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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。谢谢。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。谢谢。不能作为科学依据。,怎样提升书面表示句子档次,1/126,1.关键点齐全,2.较多语法结构和,高级,词汇,3.全文结构紧凑,高档书面表示要求：,2/126,1.,时间：昨天下午放学后,请依据下述情况写一篇80-120个单词英语新闻广播稿，准备在你校广播台播出。,2.地点：回家路上,3.人物：高一（2）班两名男生田力和段凯,4.事件：边骑车边谈笑，后追逐一辆公交车，以为好玩。公交车遇红灯停下，两人来不及刹车，摔倒在地。一人左手臂摔断，一人腿部受伤。,5.警示：严格恪守交通规则，切忌在马路上嬉笑玩耍。,3/126,There,was,an accident,happened,to two students in our school yesterday afternoon.(经典病句）,There was an accident,that happened,to two,students in our school yesterday afternoon.,(定语从句）,An accident,occurred,to,two students in our,school yesterday afternoon.（高级词汇）,An accident happened to two students in our school yesterday afternoon.,4/126,Tian Li and Duan Kai were riding bikes side by side on the way home after school.They were talking and laughing loudly.,Tian Li and Duan Kai were riding bikes side by side on the way home after school,talking and laughing loudly.,（用分词合并）,After,school was over,Tianli and Dunkai from Grade 1 were,on their way home,by bike,talking and laughing,happily.,5/126,3.When they saw a car which was passing by,they started to run after it.They thought it was very interesting.,Seeing,a,passing,car,they started to,chase,it,thinking,it great,fun,.,The bus stopped when the traffic light turned red.,Unfortunately,the bus stopped,the moment,the traffic light turned red,.,6/126,The two students were very close to the bus and they couldnt stop their bikes in time.,The two students were,so,close to the bus,that,they,were not able to,stop their bikes in time.,7/126,Ones left arm,was hurt,and,the others leg,was hurt too,.,Ones left arm,was broken,while,the others leg,got hurt,.,(防止用相同结构和词汇）（高级连词）,One,had his left arm broken,while,the other,got his leg hurt,./the other,was badly hurt in the leg,.),(,高级结构）,They were knocked off their bikes,one,with the left arm broken,and the other,with one leg hurt,.,(,高级介词短语/独立主格结构）,8/126,They fell off the bikes.Tianlis broke his his left arm and Dunkai hurt his leg.,As a result,they were,knocked off,the bikes,one with his left arm broken and the other with his leg hurt,.,9/126,5.,If we dont obey traffic rules,we might die.,a.If we go against traffic rules,we might lose our lives.,b.If we go against traffic rules,we might end up in hospital.,c.Going against traffic rules might cost us our lives.,d.Dont risk our lives going against traffic rules.(各种表示）,10/126,An accident happened to two students in our school yesterday afternoon.School was over.Tianli and Dunkai from Grade 1 were going home by bike.They were talking and laughing happily.When they saw a car which was passing by,they started to run after it.They thought it was very interesting.The bus stopped when the traffic light turned red.The two students were very close to the bus and they couldnt stop their bikes in time.They fell off the bikes.Tianli broke his left arm and Dunkai hurt his leg.,11/126,An accident happened to two students in our school yesterday afternoon.,School was over.Tianli and Dunkai from Grade 1 were going home by bike.They were talking and laughing happily.,When they saw a bus which was passing by,they started to run after it.They thought it was very interesting.,The bus stopped when the traffic light turned red.,The two students were very close to the bus and they couldnt stop their bikes in time.,They fell off the bikes.Tianlis broke his his left arm and Dunkai hurt his leg.,12/126,An accident,occurred to,two students in our school yesterday afternoon.,After school was over,Tianli and Dunkai from Grade 1 were,heading,home,by bike,talking and laughing,happily.,Seeing,a,passing,bus,they started to,chase,it,thinking,it was great,fun,.,Unfortunately,the bus stopped,the moment,the traffic light turned red.,The two students were,so,close to the bus,that,they,were not able to,stop their bikes in time.,As a result,they,were,knocked off,the bikes,one with his left arm broken and the other with his leg hurt.,13/126,6,.He got up at 7 oclock.,（,使用各种句式,）,It was not until 7 oclock that he got up.,Not until 7 oclock did he get up.,(强调句）,（倒装句）,He didnt get up until 7 oclock.,14/126,1.I had a good idea.,a.A good idea occurred to me.,b.I came up with a good idea.,2.Dont worry.Well try to help you.,make every effort to,make great efforts to,spare no efforts to,try every means to,do all we can to,do what we can to,各种表示&高级词汇,15/126,Practice:,1.,There are 80%of the population live on farming.,2.,At 8 this morning,there were about 50 American students came to visit our school.,80%of the population live on farming.,At 8 this morning,about 50 American students came to visit our school.,16/126,Practice:,（用分词合并）,He had finished his homework.,He went out to play football.,I was moved by his words.I decided to lend him a hand.,Moved by his words,I decided to lend him a hand.,Having finished his homework,he went out to play football.,17/126,Practice:,（用连接词连接）,The police searched everywhere.The missing boy could not be found.,The police searched everywhere,but the missing boy could not be found.,Though,the police searched everywhere,the missing boy could not be found.,18/126,Practice:,(防止用相同结构和词汇）,1.I like sports.I like music,too,.,I like sports and music as well.,I like sports as well as music.,My favorite subject is English while my sisters favorite subject is history.,My favorite subject is English while my,sisters is history.,b.,My favorite subject is English while my,sister likes history best.,19/126,My old grandfather fell asleep in the sofa.,He had a book on his knees.,Practice:,（用介词短语）,My old grandfather fell asleep in the sofa with a book on his knees.,20/126,提升句子档次小结：,1.用分词短语合并句子,用介词短语合并句子,用独立主格结构合并句子,用连接词连接句子,2.用高级结构和词汇,3.用定语从句、主语从句、强调句、倒装句,4.用不一样结构和词汇,21/126,你英国朋友正在做一个课题；世界各地生日庆贺方式。他请你介绍中国学生过生日方式。请你依据以下关键点写一篇短文：,一、通常方式,1生日聚会,2生日礼品,3生日祝福,二、我认为更有意义庆贺方式和理由,*词数100-120 （浙江卷）,22/126,Now students in China celebrate their birthdays in many ways.,Usually,a party is held.Best friends and relatives will come to the party.They usually buy a gift.They show their best wishes.Sometimes,people send short messages too and it is becoming very popular.,But I think that its better to help other people.We know that its important to learn to help other people.Helping other people can do us a lot of good.People will help you because youve helped them and youll be happy,23/126,Nowadays students in China celebrate their birthdays in various ways.,Usually,a party is held so that people can get together.Best friends,as well as relatives,are going to be invited.Its polite to buy a small gift which stands for ones best wishes.Whats more,sending short messages on ones birthday is becoming more and more popular,as a result of its convenience.,However,as far as Im concerned,its more meaningful to care about others than about oneself.As is known to all,to give is better than to receive.Birthdays mean not only being older but more helpful and useful to the world.Therefore,its of importance to learn to help others.Helping others on ones birthday can do you a lot of good.For one thing,people will help you in return in the future;for another,youll be happy.,As a result,I think it better to help others to spend ones birthday.,24/126,Nowadays students in China celebrate their birthdays in various ways.,Usually,a party is held so that people can get together.Best friends,as well as relatives,are going to be invited.Its polite to buy a small gift which stands for ones best wishes.Whats more,sending short messages on ones birthday is becoming more and more popular,as a result of its convenience.,However,as far as Im concerned,its more meaningful to care about others than about oneself.As is known to all,to give is better than to receive.Birthdays mean not only being older but more helpful and useful to the world.Therefore,its of importance to learn to help others.Helping others on ones birthday can do you a lot of good.For one thing,people will help you in return in the future;for another,youll be happy.,As a result,I think it better to help others to spend ones birthday.,25/126,Now students in China celebrate their birthdays in many ways.,Usually,a party is held.Best friends and relatives will come to the party.They usually buy a gift.They show their best wishes.Sometimes,people send short messages too and it is becoming very popular.,But I think that its better to help other people.We know that its important to learn to help other people.Helping other people can do us a lot of good.People will help you because youve helped them and youll be happy,26/126,(1)Now students in China celebrate their birthdays in many ways.,(2)Usually,a party is held.Best friends and relatives will come to the party.,（用where定语从句）(,3)They usually buy a gift.They show their best wishes.,（和并句子）,(4)Sometimes,people send short messages too and it is becoming very popular,（用which定语从句）,.,(5)But,(替换）,I think,（替换）,that its better to help other people.(6)We know that its important to learn to help others.Helping other people can do us a lot of good.(7)People will help you in return and youll be happy,（用For one thing,For another 替换）,.,Nowadays students in China celebrate their birthdays in,various,ways.,Usually,a party is held,where,best friends,as well as,relatives can get together and,have fun.,They usually buy a small gift,with which,to express their best wishes.,Sometimes,people send short messages too,which,is becoming very popular.,However,as far as Im concerned,its better to do something for others.,As is known to all,its of importance,to help others.Helping others on ones birthday can be not only,meaningful,but also do you a lot of good.,For one thing people will help you,in return,;for another,youll,get happiness out of that,.,27/126,Nowadays students in China celebrate their birthdays in,various,ways.,Usually,a party is held,where,best friends,as well as,relatives can get together and,have fun.,They usually buy a small gift,with which,to express their best wishes.Sometimes,people send short messages too,which,is becoming very popular.,However,as far as Im concerned,its better to do something for others.,As is known to all,its of importance,to help others.Helping others on ones birthday can be not only,meaningful,but also do you a lot of good.For one thing people will help you,in return,;for another,youll,get happiness out of that,.,In short,the best way to,celebrate our birthdays,is to,help others.,28/126,最近，学校组织高三学生开展了一场讨论。讨论主题是：周末要不要上课呢？请依据下表提供信息，写一篇150字左右短文，客观介绍一下讨论情况，而且简单地表示自己观点。,50%要上课,高考6月举行,要抓紧时间复习;50%不要上课,休息好，提升效率其中一天学习,Recently,the students of Senior 3 in our school have had a discussion about whether we should have classes on weekends.,29/126,There is a widespread concern over the issue that _作文题目_.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.A majority of people think that _ 观点一_.In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows:in the first place,_原因一_.Furthermore,in the second place,_原因二_.So it goes without saying that _观点一_.,People,however,differintheiropinionsonthismatter.Somepeoplehold the idea that _观点二_.In their point of view,on the one hand，_原因一_.On the other hand,_原因二_.Therefore,thereis nodoubtthat _观点二_.,As far as I am concerned,Ifirmlysupporttheviewthat _观点一或二_.Itis not only because _,but also because _.The more _,the more _.,30/126,There is a widespread concern over the issue that,whether we should have classes on weekends,.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.50%of students think that,they should have classes on weekends,.In their views there is the factor contributing to this attitude as follow:,because the College Entrance Examination this year will be held in June,and students should make full use of free time to review what they have learnt,.,31/126,Students,however,differintheiropinionsonthismatter.,Another 50%are against the idea of having classes on weekends.,In their point of view,students should have a good rest on weekends so that they can study more effectively during the weekdays.,32/126,As far as I am concerned,Ifirmlysupporttheviewthat,we should have classes on weekends,.Itis because-,33/126,50%of them think they should have classes on weekends because the College Entrance Examination this year will be held in June,and students should make full use of free time to review what they have learnt.,Another 50%are against the idea of having classes on weekends.They believe students should have a good rest on weekends so that they can study more effectively during the weekdays.,34/126,这几年，“考生该不该复读”这个话题一直为社会各界所关注。下表是你班同学讨论结果，请你客观介绍情况，并简明阐述自己观点。,多数同学认为 少数同学认为,1.不该复读 1.应该复读,2.对应届生不公平 2.能够考上好大学,3.增加家庭经济负担 3.有利于未来就业,4.精神压力大 4.上何种大学是人生重 要转折点,whether students retake classes after failing the college entrance examination,the students who take the exam for the first time,turning point in life,has no chance to be admitted to one university,35/126,一中学班级就生活在城市或乡村问题进行了辩论。下面是部分辩论统计关键点，请确定你观点，参考该统计关键点并发挥想像，写一篇题为Living in the City or the Countryside短文。,The city:so many things to do;make more money.,The country:too quiet;boring;no jobs,The country:quiet;enjoy so much in nature.grow food on a farm.,The city:very noisy;crowded.,36/126,Nowadays,there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)_作文题目_.In fact,there are both advantages and disadvantages in _题目议题_.Generally speaking,it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows.Firstly,_优点一_.And secondly _优点二_.,Just As a popular saying goes,every coin has two sides,_讨论议题_ is no exception,and in another word,it still has negative aspects.To begin with,_缺点一_.In addition,_缺点二_.,To sum up,we should try to bring the advantages of _讨论议题_ into full play,and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time.In that case,we will definitely make a better use of the _讨论议题_.,37/126,近期，中学聘请外教之风愈演愈烈，请你结合下表对其利弊发表自己观点。,好处1.提升学校著名度。,2.提升学习英语兴趣，口语表示能力增强。,3.更加好地了解外国文化。,弊端1.花费高。,2.一些外国人难以适应我国生活方式，甚至担心自己安全。,3.外国人不了解中国学生特点。,自己观点一切需要靠自己,注意：1.词数：100左右,2.短文应包含表中全部关键点,3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯,38/126,Theres no doubt that schools will be better known.Whats more,its good for students to develop interest in English study as well as learn more about foreign cultures.Meanwhile,their oral English will be improved a lot.,On the other hand,some foreigners,though well paid,find it difficult to get used to the way of life in a foreign country and they sometimes worry about their safety.The most important thing is that they are not quite familiar with the students.As a result,many students cant benefit from them.,39/126,中学生要不要参加社会实践？,1应参加社会实践,2有利于了解社会，取得经验,3有利于培养能力，学以致用,1不应参加社会实践,2太年轻，不能很好地适应社会,3浪费时间、精力、也没有机会注意：,40/126,They believe social practice can help them know more about the things around them and give them much experience.By doing so,the students ability can be developed.Besides,they can put what they have learned in the books into practice.,On the other hand,they think middle school students dont have to do social practice,because they are too y
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