科技英语写作中的典型错误2幻灯片课件.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,科技英语写作中的典型错误2,例,3,汉语原句,这台设备的特点是操作简便、价格低廉。,英语错句,The features of this device are easy in operation and low in price,.,改正后的句子,The features of this device are easy operation and low price,.,不过比较好的一个句型是：,This device is characterized by,（,its,）,easy operation and low price,.,例,4,汉语原句,我们的方法与以前讨论同一问题的文章中所述的不同。,英语错句,Our method is different from previous articles discussed the same problem,.,改正后的句子,Our method is different from those presented,（,或,described,）,in the papers available,（,或,published before,）,on,（,或,discussing,）,the same problem,.,例,5,汉语原句,只有通过对该系统性能的研究，我们才能了解它的优点。,英语错句,Only through studied the performance of the system,its advantages can be understood,.,改正后的句子,Only through the study of the performance of the system,can one,（,或,we,）,understand,（,或,appreciate,）,its,advantages,.,例,6,汉语原句,本文对提高打印速度和印字质量提供了一种计算机辅助设计手段。,英语错句,This paper provided a kind of means of computer aid design for progressing the printing speed and the printing quality,.,改正后的句子,This paper presents a CAD method for increasing the printing speed and improving the printing quality,.,例,7,汉语原句,对构件的承载能力做了具体分析。,英语错句,The detailed analysis of the ability of bearing loads of the components is given,.,改正后的句子,A detailed,（,或,concrete,）,analysis of the ability of the component to carry loads is made,.,例,8,汉语原句,共有,M,个多边形，其顶点数均为,N。,英语错句,There are M polygons altogether,whose vertex number is all N,.,改正后的句子,There are M polygons altogether,each of which has N vertexes,.,虽然从语法角度来看，定语从句可以译成“,the number of vertexes of each of which is N,.,”,但这种表示法不好，显得很繁琐。,例,9,汉语原句,这个方法需要精确的定位，这就使得它的实现具有一定的难度。,英语错句,This method requires accurate location and this makes its realization have a little difficulty,.,改正后的句子,This method requires accurate location,thus making,（,或,which makes,）,its realization somewhat difficult,.,例,10,汉语原句,对,A,的识别和对,B,的确定是使用这一方法的先决条件。,英语错句,The recognition of A and determining B are the prerequisite for the use of this method,.,改正后的句子,The recognition of A and the determination of B are the prerequisites for the use of this method,.,例,11,汉语原句,最后提出了实现这种方法应注意的一些问题和解决方法。,英语错句,At last,we provided some problems that could be noted in implementing this method and solving ways,.,改正后的句子,Finally,some problems that deserve to be noted in implementing this method and their solution are presented,.,例,12,汉语原句,由于缺陷的存在，构件的疲劳寿命将大大降低。,英语错句,Because of the existing of the defect,the fatigue life of the components will decrease very much,.,改正后的句子,Because of,（,或,Due to,）,the existence of the defect,the fatigue life of the components will be decreased,（,或,shortened,）,greatly,.,例,13,汉语原句,并讨论了这一方法与扫描法相比的优点。,英语错句,As compared with the scanning method,the advantages of this method has discussed also,.,改正后的句子,The advantages of this method over the scanning method have also been discussed,.,例,14,汉语原句,已知常数,K，,就能算出,C,来。,英语错句,Giving the constant K,C can be calculated,.,改正后的句子,Given,（,或,knowing,）,the constant K,one,（,或,we,）,can calculate C,.,（,或,it is possible to calculate C,.,）,例,15,汉语原句,这台新设计的仪器质量很好。,英语错句,This new designed instrument is in good quality,.,改正后的句子,This newly designed instrument is good in quality,.,或：,This newly designed instrument is of good quality,.,例,16,汉语原句,锡的熔点没有铅的高。,英语错句,Tin does not have a melting point as high as lead does,.,改正后的句子,Tin does not have as high a melting point as lead does,.,例,17,汉语原句,这台转动的机器将在一二分钟后自动停下来。,英语错句,This running machine will stop of itself after one minute or two,.,改正后的句子,This running machine will stop of itself in one or two minutes,（,或,in a minute or two,）,.,例,18,汉语原句,在这种情况下，输入不会下降，输出也不会下降。,英语错句,In this case,the input does not fall,;,the output does not fall,too,.,改正后的句子,In this case,the input does not fall,neither,（,或,nor,）,does the output,.,例,19,汉语原句,这个问题有待解决。,英语错句,This problem waits to solve,.,改正后的句子,This problem remains to be solved,.,例,20,汉语原句,这个电荷与存在的其它电荷相互作用。,英语错句,This charge interacts with other present charge,.,改正后的句子,This charge interacts with other charges present,.,例,21,汉语原句,现有的教科书没有提到这一点。,英语错句,The now existed textbooks do not make mention of this point,.,改正后的句子,The existing textbooks,（,或,The textbooks available,）,have made no mention of this point,.,例,22,汉语原句,x,的所有值均不能满足这一方程,。,英语错句,All values of x can,t satisfy this equation,.,改正后的句子,No values of,x,（,或,None of the values of,x,）,can satisfy this equation,.,例,23,汉语原句,这个电压几乎是测不出的。,英语错句,This voltage almost can not be measured,.,改正后的句子,This voltage can hardly be measured,.,例,24,汉语原句,铜的导电率比铁高。,英语错句,The conductivity of copper is higher than iron,.,改正后的句子,The conductivity of copper is higher than that of iron,.,例,25,汉语原句,在这个实验室中，这台仪器比其他的灵敏。,英语错句,In this laboratory,this instrument is more sensitive than any one,.,改正后的句子,In this laboratory,this instrument is more sensitive than any other one,（,或,any one else,）,.,例,26,汉语原句,这本书的序言写得很好。,英语错句,The preface of this book was well written,.,改正后的句子,The preface to this book is well written,.,例,27,汉语原句,为了发射无线电波，必须产生高频振荡。,英语错句,Sending out radio waves,high-frequency oscillations must be generated,.,改正后的句子,To send out radio waves,it is necessary to generate high-frequency oscillations,.,例,28,汉语原句,其他类型的电动机也广泛用在工业上。,英语错句,Other types of the electric motor also are widely use in industry,.,改正后的句子,Other types of electric motor are also widely used in industry,.,例,29,汉语原句,任何学生均不会解这种特殊的方程,。,英语错句,Any student cannot solve this kind of special equation,.,改正后的句子,No student,（,或,None of the students,）,can solve this special kind of equation,.,例,30,汉语原句,必须了解这种材料是否能经受住这么大的力,。,英语错句,It is necessary to know if this material can stand a so large force or not,.,改正后的句子,It is necessary to know whether this material can stand so large a force or not,.,例,31,汉语原句,电压是用伏特来度量的,。（,或：电压的度量单位是伏特。）,英语错句,Voltage is measured with volt,.,改正后的句子,Voltage is measured in volts,.,例,32,汉语原句,这两位工程师正忙于设计一种新型软件,。,英语错句,This two engineers are busy to design a type of new software,.,改正后的句子,These two engineers are busy with the design of,或,busy,（,in,）,designing,a new type of software,.,例,33,汉语原句,这种材料很难加工,。,英语错句,This material is very difficult to be machined,.,改正后的句子,This material is very difficult to machine,.,例,34,汉语原句,若把式（7）代入式（8）就得到,a,=,b。,英语错句,If Eq,.,(7),is substituted in Eq,.,(8),we obtain a=b,.,改正后的句子,Substituting Eq,.,(7),in Eq,.,(8),we obtain a=b,.,或,Substituting of Eq,.,(7)in Eq,.,(8)yields a=b,.,例,35,汉语原句,声音传播的速度比光慢得多,。,英语错句,Sound travels less faster than light is,.,改正后的句子,Sound travels much less fast than light,（,does,）,.,例,36,汉语原句,这个设备有它的一些独特的优点,。,英语错句,This equipment has a few advantage all it,s own,.,改正后的句子,This equipment has a few advantages all its own,.,例,37,汉语原句,我们已定义了度量,m,的质量单位。,英语错句,We have defined mass unit to measure m,.,改正后的 句子,We have defined mass units with which to measure m,.,例,38,汉语原句,所得结果与测量值吻合,。,英语错句,The results obtained fit the experimental values,.,改正后的句子,The results obtained agree,（,或,are in agreement,）,with the experimental values,.,例,39,汉语原句,本文讨论了三维多通道稳态流场和温度场的数值计算与实验。,英语错句,Numerical computation and experiment for the steady-state flow and temperature field in three dimensional multi-channels are discussed in this paper,.,改正后的句子,The numerical computation of and the experiment on the steady-state flow and temperature fields in three dimensional multi-channels are discussed,.,例,40,汉语原句,定义了一种描述图论中某些工程问题求解的算法语言(我们称之为图论算法语言)。,英语错句,An algorithm language,（,we call it the Algorithm Language for the Graph Theory,）,to describe the solution of some engineering problem in the graph theory is defined,.,改正后的句子,An algorithm language,（,which we call the Algorithm Language for the Graph Theory,）,for describing the solution of some engineering problems in the graph theory is defined,.,例,41,汉语原句,我们容易确定该物体的重量。,英语错句,We are easy to determine the weight of the body,.,改正后的句子,It is easy for us to determine the weight of the body,.,（,或,We can determine the weight of the body easily,.,）,例,42,汉语原句,摩擦使得输入机器的功大于由机器所做的有用功,。,英语错句,Friction make the work put into a machine be greater than the useful work accomplished by it,.,改正后的句子,Friction makes the work put into a machine greater than the useful work accomplished by it,.,例,43,汉语原句,瓶中的空气受热后就会膨胀,。,英语错句,On heating,the air in the bottle will be expanded,.,改正后的句子,On being heated,the air in the bottle will expand,.,例,44,汉语原句,接收机的许多原理也适用于发射机,。,英语错句,Many of principles of a receiver also apply for a transmitter,.,改正后的句子,Many of the principles of a receiver also apply to a transmitter,.,例,45,汉语原句,物体越热，它辐射的能量就越多,。,英语错句,The hoter the body,the more the energy it radiates,.,改正后的句子,The hotter the body,the more energy it radiates,.,例,46,汉语原句,半导体将在第二章加以讨论,。,英语错句,Semiconductor will be discussed in the chapter 2,.,改正后的句子,Semiconductors will be discussed in Chapter 2,.,例,47,汉语原句,某些元素产生放射的能力被称为放射性,。,英语错句,The ability for some elements to give off radiations is referred as the radioactivity,.,改正后的句子,The ability of some elements to give off radiations is referred to as radioactivity,.,例,48,汉语原句,人们经常发射各种卫星来获得有关太空的信息,。,英语错句,The various satellites are frequently launched to obtain informations about space,.,改正后的句子,Various satellites are frequently launched to obtain information about space,.,例,49,汉语原句,不仅温度和光影响导电率，而且给半导体加杂质也会使导电率变化很大,。,英语错句,Not only temperature and light affect the conductivity,but the addition of impurities to semiconductors will also make it to change greatly,.,改正后的句子,Not only do temperature and light affect the conductivity,but the addition of impurities to semiconductors will also make it change greatly,.,例,50,汉语原句,直流电总是朝一个方向流动,。,英语错句,The direct current always flow to one direction,.,改正后的句子,Direct current flows always in one direction,.,例,51,汉语原句,在这里必须使用一个8伏的电池,。,英语错句,A 8-volts battery must be used here,.,改正后的句子,An 8-volt battery must be sued here,.,例,52,汉语原句,结果表明，这两种方法其实质是一致的，只不过各有其应用的条件,。,英语错句,The results indicate that this two methods are consistent,they have only respective applied condition,.,改正后的句子,The results indicate that these two methods are consistent in essence,with the exception that they have their own specific application conditions,.,例,53,汉语原句,这台仪器的价格很贵,。,英语错句,The price for this instrument is expensive,.,改正后的句子,The price of this instrument is high,.,例,54,汉语原句,这个设备占地方太多,。,英语错句,This device takes too many places,.,改正后的句子,This device occupies to much space,（,或,room,）,.,例,55,汉语原句,机器人是一种特殊的电子设备,。,英语错句,Robot is a kind of special electronic devices,.,改正后的句子,A robot is a special kind of electronic device,.,例,56,汉语原句,这六个月来他们一直在设计一种新型计算机,。,英语错句,They have been designed a type of new computer since these six months,.,改正后的句子,They have been designing a new type of computer these six months,.,例,57,汉语原句,改进后的算法在位移矢量的估值精度上优于原算法,。,英语错句,The improved algorithm has an advantage compared with the original one in the accuracy of the estimation of the displacement vectors,.,改正后的句子,The improved algorithm has an advantage over,（,或,is superior to,）,the original one in the accuracy of the estimation of the displacement vectors,.,例,58,汉语原句,本文注意到该系统具有永久磁铁的特点，提出一种比较简易的方法，解决其磁路的计算问题,。,英语错句,This paper pays attention to having the characteristic of permanent ring magnet,and presents a kind of simpler method of solving problem of calculation for the magnetic circuit,.,改正后的句子,On the basis of the fact that this system has the property of a permanent magnet,this paper presents a simpler method of calculation for the magnetic circuit,.,例,59,汉语原句,经过对平面连杆机构的五类基本杆件和运动副的约束性质的分析，本文导出了用拓扑图论中的点边关联矩阵表达的拓扑变换,。,英语错句,This paper has inferred the topology transformation which is expressed by the vertex-edge incidence matrix of topology graph from analyzing the five kinds of linkage and the restricted properties of kinematic pairs,.,改正后的句子,By analyzing the five basic types of linkage and the constraints of kinematic pairs,this paper has inferred the topological transformation which expressed by the vertex-edge incidence matrix of the topological graph,.,例,60,汉语原句,在这种情况下，二极管的反向电流可以忽略不计,。,英语错句,In this case the diode reverse current is negligible,.,改正后的句子,In this case the reverse diode current is negligible,.,例,61,汉语原句,这个值似乎不能满足该方程,。,英语错句,It appears that this value does not satisfy the equation,.,改正后的句子,It does not appear that this value satisfies the equation,.,例,62,汉语原句,在这个情况下，必须尽量利用信号的能量,。,英语错句,In this case it is necessary to use the energy of signals as possibly,.,改正后的句子,In this case it is necessary to use as much energy of signals as possible,.,例,63,汉语原句,滤波器的齿数变化对滤波器通带性能的影响比结构尺寸变化产生的影响大。,英语错句,The variation of the filer,s tooth number more affects the performance of its passband compared with the variation of its dimensions,.,改正后的句子,The variation of the filter,s tooth number has a greater effect on the performance of its passband than the variation of its dimensions,.,例,64,汉语原句,根据上面对该多项式分解的分析，就得到了一种新颖的排列,。,英语错句,On the basis of the analysis above to the decomposition of the polynomial,a novel kind of configuration is followed,.,改正后的句子,On the basis of the above analysis of the decomposition of the polynomial,a novel configuration results,.,例,65,汉语原句,本文论述了该系统的设计思路与结构，深入探讨了模型检验,。,英语错句,This paper discussed designing ways and structure of the system and deeply discussed model testing,.,改正后的句子,This paper discusses the design guiding for and the structure of the system,with a deep inquiry into model testing,.,例,66,汉语原句,最后用计算机仿真对窗口损耗概率进行了分析,。,英语错句,In the end,analysis of packet loss probability is presented by computer simulation,.,改正后的句子,Finally,an analysis of packet loss probability is made by computer simulation,.,例,67,汉语原句,通过与,MEI,方法进行对比，指出,MEI,方法中的第三假设值得商榷。,英语错句,After comparison with MEI method,it is shown that the third postulate of MEI method is questionable,.,改正后的句子,A comparison with the MEI method shows that the third postulate in the MEI method is questionable,（,或,is open to question,）,.,例,68,汉语原句,作者现在从事于计算机视觉、图像处理和识别的教学和研究工作,。,英语错句,The author is engaged in the teaching and research of computer vision,image processing and recognition,.,改正后的句子,The author is engaged in the teaching of and the research on computer vision,image processing and recognition,.,例,69,汉语原句,最后，本文给出了有待于解决的几个问题,。,英语错句,Finally,this paper presents several problems remain to be solved,.,改正后的句子,Finally,this paper presents several problems which remain to be solved,.,例,70,汉语原句,如果下面两个条件中任一个成立，那么我们就得到一个新的表达式,。,英语错句,If any one of the following two conditions is held,then we have a new expression,.,改正后的句子,If either of the following two conditions holds,then we have a new expression,.,例,71,汉语原句,特别在无线电传输领域，这设备有许多优点,。,英语错句,Specially in the field of radio transmission,there are many advantages with the device,.,改正后的句子,Especially in the field of radio transmission,the device has many advantages,.,例,72,汉语原句,本文所讲的内容对机械工程师来说是很感兴趣的,。,英语错句,The content that this paper talk about is of great interest to mechanical engineers,.,改正后的句子,What this paper described is of great interest to mechanical engineers,.,例,73,汉语原句,模拟结果表明，所有这两种方案是容易实现的,。,英语错句,The simulation result prove that all these two schemes are easy to be implemented,.,改正后的句子,The simulation results show that both the schemes are easy to implement,.,例,74,汉语原句,同时本文导出了所有这些因素对系统性能影响的定量表达式，在此基础上提出了一种改进型系统。,英语错句,Simultaneously,this paper derived qu