高考英语作文专题-求助信.doc

高考作文满分练—求助信
u 题型解读：
在求助信中应开门见山，直截了当地把你遇到的难题或者困惑告诉对方，并向对方求助。应注意：（1）向别人征求意见，态度一定要诚恳，语气委婉；（2）把握时态：应用一般现在时表明目前自己存在的困难，用一般将来时描述自己得到帮助后的进步。

写作思路
满分词汇
满分短语
满分句型
Para.1: 点名身份+直接说明写信的求助目的
bother
trouble v.

do sb. a favor

take the trouble to do...

have trouble/difficulty in doing…

have no choice but to do…
turn to sb. for help
1.I am a middle school student and I'm writing to tell you my problem which has troubled me.
2. I'm writing to you to ask whether you could do me a favor.
3. I'm wondering if you could take the trouble to help me with…
4. I'm sorry to bother you, but I have some difficulties here and I need your help.
5. I have some difficulty in doing…, which bothers me a lot. So I have no choice but to turn to you for help.
Para.2:
说明自己存在的困难、困惑并请求对方的帮助。言辞一定要礼貌得体
confused
confusing

upset
worried
anxious
anxiety

fit in with with others= ge on well with others

be accustomed to

long to

lose heart

1. I seem not to be able to fit in well with others here.
2. I don't feel quite accustomed to the life here.
3. I long to learn English well but I don't know how, which makes me upset.
4. I can't concentrate on my lessons these days and I failed in the last exam which worries me a lot.
5. I often feel left out in this school, and I don't know how it has come about.
6. Faced with/Facing so many difficulties, I have to turn to you for help
Para. 3 (客套话)
情真意切表达期盼之情。

timely
eager
grateful
appreciate
request
account

sb. would appreciate it if…
take … into consideration/account.

1. I'm eager to get your timely help. /I'm eager for your timely help.
2. I will be very grateful if you could help me ...
3. I'd appreciate if you could take my request into consideration/ account.
4. I would be grateful if you could really give/lend me a hand.

u 注意：作文的主体时态：一般现在时为主，一般将来时偶尔穿插。
u 满分模板：
u Dear __________(写信对象),
My name is __________; I’m writing to ask whether you could do me a favour.
I have had much difficulty/trouble in ___________(交代自己面临的困难). Besides, I’m very upset that ___________（提出令自己苦恼的问题）. What’s more, I don’t know ___________（进一步说明自己的困境） I’m wondering if you could be so kind as to _________ so that ____________（再次请求对方的帮助）.
I’d appreciate it if you could lend me a hand. I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
u 优秀作文欣赏：
题目1：（2016全国卷1）假如你是李华，暑假想去一家外资公司兼职，已写好申请和个人简历（resume）。给外教Ms Jenkins写信，请她帮你修改所附的文字和格式（format）。

注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯
Sample:
Dear Ms Jenkins,
I'm writing to ask whether you could do me a favor.
In order to gain some social experience and improve my work ability. I'm going to take a part- time job during the summer vacation. So interested in the position in a foreign-captured company am I that I’ve already written an application letter and my resume all in English. However, I’m afraid that there might be some grammar mistakes or inappropriate format in the materials that I prepared.
Would you be so kind as to correct the mistakes and improve the format of the application and resume for me. I would appreciate it if you could take the trouble to help me. I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
题目2. 假如你是李华，你家乡的梨花节(Ewha Festival)负有盛名，你写了一篇英文宣传稿，想请外籍教师Bob帮忙润色。请根据提示用英语给Bob写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.求助事由；2.求助内容；3.表达感激
注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
Sample:
Deer bob,
I’m writing to you in the hope that you will be so kind as to do me a favor. When it comes to the Ewha Festival. There's no denying that it enjoys a great reputation in my hometown. I, for a long time, have been desiring to write an appealing article to make it better known. However, only when I put the idea into practice did I find my English far from satisfying.
As far as I know, you have such a good command of written English as impresses me a lot. Therefore, I’m wondering whether you could take the trouble to have my draft polished at your convenience.
I would be grateful if you could take my request into consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua