高中英语 写作篇 图表类说明文课件 人教版 课件.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,专题六 说明文,图表类说明文要求通过对数据或文字内容进行概括、分析、说明并准确地表达内容得出令人信服的结论。其表现形式如专题七所述，主要是：数字表（曲线图；表格）和图形表（饼状图、条状图）。,目前高考作文中，图表类作文主要考查说明文或议论文，尤其是图表类夹叙夹议作文，专题七相对考查比较少，这是这类作文的考查趋势。此类作文一般都采用三段式。,图表类说明文，要求根据所给的曲线、图形、数据及标题进行分析、研究，阅读图表中文字和说明，弄清各种信息之间的关系，提炼和确定出文章的中心思想，然后进行分析、概括和归纳。,注意：,1,）图表和数据内容不必全部描述，信息可适当发挥，但不能离题发挥。,2,）善于抓住总的规律、趋势，归纳增减率。,3,）时态：特定时间用过去时。经常出现的情况或自己的评述用一般现在时。,假设你应邀参加学校组织的“英语学习师生座谈会”，请你根据下表所提示的信息，用英语写一篇发言稿，简单介绍自己英语学习的情况，并对学校今后的英语教学提出建议。,注意：,1.,对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。,2.,词数,150,左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计人总词数。,Dear teachers and,schoolmates,its,a great pleasure for me to be here today and share my experience of learning English with you.,_,Thank you for listening.,英语学习的情况,1.,英语学习的目的,2.,英语学习的方法,3.,课外自学的途径,对学校英语,教学的建议,（请考生根据自己的经历与感想，提出两至三点建议）,1.,文体信息：,文体：说明文；,语体：正式语体；,人称：第一人称；,中心大意：介绍自己英语学习的情况，并对学校今后的英语教学提出建议。,2.,主导时态：一般现在时。,3.,内容要点：,学习英语的目的（,communication with foreign friends,job hunting.,）；,如何学英语（,English listening,speaking,reading and writing,practice.,）,;,个人学习英语的方法和途径（,join English clubs,make foreign friends.,）；,对老师的建议。（,make class active.,）。,4.,温馨提示：审题，确定主题句,在主题句后按提示顺序将各要点用完整的句子表达出来；用过渡词将上下文的逻辑关系体现出来。,Dear teachers and schoolmates,its a great pleasure for me to be here today and share my experience of learning English with you.,The fast development of Chinese economy requires us to communicate with foreigners in English.,Besides,learning English well will benefit my further studies and life,which is bound to lay a solid language foundation.,However,I know it takes great efforts to learn English well.,First,the importance of English listening,speaking,reading and writing cannot be stressed enough.,So,never,do I stop practicing any one of them.,Second,the more English movies I watch,the more I know about English culture.,After class,I have joined all kinds of English clubs,where it not only enriches my vision and cultivates my characters but also introduces me to a different way of thinking.,Last,the teachers should allow students more time to speak English more often in class.,In addition,they should organize students to perform English plays.,Its these measures that promote students academic and spiritual growth.,Thank you for listening.,本文要点齐全，扩展部分合情合理，完全符合演讲文的特点，无论在选词造句、结构组织、还是细节润色等方面都写的非常好，句意连贯，多次使用了过渡语。如,besides,so,first,second,in addition,等。高级句型很丰富，如定语从句,which is bound to lay a solid language foundation.,，倒装句,never do I stop practicing any one of them.The more.the more.,结构，强调句,Its these measures that promote students academic and spiritual growth.,等。,如能把下列句子加以优化则文章能更上一个档次：,1.The teachers should allow students more time to speak English more often in class.,改为主语从句,It is suggested that the teachers should allow students more time to speak English more often in class.,2.they should organize students to perform English plays.,改为分词作伴随状语,they should give the chances to students,performing English plays,singing English songs even having debates.,Dear teachers and schoolmates,its a great pleasure for me to be here today and share my experience of learning English with you.Im interested in English and hope to be an interpreter in the future.Naturally,its very important for me to learn English,well.As,everybody knows,，,vocabulary is an important part of language,just like bricks in a,building.I,usually memorize twenty new words a day and put them into use whenever possible.After,class,I,often listen to English programs on TV and on the,radio.Besides,Ive learned a lot from the Internet and other sources.,Now,Id like to make some suggestions on English teaching and learning in our school.Firstly,we should be given more opportunities to use what weve learned in order to have a better grasp of it.,Secondly,I,hope our teachers can recommend more interesting books and magazines and give us more free time to read them.Finally,，,I suggest we have more English activities,，,such as English contests and festivals.,Thank you for listening.,第一步：开门见山地点明图表所反映的主题,常用句型：,1.The graph/chart/table above shows.,2.From the above graph/chart,it can be seen that.,3.As is shown in the graph,.,4.It has been shown from the table that.,5.According to the figures given in the picture.,第二步：分析数据间的主要差异及趋势，然后描写（在描写数据间变化及总趋势特征时，可采用分类式或对比式以支持主题，并阐明必要的理由）。,增长,/,减少的表达,:,表示上升的动词,:rise,，,increase,，,climb,，,go up,.,表示上升的名词,:rise,，,increase,.;,表示下降的动词,:fall,，,decline,，,decrease,，,drop,，,go down,.;,表示下降的名词,:fall,，,decline,，,decrease,，,drop,.,；,表示平稳的词汇,:remain steady/unchanged.,常用句型：,1.There was a great/slight increase/rise in.,2.There has been a sudden/slow/rapid fall/drop in.,3.The rate dropped slightly from 38%in.to 31%in.,4.By comparison with,it decreased/increased/fell from.to.,5.Statistics show a 20%rise/reduction in traffic accidents compared with last year.,6.The population owning mobile phones increased by 10%in 1999.,第三步：归纳总结或发表评论。,常用表达：,1.in a word,in short,generally speaking.,2.in summary,it is important.,3.From what has been discussed above,we can draw the conclusion that.,4.Obviously/Apparently,if we want to.,it is necessary.,5.There is no doubt that attention must be paid to.,6.I suggest the government take effective measures to.,7.Personally,I think the golden week should remain,for.,假如你叫李华，受某报社的委托，对你校高中三个年级学生的近视情况做了个调查。请你根据下图三个年级各一个班的抽样调查信息，写一篇文章，介绍相关数据，并分析其原因。,注意：,1.,开头已给出，不计入总词数；,2.,词数：,120,左右。,One possible version:,Recently,a sample survey was carried out in one class of each grade in our school about how serious the problem of short eyesight is in Senior students.The results are more than worrying.,As can be seen from the graph,about 25%of the students in Senior One are suffering from short-eyesight,while the number has climbed to 50 percent for Senior two students,with Senior 3 students even higher at about 70%.,Several reasons may account for the worsening situation.The main reason,we feel,is that students,especially those in Senior 3,are faced with too much pressure from their schoolwork,simply having no time for exercise.Besides,the students have themselves to blame,for many of them dont attach great importance to how to protect their eyes.,As to how to get this situation improved before it gets worse,there are many measures that can be taken.Most important of all,we must be fully aware of the importance of protecting our eyes and therefore have the correct way to use our eyes.Secondly,we must spare some time every day to engage ourselves in exercise.If proper measures are taken,the situation will definitely get improved.,