九年级英语 Catch a snatcher课件 人教新目标版 课件.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,How to write about a picture?,看图作文写作技巧,一、审图,(Studying the pictures),-,理解图意。,把握组画的脉络或线索，即画面所要揭示的主题。,二、构思,(Making up a story),1,、抓住要点。,2,、“布句”。关键是正确使用句式结构,-,句架。同时还要注意人称、时态和词的用法等。,总体上要做到,(1),简易，要多用简单句，少用复杂句；,(2),尊重英语习惯，避免汉语倾向，生硬翻译；,(3),选用“拿手句”，改用近义句，切忌随意发挥。没有把握的句子要尽量不写，写不出的句子绝不硬写。,三、组合,(Fitting together),合适的连接词,.,在连句成文时，恰当使用一些过渡词可以使句与句有连贯，段与段有层次，使文章条理更清楚。,四、修改,(Making corrections),检查体裁格式是否正确；内容要点是否全面；用词是否恰当，是否符合英语习惯；检查文中拼写和标点错误、语法错误、逻辑错误等。注意人称、时态等的正确运用，另外，注意句子与句子，段落与段落是否衔接自然等等。,写作步骤,:,One Sunday morning,there were some people in,Zhongshan,Park.,Whats the,story about?,Its about,.,Catch a snatcher,There are some people in,Zhongshan,Park.,A womans handbag was snatched.,Some people ran after the snatcher.,An old man put his umbrella between the snatchers legs.,The snatcher fell down.,Policemen came and arrested the snatcher.,The woman thanked the old man.,OK,lets write!,Great!,One Sunday morning,there were some people in,Zhongshan,Park.,At a stand,a woman was buying an ice-cream,when,a young man behind her snatched her handbag away.,Hearing,the,shouting“stop,him”,a few people began to run after him.,An old man with an umbrella was sitting on a bench nearby.,When,the snatcher was running past him,he quickly picked up his umbrella and put it between the snatchers legs,the young man fell down on the ground hard.,Soon,two policemen came in a police car and arrested him.,At last,the woman thanked the old man,and the people around praised the old man for his cleverness.,Thank you,！,