Composition–敘述法寫作策略.doc

Composition – 敘述法寫作策略
主題： A Memorable Day
確立主題： The Day I Had A Job Interview
時間線： 過去…前一天…面試當天…面試之後…未來…
1. What did I do to prepare myself for the interview
a. deciding what to wear
b. sleepless at the night because I felt worried
c. getting my personal file ready
2. What happened during the interview
a. The interviewers were satisfied with my qualifications.
b. I felt confident and at ease
c. The interviewer expressed approval of my previous work experience.
3. The result and ho I felt after the interview
a. I got hired a week after the interview.
b. I started to prepare for the new job.
c. I promised to work diligently and do my best at work.

運用時序信號 (Time order signals)
單字
片語
連接詞
afterwards, later, soon, finally, suddenly, first (second,…),now, meanwhile
All of a sudden, at that moment, Before long, The next day, After a while, At last, By Sunday, eventually
after, before, when, while, as, as soon as,
The typhoon will hit the island this evening. Meanwhile, people are preparing food and water. (值此同時)

Practice: 請以 “A Date” 為主題來構思文章的內容

1. What did I do to prepare myself for the date?
a. b.
c. d.
2. What happened during the date?
a b.
c. d.
3. The result and how I felt about the date?
a. b.
b. d.

Composition – 敘述法寫作策略
主題： A Memorable Day
確立主題： The Day I Had A Job Interview
時間線： 過去…前一天…面試當天…面試之後…未來…
4. What did I do to prepare myself for the interview
a. deciding what to wear
b. sleepless at the night because I felt worried
c. getting my personal file ready
5. What happened during the interview
a. The interviewers were satisfied with my qualifications.
b. I felt confident and at ease
c. The interviewer expressed approval of my previous work experience.
6. The result and how I felt after the interview
a. I got hired a week after the interview.
b. I started to prepare for the new job.
c. I promised to work diligently and do my best at work.

運用時序信號 (Time order signals)
單字
片語
連接詞
afterwards, later, soon, finally, First (second,…),now, meanwhile
At noon, at that moment, Before long, The next day, After a while, At last, By Sunday,
after, before, when, while, as, as soon as,
The typhoon will hit the island this evening. Meanwhile, people are preparing food and water. (值此同時)

Practice: 請以 “A Date” 為主題來構思文章的內容

1. What did I do to prepare myself for the date?
a. decide what to wear b. make a room reservation in a fancy restaurant
c. topics to chat about d.
2. What happened during the date?
a. very nervous at first b. order a bottle of red wine to relax the tension
c. exchange our yahoo messenger account
3. The result and how I felt about the date?
a. I know my date (約會對象) more b. call my date to keep in touch
c. plan another date

請找出以下文章的時序訊號
My Experience of Seeing a Doctor
The other day when school was over, it suddenly rained hard. I still rode my bike home in spite of the heavy rain. After dinner, I felt dizzy and coughed. I thought I might get a cold because I had been caught in the rain. Therefore, Mom took me to a hospital in the neighborhood. When it was my turn, a nurse took my temperature to see if I had a high fever. And then the doctor checked my mouth and throat. Later, he asked me some questions about the symptoms I had, gave me a shot, and wrote a prescription for me. He also bade me to take more rest so that I might recover from the flu as soon as possible. While staying in the hospital, I heard some patients crying loudly with physical pain. Others were lying on the bed, unable to move around. And still others were facing hopelessly the terrible death. At the sight of the sad scenes, I finally realized that nothing was more important than health. Fortunately, I regained my health. From the bitter experience, I have realized that health is of great importance. Once it is spoiled, it is hard to restore it. Therefore, we should cherish our health as much as we can.

My Experience of Seeing a Doctor
The other day when school was over, it suddenly rained hard. I still rode my bike home in spite of the heavy rain. After dinner, I ______________(感覺頭暈) and coughed. I thought I might get a cold because I had been caught in the rain. Therefore, Mom took me to a hospital in the neighborhood. _______________________________(輪到我的時候), a nurse _____________________________________________________(量體溫看我是否發燒). And then the doctor checked my mouth and throat. Later, he asked me some questions about the symptoms I had, ____________________(打針), and __________________________(開處方箋) for me. He also ________________________________ (交待我要多休息) so that I might recover from the flu as soon as possible. While staying in the hospital, I heard _______ patients crying loudly _________ (帶著身體的疼痛). ________ were lying on the bed, unable to move around. And _____________ were _____________________________________________________(無助地面對可怕的死亡). At the sight of the sad scenes, I finally realized that _________________________________________(沒有什麼東西比健康更重要). Fortunately, I regained my health. ____________________________(從這次的痛苦經驗), I have realized that health is of great importance. ____________________________(一旦受到損壞), it is hard to __________(恢復) it. Therefore, _________________________________________________(儘可能珍惜健康).

The most difficult moment in my life happened when I had just turned 12. That year, I transferred to a new school because my family moved to Taichung. I had trouble adapting to the new environment there. In order not to be alienated, I hung out with a certain bunch of classmates. Without realizing it, I started to cut classes, smoke, and even steal. Very soon, my parents found out I was keeping bad company because my grades went from bad to worse, and my teachers informed them of my frequent absences from school. My father started to keep an eye on me. He drove me to school and picked me up after classes. It was tough in the beginning, but my gang eventually realized that it was too much trouble having me in their group. They give up on me, which was a blessing in disguise. Thinking back, I am very grateful to my parents for coming to my aid at that critical moment.

1. Topic Sentence
2. Paragraph Development
a.
b.
c
3. concluding sentence:

The most difficult moment in my life happened ________________________________ (我剛滿12歲). That year, I _________________(轉學)a new school because my family moved to Taichung. I had trouble adapting to the new environment there. __________________________________________(為了不被孤立), I _______________ (鬼混)with a certain bunch of classmates. Without realizing it, I started to _____________ (翹課), smoke, and even steal. Very soon, my parents found out I was _____________________ (交壞朋友) because ________________________________________ (我的成績每況愈下), and my teachers ___________告知他們)my frequent ____________(缺課) from school. My father started to ___________________________ (注意)me. He drove me to school and picked me up after classes. It was _________________ (困難)in the beginning, but my _________(同夥) eventually realized that ________________________________________ (有我在他們群體裡面是一種麻煩). They_______________________ (放棄) me, which was a ___________________________________ (塞翁失馬，焉知非福). Thinking back, ___________________________________________________________________.
(我很感謝我的父母在我危急的時刻對我伸出援手)
b

1. Topic Sentence: It happened when I was 12.
2. Paragraph Development
a. I was involved with bad company. (give examples)
b. We did many bad things together. (give examples)
c. My parents found this out and helped me.
3. concluding sentence: I am grateful to my parents for helping me out.

The Experience of Seeing a Doctor
本篇文章架構分明，是一個讓學生背誦的好範文
School over – rained hard – rode a bike home – after dinner – dizzy and coughed—get a cold. è to a hospital – nurse taking my temperature—the doctor checked my throat and couth –運用列舉的句型--- He also bade me to… --While staying in the hospital 運用了 some…others …. And still others 的句型 => 總結 At the sight of the sad scenes…. Fortunately, I regained my health. From this bitter experience…I have realized….

作文題目：
1. An Unlucky Day
2. An unforgettable trip to….

An Unlucky Day
When I got up this morning, I had a strange feeling that it just wasn’t going to be my day. First because I got up late, I missed breakfast. Then, as I was dashing to the bus stop to catch my bus, I stepped on a banana peel, slipped and fell on my backside.
To make things worse, the bus didn’t stop for me because it was packed. I had no choice but to take a taxi. Not until the taxi got to my school did I realize I had left my wallet at home. After I did a lot of explaining and apologizing, the driver let me go. Finally, I arrived at the school gate. To my astonishment, I suddenly realized it was a school holiday. It never rains but it pours.

(Ivy p59)