Persuasive-Writing-英语写作——劝说建议.ppt

PersuasiveWritingPersuasiveWriting2021/5/241 Some Questions:Can you imagine some cases where we persuade others or get persuaded?2021/5/242 Some Examples:TV ShoppingFake“Babaka”Sarahs speech on the funeral of Diana2021/5/243 The Layers of Persuasion（劝说的层次）（劝说的层次）Attitude thesis(论点论点)Reason/goal argument（论据）（论据）Closing Conclusion(结论结论)2021/5/244 Self-introThesis:Why you need a Babaka?Argument:HealthArgument:PriceArgument:An mp4Conclusion:You do need thisThe Flow of Persuasion（劝说的流程）（劝说的流程）2021/5/245 Writing task 假设你是某大学天文系的一名学生，请你写假设你是某大学天文系的一名学生，请你写一封建议信，劝说哥白尼发表他的理论。你可以一封建议信，劝说哥白尼发表他的理论。你可以从以下几点阐明理由：从以下几点阐明理由：(1)现存理论存在的问题；现存理论存在的问题；(2)哥白尼为证实自己的新理论多年来所做的努哥白尼为证实自己的新理论多年来所做的努力；力；(3)科学的发展需要新理论的提出。科学的发展需要新理论的提出。请注意书写工整，标点正确，层次分明，表请注意书写工整，标点正确，层次分明，表达清晰。达清晰。2021/5/246 1.Attitude我非常想阅读你的关于太阳系的新理论。我希望我非常想阅读你的关于太阳系的新理论。我希望你能发表它。你能发表它。I would very much like to read your new theory about the solar system.I hope you will publish it.2021/5/247 2.Reason/goal(1)我明白现在的理论所存在的问题。我明白现在的理论所存在的问题。I understand the problems with the present theory.2021/5/248 2.Reason/goal(1)如果地球是宇宙的中心，那么行星的运行方式不如果地球是宇宙的中心，那么行星的运行方式不是你所预料的那样。是你所预料的那样。提示：提示：The way.is not whatifThe way the planets move is not what you expected if the earth was the centre of the universe.2021/5/249 2.Reason/goal(2)我了解你的观察已经认真地我了解你的观察已经认真地进行进行了多年。了多年。I know your observations have been very carefully carried out over many years.2021/5/2410 我理解你担心自己的理论发表后会发生什么事。我理解你担心自己的理论发表后会发生什么事。I know you worry about what will happen if you publish your new theory.2.Reason/goal(2)2021/5/2411 不管人们怎么反对这个新理论，时间会证明你的不管人们怎么反对这个新理论，时间会证明你的理论正确与否。理论正确与否。2.Reason/goal(2)No matter how people are against it,time will prove whether your ideas are right or wrong.2021/5/2412 3.Conclusion因此我希望你能认真地思考我的建议。因此我希望你能认真地思考我的建议。So I hope you will take my advice into consideration seriously.2021/5/2413 I am a college student majoring in Astronomy.Im writing to you with the hope that you can publish your theory.The reasons are as follows:The 1st ParagraphIntro&Attitude 2021/5/2414 To start with,I understand the problems with the present theory.The way the planets move is not what you would expect if the earth was the centre of the universe.So I agree with you that we need a new theory.The 2nd ParagraphPresent Argument 2021/5/2415 In addition,I know your observations have been very carefully carried out over many years.Now you must have the courage to publish them.Science can never advance unless people have the courage of their beliefs.Last but not least,I know you worry about what will happen if you publish your new theory.But however people oppose it,time will show if your ideas are right or wrong.The 3rd ParagraphPresent Augument 2021/5/2416 So I hope you can take my advice into consideration seriously.The 4th ParagraphClosing 2021/5/2417Thank you!2021/5/2418