写作小技巧.doc

写作小技巧

高考的书面表达不再只要求要点齐全，表达清楚，而是在此基础上又提出了更高的要求, 表述精当，成为得分亮点。
——覆盖所有内容要点。
——应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。
——语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。
——有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
因此，如何使用高级表达是一个重点也是难点。对应办法：
1.系统复习基础知识，积累常用词语、常用句型。
2.积累优秀范文，划出范文中优秀语句，反复诵读。
3.写作时多用一些复合句，减少一些简单句。
4.适当选用v. -ing、过去分词用作状语。
5适当选用一些比较精巧、一般学生不会使用的词汇，如:eg:what’s worse,thanks to,judging from,compared with,etc.
●难点训练
An Introduction to the Four-Week English Course in the Beech School of English
*A small,friendly school:in North London,20 minutes from the centre by train
*The number of students:70
*Teaching:24 hours a week;classes not bigger than ten
*Staying with carefully-selected(选择) English families
*Sports and activities(活动)：Tennis,sailing & swimming;visits to the theatre & places of interest
*Time:July 12-August 6,1999
*Price:￡350
1.假设你是约翰，您的中国笔友钟华将随在伦敦工作的父母来英国学习两年，他托你介绍一所英语学校，以便他在暑假中提高英语水平，你看了一些广告介绍，在比较了几所学校的地理位置、教学分班、住宿、活动、教学时间和价格之后，选择了一所，并根据该校的广告介绍写了一封回信。
该校广告介绍如下：
注意：（1）词数100左右
(2)信的开头和结尾已经写好，不计在总词数内。
April 16,1999
Dear Zhong Hua,
Very pleased to know that you are coming to study in London and it is really a good idea to improve your English before the new term begins next September.
……
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours
John
2.最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园里要不要收门票？请你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。

60%的同学认为：
40%的同学认为：
1.不应收门票
2.公园是公众休闲的地方
3.如收门票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象
1.应收门票，但票价不宜高
2.支付园林工人工资
3.购新花木
注意：（1）信的开头已为你写好。
（2）词数：100左右
（3）参考词汇：门票—entrance fee

Dear Editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the discusscion we’ve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
3.（★★★★）假定你是一名高中生，一次一位外国朋友问你，除了在学校学习英语外还有什么其他途径练习英语。请你根据提示用英语写出你参加“英语角”的情况。
提示：
（1）“英语角”于两年前成立，许多中学生参加，有时也有些大学生和外国友人来此。
（2）活动时间：每周六上午。
（3）活动内容：练习英语口语，谈论大家共同感兴趣的事情，交流学习英语的经验等。
（4）谈谈你参加此项活动的体会。
参考词汇：
“英语角”：English Corner
表述精当，得分亮点
［难点］
Students Like Optional Course
This term our school has offered more than 10 optional courses, from which students can choose.The courses are given from 3:30 to 5:00 every Tuesday afternoon.
Students take great interest in the optional courses.Their favorites are computer,spoken English,arts and so on.They say they have learned a lot that is not taught in textbooks and they have got a great deal of practice. However,students are not quite satisfied.They hope more optional courses will be offered while their home-work should be less.They suggest more trips and visits should be organized so that they can learn more about what is going on outside school.
（划线部分为较高级表达）
［歼灭难点训练］
April 16,1999
Dear Zhong Hua,
Very pleased to know that you are coming to study in London and it is really a good idea to improve your English before the new term begins next September.
Here is an introduction to the Beech School of English. Compared with the other schools,I think it is the best one that you can go to.First,it is very convenient for you to get there by train.Next,the school is small and the classes are very small,too.There are 24 teaching hours a week.Staying with an English family will provide you with a chance to practise your English and know more about the English family life.After class,you can enjoy sports and activities with other students.The time will suit you and the price is quite reasonable.I’ll get in touch with them if you are interested in this school.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours
John
2.Dear Editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.
Opinions are divided on the question.60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees.They believe a public park should be free of charge.People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves.Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more,it will become necessary to build gates and walls,which will do harm to the appearanceof a city.
On the other hand,40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers,and to buy plants and young trees.They suggest, however,fees should be charged low.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
3.I’m a senior student.I like English very much. Besides attending English lessons at school,I often go to the English Corner in the park near my home on Saturday morning.It was set up(formed)two years ago.Many high school students gather there.Sometimes,some college students and even foreign friends are present at the English Corner.
There,we practise our spoken English,talk about what we are interested in, exchange our experience in learning English and so on.I’ve learned a lot.
I have greatly improved myself in English since I visited it.It is really a good help to me.