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Click to edit Master title style,Click to edit Master text styles,Second level,Third level,Fourth level,Fifth level,*,*,Traffic jam,1,Whats,the writing style,of this passage?,A.Narration(,记叙文,),B.Argumentation(,议论文,),C.Exposition(,说明文,),To,convince,the readers that the ideas are true and worth considering.,To,inform,or,explain,an opinion by providing materials.,While exposition does not always contain argumentation,argumentation always contains exposition.,2,Para 1,Para 2,Para 3,Para 4,Traffic jam has become a major,problem,Why,is traffic jam a problem?,At first,In addition,Apart from,Traffic jam is the result of,the increasing private cars,.,Traffic jam can be dealt with by correct,means,.,maybe a means,in the meantime,first reason,Anyway,Step one:,Find out key information,Moreover,3,Para 1,Para 2,Para 3,Para 4,Traffic jam has become a major,problem,structure of the passage,Why,is traffic jam a problem?,At first,In addition,Apart from,Traffic jam is the result of,the increasing private cars,.,Traffic jam can be dealt with by correct,means,.,maybe a means,The,problem,:traffic jam,The,effects,of traffic jam,The,reasons,of traffic jam(increasing cars),The,solutions,of traffic jam,first reason,Anyway,Moreover,in the meantime,4,Structure of“Problem-Solution”Passage,problem,reasons,solutions,5,Paragraph 1:problem,At present,traffic jam has become a major problem which most city dwellers,especially those who live in metropolis have to face in their everyday lives.,At present,traffic jam has become,a major problem,which most,city dwellers,have to,face,.,at present:_,a major problem:_,city dwellers:_,face:_,nowadays,currently,in the contemporary society,a main/key problem,citizens,residents,be faced with,confront,Nowadays,traffic jam becomes,a main problem,which,citizens,have to,confront,.,Step Two:,Rewrite,concise,coherent,correct,complete,6,At present,traffic jam has become a major problem which most city dwellers have to face.,Nowadays,traffic jam becomes,a main problem,which,citizens,have to,confront,.,At present city dwellers have to face a major problem,_.,the traffic jam,Traffic jam,now,becomes a(an)_ problem,for citizens,.,unavoidable,concise,coherent,correct,complete,7,At first,owing to the fact that the vehicles keep giving off harmful gases during traffic jams,the earth is becoming warmer and warmer.,In addition,traffic jams will affect the effectiveness of work,because people have to spend much more time on way to office than necessary,and their work will be delayed.,Apart from this,traffic jam might give rise to more traffic accidents and therefore becomes a great danger to peoples lives.,Paragraph 2:effects,8,concise,coherent,correct,complete,Nowadays traffic jams becomes a major problem _ the vehicles release harmful gases and may cause accidents.,because,Because it has caused many problems._,traffic jam leads vehicles to release more harmful gases,_(make)the earth warmer._,it also reduces the effectiveness of work.,On one hand,making,On the other hand,Because it has caused many problems _ leading vehicles to release more harmful gases,reducing the work efficiency and _ threatening peoples lives.,such as,even,9,Paragraph 3:reasons,Traffic jam is the result of,the increasing private cars,.Why?Personally I think,the,first reason,may be the remoteness of peoples workplace.,Moreover,owning a private car,is a symbol of wealth and high social position is also the symbol of independence and maturity.,Anyway,owning and driving cars are regarded by many people as basic human rights.,The increasing private cars,result in,traffic jam.,Traffic jam is the result of,the increasing private cars,.,Why?Personally I think,the first reason may be the remoteness of peoples workplace.Moreover,owning a private car,is a symbol of wealth and high social position is also the symbol of independence and maturity.Anyway,owning and driving cars are regarded by many people as basic human rights.,concise,coherent,correct,complete,10,Paragraph 4:solutions,undoubtedly:_,deal with:_,correct:_,means:_,without/beyond doubt,there is no doubt that,solve,handle,settle,effective,practical,proper,appropriate,way,method,approach,Undoubtedly,traffic jam must be,and can be,dealt with,properly by,correct means,.,concise,coherent,correct,complete,11,Paragraph 4:solutions,Undoubtedly,traffic jam must be,and can be dealt with properly by correct,means,.In my view,spending more money on public transportation systems may be an effective means.Needless to say,policies which encourage people to put these systems to full use,for example,giving certain subsidies,are necessary.,In the meantime,measures to restrict the use of private cars,such as improving the taxes on cars or petrol,should be taken.,12,It can be properly settled _ _.,It can be properly settled.,spend more money on public transportation,restrict the use of private cars,by investing,more on public,transportation and,limiting,the use of private cars,by,doing,In order to,In order to,settle the problem,government should,invest more on public transportation and limit the use of private cars.,from to,Measures should be taken to solve the problem,from,to,Measures should be taken to solve the problem,from,invest,ing,more on public transportation,to,limit,ing,the use of private cars.,(such as),concise,coherent,correct,complete,13,内容,:,思维,:,语言：,书写：,理解正确，要点齐全,逻辑清晰，上下文连贯,准,确，地道，丰富,好概要的标准,卷面整洁，字迹优美,concise,coherent,correct,complete,14,Nowadays traffic jam.,Because release affect become a danger.,Actually result in the traffic jam.,There is no doubt that its vital to take measures,Step Three:,Combine the key information logically,concise,coherent,correct,complete,15,leads to,Nowadays citizens have to _(face)the traffic jam.It _(cause)emission of waste gases affects the efficiency of work and _(even/still)threatens peoples lives.Actually,_ _the private cars _ result in the traffic jams._(Undoubtedly)government should invest more on public transportation system and _(restrict)the use of private cars.(54 words),which,even,it is,Beyond doubt,limit,that,confront,concise,coherent,correct,complete,16,Nowadays citizens have to confront the traffic jam,which leads to emission of waste gases,affects the efficiency of work and threatens peoples lives.Actually,it is the private cars that result in the traffic jams.Beyond doubt,government should invest more on public transportation system and limit the use of private cars.(54 words),Step Four:,Polish,concise,coherent,correct,complete,17,Traffic jam,a major current unavoidable problem for citizens,is caused by increasing vehicles,especially private cars.Too many vehicles cause traffic jams,even air pollution and other many problems like road accidents.To give a fundamental solution,it is vital to reduce the booming number of private cars,which people own them for various reasons depending on the concepts in different parts of the present world.Besides,relevant laws should be made and concrete measures be taken to limit the number of private cars.(84 words),18,Traffic jam,a,major current unavoidable,problem for citizens,is caused by increasing vehicles,especially,private cars.Too many vehicles cause traffic jams,even,air pollution and other many problems,like,road accidents.To give a,fundamental,solution,it is vital to,reduce the,booming,number of private cars.,Besides,relevant,laws should be made and,concrete,measures be taken to limit the number of private cars.(67words),19,Homework,Write a summary of this passage.,Pay attention to four principles:,be concise,coherent,correct and complete,20,