英语：短文改错指导市公开课获奖课件省名师优质课赛课一等奖课件.ppt

,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。谢谢。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。谢谢。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。谢谢。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。谢谢。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。谢谢。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。谢谢。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。谢谢。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。谢谢。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。谢谢。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。谢谢。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。谢谢。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。谢谢。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。谢谢。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。谢谢。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。,短文改错指导,对大家英语作业中错误及历年高考“短文改错”题分析发觉，英语错误大致可归纳为以下七大类：,冠词错用、相同词语混同、词类错误、搭配错误、语意逻辑错误、句子结构错误及实词形态错误。,一、冠词错误,一是不定冠词和定冠词选取错误；二是不定冠词,a,极其变体,an,误用；三是一些习语中冠词误用。,Eg:1.A few months ago,Michelle,an 18-year-old high school student,met“Superman 102”in a online chat room.,an,1/18,2.Michelle really enjoyed chatting with him.They got to know each other even better after they shared e-mail addresses.Slowly,Michelle began to like him as more than the friend.,a,3.He said in his blog that he was in the college.,二、相同词语混同,主要表现为词形、读音、词义相近词混同。如：,affect/effect/invent/discover/ago/before/late/later/lately/receive/accept/too/either/every/each/all/both/forget/leave/ever/even,等。,Eg:1.He said I would have to eat some medicine for two months and get plenty of rest.,take,2/18,2.Four days late,Dr Martin Luther King organized a bus boycott.(,抵制）,later,3.He gave a good imitation of the speech and answered a little questions.,few,4.Not until the taxi got to my school did I realize I had forgot my wallet at home.,left,5.Years ago,she had chosen her family over her dreams.,before,6.To my surprise,the principal offered me the job immediately.I received it because I needed a job.,accepted,3/18,三、词类错误：,这类错误根本原因是考生只知道英语单词汉语释义，而没有记住单词词性，如,succeed/success;,另一个常见词性错误是形容词和对应副词误用，如：,successful/successfully.,1.eg:In one e-mail,Superman 102 told her his really name,：,Derrick Harris.,real,2.Thinking quickly,he said,“That question is so easily that Im going to let my driver,who is sitting in the back,explain it!”,easy,3.The journey to the North Pole was both difficult and danger.,dangerous,4/18,四、搭配错误：,搭配类型主要有：名词、动词、形容词,+,介词,;,介词,+,名词；形容词,+,名词；副词,+,形容词。错误第一个情况是单词搭配错误，另一个情况是缺乏介词或使用了多出介词。,long for/full of/in pain/with joy/in favor of,Eg:1.Its very kind for you to help me with my English.,of,2.Michelle searched Derricks name online and found his blog.,for,3.But now,under her familys enthusiastic support,she has returned to her dream of becoming a world-class dancer.,with,5/18,五、语意逻辑错误：,这类错误主要是上下文中指代错误，如用,it/that,指代复数名词，用,he,指代女性，用,either,指代三者中一个等。,Eg:1.Once he nearly died when the ice below them began to melt.,him,2.A palmtree is planted every five metres on every side of the street.,either/each,3 Michelle searched for Derricks name online and found his blog.What she read really bothered him.,her,6/18,六、句子结构错误：,1.,连词错误：第一个情况是并列句之间只用逗号，缺乏连词；第二种情况是并列连词与隶属连词并用，如：,becauseso,althoughbut,等；第三种情况是依据上下文语境，不能正确地选择恰当连词。,Eg:(1).At the time,the law in many places in the South said African Americans had to give up their seats to white people so Rosa Parks refused to give up her seat.,but,(2).Parents,teachers or doctors are becoming very concerned.,and,2.,动词句型错误：最常见是动词句型中非谓语动词形态选择错误。,7/18,Eg:1.Read aloud is helpful in learning English.,Reading,2.After completed four years of maths courses,it was a time to find a job.,completing,3.Then,as I dashed to the bus stop to catch my bus,I stepped on a banana peel,slipping and fell on my backside.,falling,4.But in,while listening to her granddaughter to play the piano,Chang started to dance again.,5.Seeing from space,the globe is covered with water.,seen,8/18,七、实词形态错误,1.“,数”错误：包含名词、代词单复数错误以及修饰名词数词错误，还有主谓一致错误。,Eg:1.They got to know each other even better after they shared e-mail address.,addresses,2.Many things on his blog was negative.,were,3.He was the only one in his office who were invited to the palace ball.,was,4.Yesterday I bought a pair of scissors and they was very sharp.,it,9/18,2.“,格”错误：主要是人称代词、关系代词主格、宾格和全部格误用，尤其是形容词性和名词性物主代词误用。,Eg:1.I am getting fed up with you complainment.,your,2.Many students have achieved their goals,that is,they have been admitted by their ideal universities,of who,Li Hua is an example.,whom,3.Last weekend I came across Wang Lin in a supermarket,who was a friend of Li Hua.,Li Huas,4.The vase which price is very high was made in Qing Dynasty.,whose,10/18,3.”,时“错误：,Eg:1.By the time he realizes he walked into a trap,itll be too late for him to do anything about it.,has,2.-Have you known Dr.Jackon for a long time?-Yes,since she has joined the Chinese Society.,4.,比较等级错误,Eg:1.Our school is more bigger than theirs.,much,2.Dont take too much of the medicine;it does you much harm than good if you do.,more,3.-Do you have any idea what Paul does all day?-As I know,he spends at least as much time playing than he does writing.,as,11/18,SUMMARY,一、冠词错误：错用、多用、少用,a/an/the,按小时,按重量,by the hour,by weight,二、相同词语混同：同义词、同形同音词混用。,病人,sick man,三、词类错误：词性不分、混用。,Ill land you to Liverpool _.,（安全地）,He opened his eyes_ in surprise.,（大大地）,safe,wide,四、搭配错误：,go in _ take sth._ granted take sth._surprise,for,for,by,effort/effect offer/attord,12/18,五、语意逻辑错误：,people/children/police/clothes/glasses-,a pair of glasses/gloves/scissors-,sheep/deer-,they,it,it/they,六、句子结构错误：,连词错误、,非谓语动词形态错误,七、实词形态错误：,数错误,格错误,时错误,比较等级错误,13/18,I had a interesting dream last night.I dreamedthat I took part in a race.At first,I could not to run very fast and fell behind.So I didnt lose heart and keptrunning.All the students on the playground cheer me on,“Come on!”I was so encouraged that I ran faster and fast,an,But,cheered,faster,Practice,14/18,till I caught up all the other runners.I felt as if fly like,a superman.In the end,I got to the finishing line first.I won the race.I felt very proudly of myself.Many of myclassmate threw me up into the air.Just at that timeI woke up and found me still in bed!,with,proud,classmates,myself,flying,15/18,After shopping,Mother and I went to a restaurant for lunch.I notice Mother looking at a nearby table occupy by an elderly woman and young couple.They ate silently,and it was clearly that things were not going well.As we left,Mother stopped on their table.Excuse me,she said,put her arm around the unhappy old woman.You remind me so many of my mother.,noticed/occupied/a/clear/at/putting/much,16/18,May I hug(,拥抱,)you?The woman smiled happily as she accepted to it.After we left,I said,That was,very nice of you,Mother.So I didnt think she looked like Grandma.Neither did me,said Mother cheerfully.,But/I,17/18,；,三生产品,mqw08jnp,本钱不够，也缺乏人手，就拉俺们一起干。俺们以为这个主意不错，开丝绸店铺必定比开饭铺更盈利，而且也比较轻松，就把景德镇小饭店连同后面小院子一起盘给了他人，然后去了杭州。这最终四年，俺们一直在杭州和这个老乡一起做丝绸生意。这老乡一家人很好，我们合作开店铺生意也尤其好。只是必须回家时间到了，我们不能继续干，就把店铺全部转让给老乡了。”“是啊，是必须回来了！不论赚不盈利，都必须回来了！”想了一想，耿老爹又问耿直：“对啦，小直子，昨儿个晚上吃饭时候，你说每个月十五圆月夜里，除非俺们忙得忘记了时间，姐姐都会对着月亮默默地坐上好一会儿是什么意思？你们竟然还忙得忘记了时间！”耿直说：“就是在景德镇上开饭店那三年啊！哎哟俺娘哎，差点儿没有把俺们累死了耶！还好，以后俺们去了杭州做丝绸生意，就没有那么忙了，可赚得银子，却比开饭店多老了呢！”耿老爹轻轻地叹息着，只“哦”了一声，就没有下文了。见爹爹沉吟着不说话，耿直又高兴地说：“爹啊，你还不知道哩，做丝绸生意那几年里，俺哥和俺姐还有时间教俺认字读书记账什么了呢。现在啊，俺已经掌握了那些个文化知识，可比俺哥和俺姐当年走时候多老了！当然啦，俺哥和俺姐现在也更了不起了！”耿老爹听了这话，心里既非常高兴，又尤其愧疚。他隔着尚武伸手过去慈爱地摸着耿直头，轻轻地说：“小直子啊，爹可欠你多了去了！”转头又问耿正：“你和英子是？”耿正说：“爹，你就别听小直子瞎摆忽了，俺们不就是多读了一些以前没有见过书嘛！杭州大书馆里有很多好书呢！”耿老爹高兴地说：“太好啦，人就得多多读书才能增加见识啊！”又问：“那些书可都带回来了？”耿正说：“都带回来了！那些书可都是宝贝呢。英子连俺们被褥都舍不得丢掉，哪里会拉下这些书哇！”耿老爹轻轻地叹了一口气，说：“唉，你妹妹心很细，心意很重啊！”停一刻，耿正轻轻地问：“爹，你和三弟是哪天过江？你们途经武昌镇时，怎么不去娘娘家看看啊？”耿老爹说：“俺俩是正月初十午后过江。途经你们白娘娘家时，只是远远地望了一会儿院门儿，好像新修过了，但没有进去看她们。爹当初是想啊，已经把你们三个给丢失了，倘若再进去看他们，也只能是引得大家伙儿再难过一场了，还不如让她们不知道得好呢。对啦，俺还问了一个十来岁女娃娃，听她说，你们娘娘还一直守寡呢。唉，这个善良好女人啊，她是一直忘记不了你们白幺爹哇！”耿正说：“你要是去了就好了，俺们是腊月二十九一早走！你要是知道了俺们都没有事儿，而且也在回家路上，你这一路上就不用再难过了！”尚武说：“俺们上了渡船后，突然,18/18,