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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,二级,三级,四级,五级,*,.,*,Introduction,to a person,1,.,人物介绍,出生,家庭背景,教育,生平经历,成就和评价,2,.,写作步骤,概,-,貌,-,育,-,平,-,评,1,、概况:,age,sex,birth-place,background,2,、外貌:,appearance,character,hobby,3,、教育:,education,4,、生平:,big events in ones life,5,、评价:,evaluation,3,.,1,、个人概况,Was/were born in(place)on.(date),At the age of,The son of a poor family,Was born into a peasant/intelligent family/a family of scholars,(,农民;知识分子;书香门第),Live/lead a happy/difficult life,4,.,2,、性格,character,5,.,6,.,7,.,8,.,3.education,be admitted to college,被,大学所录取,graduate fromdepartment,(院系),of university,毕业,when at college,he majored in,大学主修,receive a doctors degree/a PhD degree,获得博士学位,be awarded(,奖项,),被嘉奖,go abroad for further studies,出国深造,have little schooling(education),受过很少教育,9,.,出生在贫苦家庭的狄更斯只受到很少教育,主从句:,定语从句:,Charles Dickens,who was born in a poor family,hadlittle schooling.,非谓语:,1,)过去分词充当定语,修饰前面名词,Charles Dickens,born in a poor family,had little schooling.,2,)过去分词充当状语,表原因,Born in a poor family,Charles Dickens had little schooling.,10,.,4.Big events,1,),be interested in/be fond of,2,),work hard at,3,),serve as,4,),devote his lifetime/oneself to,5,),concentrate oneself on,6,),do research about/into,7,),make up ones mind to do sth.,8,),do sth with great determination and perseverance,11,.,9,),be strict in sth,10,),have a way of doing sth,11,),try ones best to do sth.,12,),encourage sb to do,13,),fight for/give up ones life for sb/sth,14,),win a prize/the first prize in competition,15)receive/obtain/win the Nobel Prize for,16)be good at.do well in,12,.,17)be crazy about /enjoy,18)make rapid progress in,19)set a new world record of,20)equal/break the world record,21)win(won)a gold/silver/bronze medal,22,),win the xxth place,23)be selected to/become a member of,24)study hard/train hard,25)go through hardship,26)have a gift/talent for(language),27)realize ones dream,28)overcome many difficulties,13,.,高锟,,1933,年,11,月,4,日出生于上海一个富裕家庭,从小对做不同的试验产生浓厚兴趣。,定语从句:,Gaokun,who was born in a rich family on Nov.4,th,1933,show great interest(was interested)in,doing different experiment during his childhood.,非谓语(定语),Gaokun,born in a rich family on Nov.4,th,1933,show great interest(was interested)in doing different experiment during his childhood.,非谓语(状语),Born in a rich family on Nov.4,th,1933,Gaokun show great interest(was interested)in doing different experiment during his childhood.,14,.,他于,1957,年在伦敦念大学,并于,1963,年获得博士学位。,并列句:,He studied in a university in London in 1957,and,received a doctors degree,in 1963.,After,he studied in a a university in London in 1957,received a doctors degree in 1963,主从句:,In 1957,He studied,in,a university in London,where,he gained a doctors degree in 1963.,非谓语:,Having studied,in a university in London in 1957,he gained a doctors degree,in 1963.,15,.,5.Evaluation,1)one of the best/most important,是最重要的,/,最佳之一,2)set a good example for,为,作了好榜样,3)a model teacher/worker,一个模范教师,/,员工,4)be respected by everyone,被所有人尊敬,5)speak/think highly of,高度评价,6)be honored as(an excellent athlete),被誉为(优秀运动员),7)his hard work brought him great success,他的努力工作为他带来了巨大的成功,16,.,8)he is the pride of China.,他是中国的骄傲,9)His heroic story spread all over the city,他的英雄事迹传遍整个城市,10)make great contributions to,为,作出巨大贡献,11)Consistency/Perseverance is the key to success.,坚持是成功的秘诀,12)be famous/known as be regarded as,因,著名,/,被称为,13)become a world champion at Championships,成为世界冠军,14)remember sb forever,永垂不朽,15)a new chapter of history has been turned,将翻开历史新的一页,16)Lei Feng has been praised for his communist spirit.,雷锋以他的共产主义精神被赞扬,17,.,18,.,19,.,20,.,21,.,三、如何使文章连贯?,(,过渡词的使用,),1),时间:,soon,then,suddenly,meanwhile,before,after,earlier,in the morning,afterwards,later,immediately,next,the other day,nowadays,gradually,2),空间,:,above,below,up,down,under,near,far,from,in front of,behind,beside,beyond,on the right/left,around,inside,outside,opposite to,next to,on top of,across.,3),列举:,for example,such as,first(ly),second(ly),finally,besides,apart form,for one thingfor another thing,4),比较,:,like,unlike,on the contrary,in contrast to,on the one handon the other hand,than,not soas,asas,while,similarly,the former,the latter,someothers,onethe other,compared with,22,.,5),逻辑关系:,a.,并列:,and,as well as,also,b.,转折:,but,however,yet,c.,递进:,besides,apart from,in addition,whats more,furthermore,moreover,to make things worse,d.,原因:,because,because of,as,since,for that reason,e.,结果:,so,therefore,thus,as a result,f.,让步:,though,although,in spite of,23,.,24,.,外貌;性格(巧用,with,定语),Liang Zhiyong is a near-sighted boy with a pair of glasses on his nose.,Yang Yang is good-looking with long hair.,He Zety is a tall and thin guy with thick eyebrows,looking very handsome.,25,.,生平经历(尽量用复合句,倒装,非限制性定语从句等),Not only Hou Yaowen is interested in science,but also he has a gift for music.,Zu Longtao set a new world record of swimming,which makes a great contribution to China.,26,.,评价,(运用动词,形容词等短语),27,.,28,.,29,.,30,.,31,.,32,.,33,.,34,.,35,.,36,.,37,.,38,.,39,.,40,.,41,.,42,.,假如你是记者,最近对在华外国志愿者进行采访,时间:上周末,对象:中国农村教书的志愿者卢安克,主题:志愿者之路,内容:,1968,年生于德国汉堡,1990,年夏天三个月的旅程让他深深爱上中国农村。,从教过程:,1999,,在广西的一个农村成为志愿者,发现中,国家长只重视成绩却忽视孩子的天性和兴趣。,教育理念:如果一个人只是为了别人的理念而生存,他就,永远找不到自己的方向和力量。,43,.,Last week,I am very lucky to interview a foreign volunteer,teaching,in rural China,Eckart Loewe,talking,about his way of volunteering.Eckart Loewe,born in Hamburg,Germany in 1968,began to love the countryside of Guangxi after 3-month tour(3 months tour)in China in the summer of 1990.,Since 1999,he has been,a volunteer teacher in a village there.During teaching in China,he finds that Chinese parents always,pay attention to their childrens grades,but,ignore their natures and interests,.,In his opinion,if,a person lives only for others ideas,he will never find the direction and power of himself.,44,.,Thanks,!,45,.,
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