英语观点对比类作文写作分析.ppt

,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,英语观点对比类作文写作分析,英语观点对比类作文写作分析英语观点对比类作文写作分析,观点对比类作文 写作技巧,高三英语写作,-How to write,an argumentation,（议论文）,词汇,句型,语法多样化,1.,覆盖了所有的要点,2.,应用了较多的语法结构和词汇,3.,有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑,要点全,连接词,如何算是一篇好文章？,1.(,因为,)_ his help,I finished the work at last.,Thanks to,As a result of,Owing to,Due to,因为,Because of,/with,2.More roads will have to be built with more cars,_,（所以）,well have less field to grow rice.,therefore,So,as a result/consequence,thus,结果,3.The rent is reasonable,_,the location is perfect.,房租很合理，另外，位置也很好。,whats more,moreover/furthermore,in addition,besides,另外,(,递进）,4.The young man didnt enjoy his old job._(,相反,)he finds the new job very interesting.,On the contrary,However,转折,But/yet/while,5.,_(,总之,),we should make good use of computer.,In general,In a word/all in all,总结,In short/brief,Generally speaking,6.,_,(,我认为,),students had better not buy a cellphone.we should spend time and money on other more important things.,As far as Im concerned,In my opinion/its my opinion that,个人观点,I think/believe,the structure of the article,topic sentence,for the opinion,against the opinion,ending sentence,介绍讨论的主题,(,开头句,),：,1.,我们举行了一场讨论,/,调查，讨论内容是,Recently we had a heated discussion on/about,We had a discussion/survey on,Accroding to a recent survey,There is much discussion today about,2.,当说到,时,When it comes to,，,3.,问题引起了越来越多的关注,The topic of is becoming more and more popular recently.,There is,a widespread concern,over the issue that,Opinions,are divided,on this issue.,Opinions,are mainly divided into,two groups.,Different people,however,hold/have,different opinions on this matter.,Different people,however,think quite differently,on this matter.,People,however,differ,in,their,opinions,on,this,matter.,People,have taken/adopted,different,attitudes,towards,this,matter.,过渡句,介绍正方观点：,Some people,agree with/approve/support,the,opinion/decision/idea/view,that,Some of them,hold,the opinion/view that,Most of then,are in favor of,the idea that,People,who are for the idea,think that,Those who support it think that,Sixty percent,of the students,are for,the idea.,Supporters,think/believe,that,介绍反方观点,However/But/On the contrary/In contrast/On contrast/On the other hand/,others,are opposed to/are against/disagree with,the opinion.,People who,are agains,t it dont think so.,However,of them,hold a different view,.,Different from those,people think,of the students,think,that,However,others have different opinions.,Others,argue,that idea,in their opinion,they think/believe that.,进一步介绍 观点,Whats more,Furthermore/moreover,.,Meanwhile,Whats worse,In addition,Besides,Plus,First,Second,Third,总结句,(,未达成一致,),In short,no agreement has been reached yet.,So far,no agreement has been reached.,In short,the students have not arrived at any agreement yet.,本人观点：,As far as I am concerned,In my opinion,From my point of view,Personally,For me,Its my opinion that,because/the reason is,that/for one thing,.for another thing,.,I think.,I,firmly,support,the,view,that,Im for the first/,second view.,对比类写作 实战模版,过渡句,观点一,论据一,论据二,论据三,观点二,论据一,论据二,总结,可以看出，这类文章的写作，首先要提出问题，即双方讨论的问题。接下来提出,观点一,(,支持,),，并用一系列论据进行阐明。说明完观点一之后，再提出,观点二（反对）,，继续用论据进行说明。最后总结自己的观点。,你班同学组织了一场讨论。主题是：城市是否可以养宠物。请根据以下信息，介绍讨论情况，并说明自己的观点和建议。,Recently we had a heated discussion on whether,people should keep pets at home in cities.,_,支持饲养宠物,反对饲养宠物,安慰孤寡老人,人与动物和谐相处，增添生活情趣,促进体育锻炼，提供人与人交流的机会,造成环境污染,吵闹声，甚至伤人,花钱,赞成：,安慰孤寡老人,和谐相处，增添生活乐趣,促进锻炼，提供交流机会,反对：,环境污染,噪音，伤人,花费大,my opinion,be bad for environment,make too much noise,attack people,cost a lot of money,get comfort from pets/get along,get on well with animals/make life,interesting/keep fit/,communicate with others,have different views on sth,react to,sth in different ways.,differ in,their attitudes towards sth.,Recently we had a heated discussion on whether,people should keep pets at home in cities.,Beginning,conclusion,Recently we had a heated discussion on whether,people should keep pets at home in cities.,Opinions are divided on this issue.Some of the students think it is a good idea to keep pets because many old people who live alone at home can get more comfort from pets.Whats more,getting along well with animals will make our life interesting.People who own pets will have more chances to walk,thus giving them a time to communicate with others.,On the other hand,the other students are against the idea.In their opinions,if too many people keep pets at home,it is bad for the environment.Whats worse,pets may make too much noise and even attack people.In addition,it costs lots of money to keep pets.,In short,they have not arrived at any agreement yet.,some,过渡句,观点一,论据一,论据二,论据三,观点二,论据一,论据二,论据三,In my opinion,I like animals,so I dont think it is,bad to keep pets at home.But we must take,some measures to prevent them from polluting,our environment.,总结,作文模板,1,_ had a discussion about whether_.Opinions are divided on this issue._of the students think _ _.Whats more,_.,On the other hand,_ of the students think _.Whats worse,_.,In short,_ have not arrived at any agreement yet.,本人观点：,As far as I am concerned.,/(In my opinion,.;Its my opinion that),For one reason,.For another reason In a word,.,模板,2,We had a heated discussion about/on_.,Studentsviews/ideas/opinions on it,vary/differ,from person to person.,Some,students,say/think/believe,that,However,others hold the view that,As far as I am concerned,I am in favor of the first/second view/I would like to,.,/The reasons are as follows.,Firstly,Secondly,In conclusion/In a word,模板,3,There is,a widespread concern,over the issue that,（作文题目）,But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic,varies from person to person.,A majority of people think that _,观点一,_.In their views there are two factors,contributing to,this attitude as follows:in the first place,原因一,.Furthermore,in the second place,原因二,.So,it goes without saying that,观点一,.,People,however,differ,in,their,opinions,on,this,matter.,Some,people,hold the idea that,观点二,.In their point of view,for one thing,，原因一,.For another thing,原因二,.Therefore,there,is no,doubt,that,观点二,_.,As far as I am concerned,I,firmly,support,the,view,that,观点一或二,.,It,is not only because _,but also because _.,对比观点题型,（,1,）要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。,1,有一些人认为,.,2,另一些人认为,.,3,我的看法,.,The topic of _,（主题）,is becoming more and more popular recently.There are two sides of opinions about it.Some people say _,（观点一）,.They hold their view for the reason,that,_,（支持的理由一）,What is more,_,理由二,).Moreover,_(,理由三,).,While others think that _,(观点二）,in the following three reasons.Firstly,_(,支持的理由一,).Secondly(besides),_,（理由二）,.Thirdly(finally),_(,理由三,).,From my point of view,I think _,（我的观点）,.The reason is that _(,原因,).,The topic of,using cell phones in school,is becoming more and more popular recently.There are two sides of opinions about it.Some people say,cell phones can do good to us students,.They hold their view for the reason,that,cell phones can be used to help us keep in touch with others.,What is more,they can help us when we are in danger,.,While others think that,cell phones can do harm to us students,in the following reasons.Firstly,we would spend too much time on them and affect our study,.Secondly,they can destroy our body health,.,From my point of view,I think,we should not use cell phones in school,.The reason is that,as students,we should pay more attention to study,.,最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票？请你根据下表提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。,注意：,1,、信的开头已为你写好。,2,、词数：,100,左右。,3,、参考词汇：门票：,entrance fee,Dear Editor,Im writing to tell you about the discussion weve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.,60%,的同学认为,40%,的同学认为,1,、不应收门票,2,、公园是公众休闲的地方,3,、如收票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象,1,、应收门票，但票价不宜高,2,、支付园林工人工资,3,、购新花木,2002,年高考题范文,Dear Editor,Im writing to tell you about the discussion weve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks(,提出问题,),.,Opinions are divided on the question,.,60,of the students are against the idea of entrance fee,.,They believe a public park should be free of charge,.,People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves,.,Changing entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away,.,What is more,it will become necessary to build gates and walls,which will do harm to the appearance of a city,.,过渡句,观点一,论据一,论据二,On the other hand,40,think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers,and to buy plants and young trees.,They suggest,however,fees should be charged low,.,Yours truly,Li Hua,可以看出，这类文章的写作，首先要提出问题，即双方讨论的问题。接下来提出观点一，并用一系列论据进行阐明。说明完观点一之后，再提出观点二，继续用论据进行说明。如果需要说明自己的观点，可接下来说明自己的观点。,观点二,论据一,论据二,人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见。请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文，介绍人们的不同观点，并表达自己的看法。参考词汇：网络朋友,on-line friend(s),，上当受骗,to be cheated,赞成的理由,反对的理由,你的看法,1,广交朋友,2,可自由表达思想,3,利于外语学习,1,浪费时间,2,影响学习,3,可能上当受骗,？,谢谢大家！,