作文系列2话题作文之人物描写文档.doc

书面表达系列讲练（2）
------话题写作之人物描写
一、写作内容：1、age ,sex, birth-place, background
2、appearance, character
3、educaton
4、big events in his or her life(in order of time)
5、evaluation
二、写作常用词汇：请写出下列单词和短语：
1、外貌： 漂亮_______________ 英俊________________ 强壮的_______________
健康的_______________肥/瘦__ 高/矮_______________
2、性格： 吸引人的_____________自信的________________勤奋的______________
友好的_______________慷慨的________________幽默的_______________
自立的_______________聪明的________________好心肠的_____________
随和的_______________耐心的________________调皮的_______________
3、出生： 出生在_______________ 出生在一个贫穷的家庭_______________________
出生在1987年2月12日___________________________________________
一个15岁的男孩_______________
过着一个幸福的生活_______________
当他是个小孩的时候________________
4、兴趣： 喜欢____________________________________________________________
擅于____________________________________________________________
对……疯狂，痴迷_______________对 …. 感兴趣____________________
5、教育： 被北大录取______________________ 获得博士学位____________________
出国深造 ______________________ 通过考试________________________
上课积极________________________主攻历史________________________
6、事迹： 鼓励某人做某事___________________奉献某人的一生做某事___
对…..有天赋 _____________________ 下决心做______________________
尽努力去做_______________________ 在比赛中获一等奖______________
成功做了_________________________
7、评价： 一个模范工人_______________________ 一个先进教师__________________
被所有的学生尊重__________________________________
为国家做出很大的贡献______________________________________________
给我们树立了一个好的榜样__________________________________________
高度评价_______________________对…..严格__________________________
三、佳句欣赏：
1. Born in America, Thomas Edison was a great inventor and scientist
2. He is one of the most famous explorers in the world / the world has ever known
3.  Shakespeare, a son from a poor family, a man of little education, wrote plays and poems that are read all over the world.
4. My father is a responsible worker, who always goes to work early and finishes his work late.
5. He is thin and of average height with short hair.
6. I’d like to be a person like my idol because he’s made me know only hard work leads to success.
四、佳作欣赏，找出文中亮点：
My father has been my idol since I was young， because I think he is both a kind father and a responsible man.He，who is a little fat but very fit， is a middle-aged man with short black hair and a small pair of eyes. My father works so hard and well that every year he is elected to be the model worker in his factory. Although he’s busy with his work, he still cares for my study very much and often encourages me instead of scolding me even if I fail in the exam. I know most of us are ordinary people and my father lets me know even ordinary people can live meaningfully and successfully if they try their best.   

五、用下列词汇进行配对练习：
A. lazy  B. strong-minded C. honest  D. understanding  D. knowledgeable
1.He is _____.He never gives up his dream even though he meets with a lot of difficulties.
2.He’s an ________ boy who never tells a lie.
3.Our English teacher is _________, He can answer all the questions we raise.
4.My mother is ___________. If I make any mistakes, she never scolds me.
5. Tom is a _____ boy. He never finishes his homework.

六、翻译下列句子：
1、 Abraham Lincoln，一个贫困家庭的孩子，1809年2月12日出生在Kentucky。
a________________________________________________________________

b_______________________________________________________________
2、Sun Shower，来自广东的14岁男孩，是一位跳水的世界冠军。
a____
b________________________________________________________________
3、 Michael Phelps，我的偶像，著名的游泳选手，1985年出生于美国的Maryland。
a___________________________________________________________

b____________________________________________
4、我的历史老师非常漂亮，长着两只大眼睛，留着短发。
a____________________________________________________________

b_____________________________________________________________
5、在他一生中，获了很多荣誉，one of which is the 2005 CCTV Moving China Award。
a_________________________________________________
6、他不但对科学感兴趣，而且很有音乐天赋。
a_____________________________________________________________

b_____________________________________________________________
7、雷锋给我们树立了一个好的榜样，所以我们都很尊重他。
a___________________________________________________________

b_________________________

七、基础写作练习，用五句话表达下列所有信息：(题目：我的偶像)

Name
Michael Phelps，a swimmer，我的偶像（idol）
Age
24
Achievements(成就)
2008年奥运会获8枚金牌打破7项世界纪录，成为游泳神话（a phenomenon）。
Personal experiences
(个人经历)
5岁开始游泳，7岁已参加了很多比赛，11岁，遇教练（coach Bob Bowman），人生的转折点。

Appearance(外貌)
健康，英俊，187，清亮的眼睛，短头发。
Character and personalities(个性品质)
勤奋，意志坚强，严格要求自己,从不休假，放弃梦想。
What I learn from him
the secret to success is hard work
八、整合信息：
1、我的偶像，Michael Phelps，24岁，是一位健康，英俊的游泳运动员，长着清亮的眼睛，留着短短的头发。（用同位结构，用who引导的定语从句，with+n等结构）
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2、他5岁开始游泳，7岁已参加很多比赛。11岁遇到教练Bob Bowman，带来了人生的转折点。（用并列，at/when引导时间，which引导非限制性定语从句等）
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3、他是个勤奋，意志坚定的人。对自己非常严格，从不休假，从不放弃梦想。
（用because表原因，或being 表原因等）
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4、2008年奥运会获8枚金牌打破7项世界纪录，成为游泳神话（a phenomenon）
（ing表结果）
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5、他成功的秘诀就是勤奋。
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九、连句成段：

十、人物描写文章阅读：
A
My English teacher is a woman of medium-height. She is in her thirties. She always has a smile on her face and a kind word for her students. As she is also a little plump, she gives people the impression that she is a patient, responsible and easygoing teacher.
This picture of my teacher is true. She devotes herself to the cause of education. She prepares and organizes her lessons so well that we are fully attentive in her class. After class she often gives lessons to the students who have been absent from school because of illness. With her help we have become more and more interested in our English study. Whenever we have problems we will turn to her for help. As a matter of fact, she is more an intimate friend to us than a respected teacher.
We have learnt a great deal from her devotion to her work, her conscientiousness in teaching, and her readiness to help others.

B
Many people have their own idols. They may be famous singers or attractive actresses. My idol is a 16-year-old tennis player called Seiichi. He is thin and of average height with short hair. He has a smiling face which makes him friendly and lovely. Seiichi is captain of his tennis team, so he always sets a good example for his teammates. For instance, he plays tennis harder than any other one in his team. Even if he was sick in the hospital, he still encouraged his members to practice playing tennis and never give up dreams. I’d like to be a person like my idol because he’s made me know only hard work leads to success. More importantly, I also want to have a high sense of responsibility just like him so that I can do everything better and better. In a word, I will try my best to be a responsible and hardworking person as my idol.

C
My father has been my idol since I was young. He is a middle-aged man who is a little fat and below average height, but he is very fit. He has short black hair and a small pair of eyes. My father is a responsible worker, who always goes to work early and finishes his work late. He works so hard and well that every year he is elected to be the model worker in his factory Although he’s busy with his work, he still cares for my study very much. For example, he checks my homework every evening. When I fail in the exam, he often encourages me instead of scolding me. I’d like to be a person like him because I think he is both a kind father and a responsible man. I know most of us are ordinary people and my father lets me know even ordinary people can live meaningfully and successfully if they try their best.           
D
In my opinion, my idol KIMI, is the most handsome person in the world. He is above average height and has medium black hair. He is very well-built as if he can hold as much as a man’s weight. KIMI is a successful singer. Last year, he released his album and just on the night of November 1st, he held his own concert. He is also a friendly brother to his fans because of his warm heart. He’s always ready to help others and often donates his money to the poor. I think KIMI’S pathway to success let me know how to be successful and be kind to others, so I’d like to be a person like him. I’m sure he will lead me to success.

E
Michael Phelps,my idol, a 24-year-old famous swimmer (sportsman)， is fit and handsome, 1.87 metres tall with a pair of clear eyes and short hair. He is a strong-willed young man and also a man who is strict with himself,because he never gives up his dream or takes a day off. At the 2008 Summer Olympic Games in Beijing, he won 8 gold medals，succeeding in breaking 7 world records and having become a phenomenon in swimming.Starting to swim at 5, Michael Phelps had taken part in a lot of swimming contests when he was 7 and he met Coach Bob Bowman who saw the kid’s great talent,which was the turning point in his life. From him, I realize the secret to success is hard work even if you are talented.

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