怎样扩展英语句子-PPT.ppt

HOW TO ENLARGE ENGLISH SENTENCES,怎样扩展英语句子,扩句是在基本句型的基础上，添加各种修饰成分，使句子得到扩展，即根据表达的需求增加定语，状语，同位语等成分，或者举例子补充细节内容，或者添加谚语俗语等。,1.Mary was a(n)_ girl.,（形容词）,2.She smiled _ .(,副词）,3.Tom liked her _ .,（副词）,4.He gave her a picture _,_,（定语从句）,5.She put the picture on the wall _,_,（状语从句）,beautiful,happily,secretly,that he had drawn,for her.,so that,she could see it conveniently.,方法一,添加修饰成分,：形容词、副词、不定式,短语、分词短语、介词短语、定语从句、状语从,句等。,Mary was a beautiful and,girl,.,Tom and,liked her very much.,They soon became good friends.On Marys birthday,Tom gave her a picture and,She smiled happily,them and put the picture on,the wall.,clever,Jack,a bunch of roses.,accepted,方法二,添加并列成分：,Jack was rich.He had his own company.He made a fortune.He bought Mary a diamond ring.Neither Jack nor Tom knew what Mary thought.During that night before Marys birthday,Jack had a dream in which he asked Mary to marry him.During the same night,Tom couldnt get to sleep until,he finished drawing the picture of Mary from his memory.,What present would Jack give Mary?,方法三,构成并列句：,用并列连词,and,so,but,while,for,（因为）,等。,Jack was rich,he had his own company,made a fortune,he bought Mary,a diamond ring,neither Jack nor Tom knew,what Mary thought.During that night before Marys,birthday,Jack had a dream in which he asked Mary,to marry him,Tom couldnt get to sleep until,he finished drawing the picture of Mary from his,memory.,for,and,so,but,while,Who Would Mary Choose?,After her birthday party,Mary couldnt help,looking at the picture now and then,because,in her eyes,looking at herself in the picture,was like,looking at a superstar on the screen.,To see,is,to believe.,The picture proved,that,Tom had a talent for painting,and,her,choosing him as her boy friend,was a wise decision.,方法四,使用,V-ing,短语、不定式短语或名词性从句等做主语、宾语或表语等。,that,_,_,_,_,Summary,扩展句子的方法,方法一：添加修饰成分,方法二：添加并列成分,方法三：构成并列句,方法四：使用,V-ing,短语、不定,式短语或名词性从句,作主语、宾语或表语等,Practice,It was obvious that Jack was unhappy.What made him angry was that the diamond ring he had bought for Marys birthday was refused by her.When he told Mary that not only he was more handsome than Tom,，,but also he had a car,，,a flat and more money,，,Mary said softly but firmly,，“,I am very very sorry,，,Jack.You should know the fact that liking you does not mean loving you.To have money is not to have everything.However,，,we remain good friends as before.”,1.Step 1,.Finish reading the following paragraph,in one minute,to,get,the main idea,.,It was obvious,Jack was unhappy.,made him angry was,the diamond ring he had bought for Marys birthday was refused by her.,he told Mary that not only he was more handsome,Tom,，,but also he had a car,，,a flat and more money,，,Mary said softly,firmly,，“,I am very very sorry,，,Jack.You should know the fact,liking you does not mean loving you.To have money is not to have everything.,，,we remain good friends as before.”,that,What,that,When,than,but,that,However,1,.Fill in the missing words according to,the context.,2.,扩展以下句子,.,1.We arrived in Sanya.,2.I like to make friends with my classmates.,We were happy and returned home.,4.I like reading books.,5.We should study hard.,I often join in many activities.,I go to the library.,1.We arrived in Sanya.,-We arrived in Sanya,happily and excitedly.(,添加副词,),2.I like to make friends with my classmates.,-I like to make friends with my classmates,who have the same interest as mine.(,添加定语从句,),3.We were happy and returned home.,-We were happy and returned home after we had finished collecting all the rubbish.(,添加状语从句,),4.I like reading books.,-I like reading books,such as novels,short stories,magazines and newspapers.(,通过举例补充细节,),5.We should study hard.,-As we all know,“Practice makes perfect”.So we should study hard.,（添加谚语）,6.I often join in many activities.,-I often join in many activities in order to communicate with other students and broaden my mind.(,添加目的状语,),7.I go to the library.,After school/During the summer vacation,I often go to the school library with my best friends by bike to borrow some books.,使用带高级词汇的目的状语,尽量带上状语,In order to meet the demands of broadening my horizons and enriching my knowledge,after school/during the summer vacation,I often go to the school library with my best friends by bike to read books,newspapers and magazines.,3.,扩句与写作。,假如你是一名中学生，请以,My colorful school life,为题，写一篇短文。要求,100,个字左右。开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总数。,要点提示：,1,：上课认真听讲,2,：课后完成作业,3,：经常参加体育锻炼,4,：去图书馆阅读,Im a high school student and I understand what Im studying for.I have been working hard.,_,May there always be colorful life around my school.,学生的习作：,Im a high school student and I understand what Im studying for.I have been working hard.,I listen to the teacher carefully.I finish my homework after class.I often take exercise.I often read in the school library.,May there always be colorful life around my school.,点评：该学生能完整的写出各个要点，没有出现太大的语法错误，表达通顺，单词拼写无误。但是很明显字数不够，没有达到,100,个字左右，字数不够是很多学生面临的共同问题。其次，句子的表达过于平淡无奇，没有句式多样化和使用高级词汇，固定搭配、固定短语等使表达地道。而且，没有使用连接词，上下文的连接不够顺畅。,改进方法：,步骤一：列要点,把要写的内容要点化，做到要点齐全。,1:Listen to the teacher carefully,2:finish my homework,3:take part in exercise,4:often read in the library,步骤二：造简单句,充分利用五个简单句句型对各个要点进行补充，使其变成一个完整的句子。每个句子都要注意句子成分的完整性，语法是否正确，说法是否符合英语表达习惯。,1:I listen to the teacher carefully in the class.,2:I finish my homework after class.,3:I often take part in exercise with my classmates.,4:I do some reading in the school library.,步骤三：扩展句子,1:I listen to the teachers carefully in the class so that I can understand what the teachers say.(,增加目的状语从句,),2:I finish my homework after class,which is a piece of cake for me.,（增加定语从句）,3:I often take part in exercise with my classmates,such as playing football,going swimming and playing badminton.,（举例说明）,4:I often do some reading in the school library when I have nothing to do after class.,（增加时间状语从句）,步骤四：润色句子,比如可以用高级词汇，短语和固定搭配来替换一般词汇。增加习惯表达句式，倒装句，,it,当形式主语和形式宾语，非谓语动词等，使用多种句式，使其多样化。,Im a high school student and I understand what Im studying for.I have been working hard.,（原文已给）,First of all(,过渡词,),it is necessary for me to listen to the teachers carefully in the class so that I can understand what the teachers say.Whats more(,过渡词,),I take homework seriously and finish it in time,which is a piece of cake for me.In addition(,过渡词,),In order to strengthen my body,I often take part in different kinds of exercises with my classmates,such as playing football,going swimming and playing badminton.Finally(,过渡词,),Interested in reading books,I develop the habit of going to the library and do some reading on my favorite books.,May there always be colorful life around my school.,Thanks for your attending!,