our class held a discussion about whether music should be played during the break or not.The opinions are divided.Most of the students think that music should be played.As we know,music can produce a lively and happy atmosphere.Besides,after hard study,music can bring us relaxation,which reduces the tiredness.This can help us make full preparations for the next class.Listening to music also makes us feel happy.On the other hand,some students dont think so.In their opinion,they cant get the expected effect from playing music,for the class break time is too short.What is needed most during the class break is peace instead of noise produced by music.In my opinion,it is good to play some soft and peaceful music instead of loud music during the class break.In this way students can enjoy music as well as have a good rest.Besides,I suggest choosing some music that is suitable for middle school students.3.下表是某校关于中学生双休日活动现状的一份调查，请结合表格内容，用英语写一篇120150单词的 短文，就中学生应如何过双休日发表你的看法。学习情况几乎都在学习 16%半天学习半天活动24%几乎都在做其他事情 60%娱乐休闲体育活动20%游玩和购物40%上网看电视40%去图书馆经常5%偶尔 23%几乎没有72%课外兴趣小组经常10%偶尔20%不参加70%范文(One possible version):This form displays the result of a survey on how to spend students weekend.It says that few students are glued to their schoolwork any more.Instead,they prefer to surf on the internet,watch TV,by乘”权|1|a P p y-=高中英语作文全攻略-go shopping rather than involve in sports games.Library and interest groups are available but not favourable.Personally I think,students are now freed from heavy burden but their spare time is not well arranged.They are expected to spend some time on what they learn instead of hanging out.More time should be spent not only on green field but also in the libraries to build up themselves physically and mentally.Besides,more interest groups should be established for students to widen their horizon and sharpen their brains so that they can become more creative eventually.All these will contributes a lot to a well-informed and highly qualified teenager.In conclusion,students should be more scheduled with colorful and fruitful activities.离考英语作攵的述源及开头句二过渡词二要学会使用过渡词。过渡词犹如“桥梁”和“粘合剂”。恰当地使用过渡词可避免结构松散，层次分明，表意不清等弊端，使文章条理清楚，文字连贯流畅。常用的过渡词有：递进型：also,(and)besides,whafs more,moreover,furthermore,in addition,even,whafs worse,worse still,to make matters worse,for the worse,not only.but also 等；解释型：that is(to say),in other words,or,namely,if fact,in reality,as a matter of fact 等；转折型：however,but,yet,nevertheless,instead,on the coutrary,on the other hand 等；歹U举型：firstly.secondly.finally,on the one hand,on the other hand,for one thing,for another 等 举例型：for example,for instance,such as,that is,like,take.for example 等；因果型：because(of),since,now that,thanks to,due to;thus,therefore,as a result(consequence),so.that,so that 等；让步型：though,although,in spite of,despite 等；顺序型:first.next.and then.finally,first.then.after that.finally 等；并歹U型：and,both.and,or,either.or,as well as,等时间型：afterwards,soon,later,the mom6ntz immediately/on doing,hardly.when,no sooner.than 等总结型：in a word,to sum up,in short,on the whole,in conclusionevery coins has two sides 见解型：as for me,in my opinion,personally speaking,as far as I am concerned,Im sure 等条件型：if,as long as,so long as,on condition that,unless 等二开头句二论述的展开提出观点：No one would deny that.Now it is widely believed that.When it comes to.,some think.There is a public debate today that.A is a common way of.,but is it a wise one?Recently the problem has been brought into focus.Different people hold different opinions.Opinions are divided.People have taken/adopted different attitudes towards With the rapid improvement in./growing awareness of阳丫乘7 more and more|1|a P p y.-高中英语作文全攻略-(e.g.With the rapid improvement in building industry,more and more structures are being erected to set the people s minds at ease.)Recently,sth/the problem of.has been brought to popular attention/has become the focusof public concern.(eg。Recently,the problem of unemployment has been brought to such popularattention that governments at all levels place it on the agenda as the first mattero)In the past few years,there has been a boom/sharp growth/decline in.(e。g。In the pastten years,there has been a sharp decline in the number of species0)Nowadays,more/most important/dangerous for our society is.(e。g。Nowadays,mostdangerous for our society is the tendency to take advantage of each other in political circles。)Now there is a growing awareness that.It is time we explore the truth of.Nowhere in history has the issue been more visible.进一步提出观点：of them hold the opinion that.(不同观点)of them are in favor of the idea that(不同观点)People who are for/against the idea think(不同观点)However,each coin has two sides.(不同观点)Different from those-.,-people think.(不同观点)On the other hand,people object that.(不同观点)Another equally important aspect is.A is but one of the many effects.Another is.Besides,other reasons are.提出假想例子的方式：Suppose that.Just imagine what would be like if.It is reasonable to expect.It is not surprising that.举普通例子：For example(instance),.such as A,B,C and so on(so forth)A good case in point is.A particular example for this is.引用：One of the greatest early writers said.Knowledge is power,such is the remard of.That is how sb comment(criticize/praise.).How often we hear such words like there.提出原因：There are many reasons for.Why，for one thing,.The answer to this problem involves many factors.Any discussion about this problem would inevitably involves.The first reason can be obiviously seen.Most people would agree that.Some people may neglect that in fact.Others suggest that.by乘”权|1|a P p y.-高中英语作文全攻略众-Part of the explanation is.进行对比：The advantages for A for outweigh the disadvantages of.Although A enjoys a distinct advantage.Indeed,A carries much weight than B when sth is concerned.A maybe.,but it suffers from the disadvantage that.承上启下：To understand the truth ofit is also important to see.A study of.will make this point clear让步：Certainly,B has its own advantages,such as.I do not deny that A has its own merits.结尾：From what has been discussed above,we may safely draw the conclusion that.In summary,it is wiser.In short.注(图表型)According to the information given in the table/graph,we can find thato。As can be seen from the table/graph/figure,there is a marked increase/decline/favorable(an unfavorable)change in。As we can see from the table/graph/figure above,drastic/considerable/great changes have taken place inooo over the period of time from 0 0 0(年份)to。(年份)The table/graph shows that there is a(n)declining/increasing trend of(年份)to。(年份)Anyone who takes a closer look at the data in the table/graph can be surprised to find that。Everything about。seems(not)to be getting on smoothly/just as one wishes in。(e。go Everything about the economic reform seems to be getting on just as our government wishes in China。)总咨使用较丰富的句式=方法一.使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档=方法二.巧用倒装结构增强句子的表现力=方法三.尝试多样化表达方式1、感叹句 e.g.1)How happy I was when I received your letter.2)What a kind boy he is!3)How disappointed he was!2、强调句 e.g.It was this young boy that helped the old granny.by乘”权|1|a P p y-=高中英语作文全攻略-3、倒装句 e.g.1)Only in this way can you solve this problem.2)There comes the police car.3)Hardly had they got to the station when they met the young man.4、省略句 e.g.They read while walking or riding on a bus.5、with 短语 e.g.I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street with a handbag in her hand.6、定语从句 e.g.In my opinion,cyber cafes should be a place where we can find much useful information.7、各种名词性从句 eg That s what I should do.8、各种状语从句b.On arriving at the airport,Lien Chan and his wifed.No sooner had Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport than they were e.Hardly had Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport when they were 各类墨材写作模版正反观点题型.要求考生从正反两个方面来论证某一观点，对这类题型，通常分为四个步骤来写：时态一般用一般现在时 第一段、文章开头，总述事件或情况第二段、阐述提纲中列举的第一种看法，给出理由或者举例说明：主题句+理由/举例1+理由/举例2+理由/举例3第三段、阐述提纲中列举的第一种看法，给出理由或者举例说明：主题句+理由/举例1+理由/举例2+理由/举例3第四段、表明自己的观点结束全文(在结尾的时候，一定要表明自己的观点。)对比观点作文模板一is becoming more and more popular recently.There are two sides of opinions of it.Some people say is their favorite.They hold their view for the reason of.What is more,。Moreover,.While others think that is a better choice in the following three reasons.Firstly,.Secondly(besides),.Thirdly(finally),.by乘”权|1|a P p y-=高中英语作文全攻略-From my point of view,I think.The reason is that.As a matter of fact,there are some other reasons to explain my choice.For me,the former is surely a wise choice.对比观点作文模板二There is a widespread concern over the issue that 作文题目.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.A majority of people think that _ 观点一.In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows:in the first place,_原因.Furthermore,in the second place,_原因二.So it goes without saying that_观,点People,however,differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people hold the idea that_观点二.In their point of view,on the one hand,_原因一.On the other hand,原因二.Therefore,there is no doubt that_观点二.As far as I am concerned,I firmly support the view that _观,点或二_.It is not only because,but also because.The more,the more.给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点Some people believe that-（观点一）.For example,they think-（举例说明）.Andit will bring them-（为他们带来的好处）.In my opinion,I never think this reason can be the point.For one thing,-（我不同意该看法的理由一）.For another thing,-（反对的理由之二）.Form all what I have said,I agree to the thought that-（我对文章所讨论主题的看法）.利弊型作文这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从一个角度（利或弊）出发，最后往 往要求考生表明自己的态度（或对事物前景提出预测）1.说明事物现状2.事物本身的优缺点（或一方面）3.你对现状（或前景）的看法模板一Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life.Generally,its advantages can be seen as follows.First-（A 的优点之一）.Besides-（A 的优点之二）.But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that-（A 的第一个缺点）.To make matters worse,-（A 的第二个缺点）.by乘”权|1|a P p y-=高中英语作文全攻略-Through the above analysis,I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones.Therefore,I would like to-（我的看法）.（From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A,we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in.Only by this way,-（对前景的预测）.）（When asked to,I tend to.This is because I（原因 一）.Furthermore,（原因二）.Finally,（原因三）.模板二Nowadays,there is a widespread concern over（the issue that）_作文题目.In fact,there are bothadvantages and disadvantages in _题目议题.Generally speaking,it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows.Firstly,优,点.And secondly 优,点二.Just As a popular saying goes,every coin has two sides,_讨论议题 is no exception,and in anotherword,it still has negative aspects.To begin with,_缺,点.In addition,缺,点二.To sum up,we should try to bring the advantages of _讨论议题 into full play,and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time.In that case,we will definitely make a better use of the 讨论议题.图表题型作文.要求考生从一个表格或者图片出发，按照要求写作，分为三个步骤来写：时态一般用一般现在时O第一段、说明图表主题句+图表说明1+图表说明2+图表说明3如，As the bar chart shows,during the years of to第二段、说明引起变化的原因主题句+原因 1+原因 2+原因 3 如，Several factors contribute to.（原因 1）And.（原 因 2）Furthermore,（原因 3）All these result in.第三段、说明影响或者提出解决办法主题句+建议+前景预测如，However,is faced with some problems.With,the effect of which is not only discouraging,but also challenging.So my principle is to pay due attention to_,but not just to.图表作文模板一by乘”权|1|a P p y-=高中英语作文全攻略-As is shown by the figure/percentage in the table/picture,has been on rise/decrease,significantly/dramatically rising/decreasing from in to in.From the sharp rise/declinein the chart,it goes without saying that.There are at least two good reasons accounting for.On the one hand,.On the other hand,is due to the fact that.In addit