高考写信作文学案.doc

建议信 ( a Letter of suggestion)
写作方法 第一段： 1. 简介自己，不要罗嗦； 2 说明目的，注意语气。
第二段： 1提出具体建议； 2首先肯定优点，再写改进内容
第三段： 总结建议，注意礼貌，易于接受。
写作流程图
说明写信的目的→介绍详情、说明原因→提出建议→提出希望采纳建议，并表示谢意，盼望回
第一部分：说明写信的目的 套语：
1. You have asked me for some advice on/with regard to.......and I will try to give some useful suggestions.
您问及我有关......的事情，我会尽量给出一些有用的建议。
2 I am writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of….
写此信是要提出我对….进一步提高的建议
3 I have received your letter saying that you ….. I recommend that……
来信收到，得知你…..，我建议……
4 As a regular customer/student, I am writing to you to present my suggestions on...
作为老主顾/学生，我写信向您建议......
5 I’m writing to express my idea concerning... 写此信是要表达关于…的想法
第二部分：介绍详情、提出建议 套语： 我建议……
1 I’d like to suggest that ……我建议......
2 In my opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: on the one hand, …. on the other hand,.……
3 I would like to make a recommendation that …
4 I think it would be more beneficial if you could...
5 I would like you to consider the following suggestions. Firstly….., Secondly,…..Finally….
6 I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendations practical/useful/helpful.
第三部分：提出希望采纳建议，盼望回复 套语。
1 Please take good consideration of my advice. Thanks. 请仔细考虑我的建议，谢谢
2 I believe you will take seriously my advice into account. 我想您会认真考虑我的建议的。
3 I would appreciate it very much if you could consider my suggestions. I will be looking forward
to your reply.
4 Thank you for reading my letter.
5 I’m looking forward to...
6 I hope you will find these proposals useful， and I would be ready to discuss this matter with
you to further details.
三 能力提升
1 我很高兴收到你两周前寄给我的来信。

2您问我毕业后是否回国的事情。

3我会尽量给出一些有用的建议。

4 你我看，你完成学业后应该回国。

5 一方面，你所学的专业在中国是急需的。

6 我认为对你来说在中国找到一个好工作相当的容易。

7另一方面，你照顾父母更方便。

8 因此，我认为如果你能回国，对你的好处更多。

9我想您会认真考虑我的建议的。

10 我期待你的回复。

投诉信（抱怨信） ( a Letter of complain)
写作方法: 第一段：投诉人的身份，点明投诉内容或目的。
第二段：写明投诉的原因、问题的经过及产生的后果。
第三段：提出本人要求或解决问题的方法，建议或条件，不需展开。
段首常用语：
(1) I am a customer/ visitor/ passenger ...of your ...
(2)... I bought a . in your store.
(3) I am writing to make a complaint about…
(4) I wish to express my dissatisfaction/disappointment about…
(5) I am writing to inform you that I find…unsatisfactory.
(6) I would like to draw your attention to the problem/fault…
段尾常用语：
(1)It would be highly appreciated if you could…
(2)I believe you will take my complaints seriously and…
(3) I would like to have this matter settled by the end of this month.
(4) I could not be more satisfied if you can kindly…
投诉信格式模板：
Dear ________，
I am ________ (自我介绍). I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about ________ (抱怨的事情)．
The reason for my dissatisfaction is ________ (总体介绍). In the first place, ________ (抱怨的第一个方面). In addition, ________ (抱怨的第二个方面). To make the matter worse, I find it ________ (感觉)to ________ (抱怨的方面带来的后果)．
I appreciate it very much if you could ____________ (提出建议和请求), and I would like to have this matter settled by ________ (设定解决事情最后期限)．Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.
三、能力提升
1 我是李华，你们航空公司的一名乘客。

2 我对你们的服务不满意。

3 首先，你们航空公司弄丢我一个包，包里面有一个重要的文件。

4 再者， 我的航班无理由晚点一个半小时。

5 还有件事要去抱怨，飞机上的食物太糟糕了。

6 更糟糕的是，空姐对我不仅不友善而且不礼貌。

7 老实说，这是我所知道的最差的航空公司。

8我相信你们会认真对待我的投诉。

9如果你这个月底能找到我的包，我会非常感激。

10我希望你们能立刻采取措施去提高你们的服务。

感谢信
一
假设你是李华，你校的外籍教师Mr.Johnson即将结束在中国的教学工作返回美国
1感谢他得工作，2评价他的工作3希望保持联系，120词左右
1,开头：交待写作的背景，Mr.Johnson要离开
It is said that you are going to return to your country--- the U.S.
I know you are leaving for your country,The United States.
2,感谢教师的工作：
I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your help
I’m very excited to write to express my thanks to you
If it had not been for your assistance in English,I fear that I would have made great progress now
Thanks for your encouragement; if not, I wouldn’t have realized my dream.
对老师的评价
We are very grateful to your help and training for us
We are proud of meeting you such a very good teacher.You have set up a good example for us
For a long time,we have been working, and studying together and have made deep friendship between us.
You have been working hard and all us students love you very much.
结尾部分
Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.
At last I hope we can often keep in touch with each other, and hope you have a chance to come to China again.
能力提升：试着翻译下列 句子
1 很遗憾听说你要离开这里回美国

2 我写这封信是要表达我对你的感谢之情

3 感谢你的帮助，否则我不会实现我的梦想

4 我们非常荣幸遇到你这样如此优秀的老师，为我们树立了很好地榜样

5 我们长时间地在一起工作和学习，并且建立了深厚的友谊

6 你一直以来都很努力地工作，我们都非常地喜欢你

7 对于你的帮助和教导我们都非常的感激

8 如果不是你在英语方面的帮助，我不会取得如此大的进步

9我再一次表达对你的衷心的感谢！其接受我的感激之情

10 最后希望我们可以经常保持练习，并且希望你能有机会再一次来中国

二
假设你是李华，你和朋友Tom 约好下周去北京旅游，但是因故不能赴约，根据以下要点写一封电子邮件 1表示歉意 2解释原因 3 另约时间
第一段
I’m very sorry that I can’t have a trip to Beijing with you next weekend, which I have promised you.
It's kind of you to invite me to have a trip together.I'd love to,but I'm sorry that I cannot go with you.
I'd love to have a trip with you,but I have to do something more important.
第二段
I’m writing to tell you the reason for it
The reason is that ......
第三段
Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.
Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.
I would appreciate if you allow me to fix another date to show you around the place of interest in Beijing
Can I suggest that we put it off （until early August）?
能力提升：试着翻译下列 句子
1 很抱歉我不能正如我承诺的那样和你去北京旅行了

2 尽管我很愿意和你去旅行，但是我不得不做一些更重要的事情

3 真是太好了你邀请我去旅行，我也很愿意，可是很抱歉我不能和你一起去

4 原因是我不得不去机场接我的朋友

5 我的好朋友让我下周六到机场去接他

6 正如你知道的我们有一年没有见面了，所以我不得不去机场见他

7 再一次因为造成的不便而感到抱歉

8 希望你能接受我的歉意并理解我的情况

9 我可不可以建议把这事推迟

10如果你允许我再顶一个日期领你去逛北京，我将不胜感激

11希望得到你的回信