2012-2021高考真题英语汇编：写作(5)(教师版).docx

2012-2021高考真题英语汇编：写作（5）
一．书面表达（共7小题）
1．（2016•香港）假设你的笔友Mike来信询问你所在学校学生的课外阅读情况，以下是各类读物占你校学生课外总体阅读内容的比例．根据数据回复他的邮件．

注意：
1．称谓和结尾已为你写好．
2．词数：100左右．
3．生词：
1）科幻小说：science fiction
2）武侠小说：Kung fu novels

2．（2016•上海）假设你是中华中学学生姚平，最近参加了一项研究性学习调研，课题为"父母是否以子女为荣"．通过调研你校学生及其父母，结果发现双方对此问题的看法有差异（数据如图所示）．根据图表写一份报告，在报告中，你必须：
1．描述调研数据；
2．分析可能导致这一结果的原因

3．（2016•北京）第一节（15分）
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华．你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感兴趣，并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物．请你给Jim回信，内容包括：
1．该人物是谁；
2．该人物的主要贡献；
3．该人物对你的影响．
注意：
1．词数不少于50；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Jim，
．
Yours，
Li Hua．
4．（2016•江苏）In recent years，internet voting has become increasing popular in China．People not only can use part﹣time votes themselves，but also urge others to vote for competition like the"most beautiful reaches"and the"Cutest Baby"．
Li Ping，a high school student，is invited to vote in the"Best Police Officer"competition，organized by the local government to let the public have a better understanding of police officers'hardly work，Li Ping visits the website and reads all the stories．He is deeply moved by their glorious deeds．He is already thinking of becoming a policeman himself in the future．
Su Hua is invited by his uncle to vote for his cousin in the"Future Singer"competition．He has already received three similar invitations this week．His uncle tells him that if his cousin wins the competition，the family will win an overseas tour for free．Su Hua likes his cousin very much，but he finds other singers perform even better．To vote，or not to vote？This is a question that troubles him very much．
（写作内容）
1．用约30个单词写出上文概要；2．用约120个单词阐述你对网络投票的看法，并用2﹣3个理由或论据支撑你的理由．
（写作要求）
1．写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3．不必写标题．
5．（2015•香港）下面是某校关于中学生双休日活动现状的一份调查结果．请在借助资料，以Have Fun on Weekends! 为题， 给English on Campus 写一篇稿件．就中学生应如何过双休日发表你的看法．
学习
作业
学习+活动
其他
70%
24%
6%
娱乐休闲
体育
购物
上网/看电视
20%
39%
41%
图书馆
经常
偶尔
从不
2%
18%
80%
注意：1． 词数100左右 2． 无需使用全部资料 3． 适当拓展以使内容连贯．

6．（2015•重庆）写作一（满分15分）
请就以下话题，按要求用英文写作．
If you could give your younger self one piece of advice，what would you say？
要求：
（1）作出回答并说出理由；
（2）词数不少于60；
（3）在答题卡上作答．
写作二（满分20分）
Bookcrossing．com 是一个面向全球的图书分享网站．该网站组织的分享活动有两种参与方式：一是自由分享（wild release），即把书放在指定地点，由其他参与者自由获取；二是定向分享（controlled release），即直接传递给另一位参与者．假设你是李华，请用英文写信申请参加．内容应包括：
•表明写信目的
•选择一种分享方式
•简述作出该选择的理由
•希望了解更多信息
注意：
（1）词数不少于80；
（2）在答题卡上作答
（3）书信格式及开头已给出（不计入总词数）
7．（2015•湖北）请根据以下提示，并结合具体事例，有英语写一篇短文．
Questioning is a bridge to learning．When you begin to doubt something and search for an answer，you will learn．

注意：1．无须写标题；
2．除诗歌外，文体不限；
3．内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例；
4．文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
5．词数不少于120，如引用提示语则不计入总词数．
二．短文改错（共3小题）
8．（2016•香港）此题要求你对一段文章改错．先对每一行做出判断是对还是错．如果是对的，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如果有错误（每行不会多于一个错误），则按情况改错如下：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（划掉，在该行右边横线上写出改也用斜线划掉．
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词．
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横向上写出改：
注意：原行没有错的不要改．
例：
When I have free time I go∧a long walk．Some （a） for
people read tbooks or watch television while （b）the
Others have sports．Charles and Linda Mason do all （c）√
of these things as well as climbed buildings． （d）climbing；climb

Dear Mary
How are you？I am well，I didn't write early because （1）　 　
I was very busy of my school work． （2）　 　
I like my new home here．It is the lively house and my big （3）　 　
bedroom looks over the garden．We are even working on it and （4）　 　
I helped Mon paint the bedroom wall a yellow color yesterday． （5）　 　
How about you plan to visit Disneyland this summer． （6）　 　
I wish you could plan it and have great fun． （7）　 　
Write back soon!I am really looking forwards to hearing （8）　 　
All you news．
Love
Jenny
9．（2016•四川）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
It is Mother's Day today．Though it's a western festival，it's popular in China now．
Mom has a full﹣time job，so she has to do most of the houseworks．She is a great mother．Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mother's Day．We get up early in the morning．Dad cleaned the house，and then went on shopping．When he came back，I found a bunch of flowers in her hand．I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen．The dishes what I cooked were Mom's favoritiest．At dinner，we said to her，"Happy Mother's Day！"Mom was grateful and moving．
10．（2016•新课标Ⅰ）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多着（从第11处起）不计分．
My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live．Though not very big，but the restaurant is popular in our area．It is always crowded with customers at meal times．Some People even had to wait outside．My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest．Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking．My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time．Instead，he hopes that our business will grow steady．

2012-2021高考真题英语汇编：写作（5）
参考答案
一．书面表达（共7小题）
1．（2016•香港）假设你的笔友Mike来信询问你所在学校学生的课外阅读情况，以下是各类读物占你校学生课外总体阅读内容的比例．根据数据回复他的邮件．

注意：
1．称谓和结尾已为你写好．
2．词数：100左右．
3．生词：
1）科幻小说：science fiction
2）武侠小说：Kung fu novels
　Dear Mike，
You asked me about what books the students in my school read in your last letter． I would be glad to tell you something about it．
About one third of the students like reading romantic novels， followed by Kung fu novels and newspapers and magazines， which account for 27% and 20%． What's more， the percentage of the students who read studying materials is 13%． Additionally， the number of the students reading science fictions and classic literatures is the same．
Hopefully， it will be of use for you．
Yours，
Li Hua　
【分析】高分句型一：
译文：大约三分之一的学生喜欢阅读浪漫小说，其次是功夫小说、报纸和杂志，分别占27%和20%．
分析：followed by…是过去分词作状语，which引导定语从句．
高分句型二：
What's more， the percentage of the students who read studying materials is 13%．
译文：还有读学习材料的学生比例是13%．
分析：who引导定语从句修饰the students．
【解答】Dear Mike，
You asked me about what books the students in my school read in your last letter． I would be glad to tell you something about it． （说明写信原因）
About one third of the students like reading romantic novels， followed by Kung fu novels and newspapers and magazines， which account for 27% and 20%． （高分句型一）（占据前三的课外读物）What's more， the percentage of the students who read studying materials is 13%． （高分句型二）（占据13%的课外读物）Additionally， the number of the students reading science fictions and classic literatures is the same．（同样10%的课外读物）
Hopefully， it will be of use for you．（祝愿）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】高考作文的体裁有记叙文、应用文、说明 文和议论文，尤以应用文独占鳌头．今年 的高考书面表达处处体现了新课改对高考 "体现英语教学的交际性、实用性和应用 性，提高考生的综合语言运用能力"的要 求．依然沿袭以往的风格，强调写作的目 的性和实用性．
2．（2016•上海）假设你是中华中学学生姚平，最近参加了一项研究性学习调研，课题为"父母是否以子女为荣"．通过调研你校学生及其父母，结果发现双方对此问题的看法有差异（数据如图所示）．根据图表写一份报告，在报告中，你必须：
1．描述调研数据；
2．分析可能导致这一结果的原因

【分析】本文为图表作文，考生需要根据数据进行分析，从数据分析原因，得出结论．
时态主要为一般现在时．人称为第一人称和第三人称为主．
写作要点为：
1．描述调研数据；
2．分析可能导致这一结果的原因．
重要的词汇及短语：
make a survey 做调查
hold the same opinion 持相同的观点
according to…根据…
approve 同意，认可
cause 起因，原因
figure out 找出
lead to 导致
subtle 细微的
conservative 保守的
accustom to 习惯于
convey 传递（信息）
tendency 趋势
conceal 隐藏
the current education system 常规的教育体系
bias 偏爱，偏见
excessively 过分地
高分句型：
句型一：
There seems to be①two causes as②we tried to figure out what③led to this subtle difference．
there seems to be 句型，表示"看上去似乎有"；
as 引导时间状语从句，表示伴随，主句和从句的两个动作同时发生；
what 引导宾语从句．
句型二：
The current education system excessively emphasizes the value of academic performance，thus forcing children to extensively believe that only by achieving excellent scores can they make their parents proud．
常规的教育体系过分强调学业表现/价值，导致孩子们过度认为只有取得优异的成绩，才能让父母为自己骄傲．
句型三：
This bias unfairly undermines the significance of talents for art and sports，which easily frustrates children and renders them more likely to underestimate themselves．
这种偏见不公正地低估了艺术和体育特长的意义，很容易打击到孩子（的信心），因而他们更可能降低对自我的认同．
【解答】Recently，we made a survey about whether the parents agree that they are proud of their children．The result shows that 80% of parents are proud of their children while only 60% of children hold the same opinion．According to the survey，we can conclude that the number of parents who approved the idea is 20% more than of children．（描述调研数据）
There seems to be two causes as we tried to figure out what led to this subtle difference．【高分句型一】First，conservative Chinese parents are never accustomed to conveying directly how much they are proud of their children．This tendency to conceal feelings hardly helps children develop a strong sense of self﹣confidence．（原因一）Second，the current education system excessively emphasizes the value of academic performance，thus forcing children to extensively believe that only by achieving excellent scores can they make their parents proud．【高分句型二】This bias unfairly undermines the significance of talents for art and sports，which easily frustrates children and renders them more likely to underestimate themselves．【高分句型三】（原因二）
Without the genuine encouragement from parents and the reversal of exam﹣oriented educational methods，a kid would never end up with a positive grown﹣up．（结论）
【点评】数据分析类的作文，需要考生认真观察数据，透过现象看本质，从数据中分析原因，得出结论．
3．（2016•北京）第一节（15分）
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华．你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感兴趣，并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物．请你给Jim回信，内容包括：
1．该人物是谁；
2．该人物的主要贡献；
3．该人物对你的影响．
注意：
1．词数不少于50；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Jim，
．
Yours，
Li Hua．
【分析】题目要求为写一封信﹣﹣向英国友人介绍中国文化及历史人物．时态为一般现在时和一般过去时为主，人称为第一人称为主．写作要点：1．该人物是谁；2．该人物的主要贡献；3．该人物对你的影响．
重要的词组和短语：
obtain understanding on sth 获得对某事的了解
in order to 为了…
history figure 历史人物
Confucius 孔子
philosopher哲学家
politician 政治家
educator 教育家
one's thirties 某人的三十多岁
creator 创始人
have great influence on sth 对…有重要的影响
propose 提议
Confucianism 儒学
kernal 核心
in addition 另外
be considered as 被认为是…
guidence 指导
Education without Distinction．有教无类
高分句型：
句型一
One of his saying"The benevolent loves others．"①has developed into②the kernal of the Confucianism．
他的话"仁者，爱人"已经成了儒家学说的核心思想之一．
①The benevolent loves others．仁者，爱人．
②develop into 发展成…
句型二
His thought in teaching is considered as a wise guidence in my study．
他的教学思想被认为是我学习上的明智的导师．
【解答】Dear Jim，
I'm so glad to hear that you are interested in Chinese culture．In order to help you obtain further understanding on Chinese culture，I will show you one of my favorite history figures to you．His name is Confucius（circa 551﹣479 BC）．（该人物是谁）He is a philosopher，a politician and an educator．He became an educator since his thirties．He is one of the most famous people in ancient China．He is the creator of the Confucianism．One of his saying"The benevolent loves others．"has developed into the kernal of the Confucianism．【高分句型一】His thought has a great influence on Chinese culture．（贡献一）In addiction，as an educator，he proposed the thought"Education without Distinction"．Many of his thoughts in education are widely applied in teaching．（贡献二）Since Confucius teachings and philosophy were so advanced，it has been the education for China for 2，000 years．It is called Confucianism．（贡献三）His thought in teaching is considered as a wise guidence in my study．（对我的影响）【高分句型二】
If you want to know more，please let me know．I will send you some books．
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】考生需了解中国历史中著名的人物事例，选择熟悉的人物进行介绍．考生在平时要注意积累对人物事例进行介绍的词汇、短语及句型，在写作时才能得心应手．
4．（2016•江苏）In recent years，internet voting has become increasing popular in China．People not only can use part﹣time votes themselves，but also urge others to vote for competition like the"most beautiful reaches"and the"Cutest Baby"．
Li Ping，a high school student，is invited to vote in the"Best Police Officer"competition，organized by the local government to let the public have a better understanding of police officers'hardly work，Li Ping visits the website and reads all the stories．He is deeply moved by their glorious deeds．He is already thinking of becoming a policeman himself in the future．
Su Hua is invited by his uncle to vote for his cousin in the"Future Singer"competition．He has already received three similar invitations this week．His uncle tells him that if his cousin wins the competition，the family will win an overseas tour for free．Su Hua likes his cousin very much，but he finds other singers perform even better．To vote，or not to vote？This is a question that troubles him very much．
（写作内容）
1．用约30个单词写出上文概要；2．用约120个单词阐述你对网络投票的看法，并用2﹣3个理由或论据支撑你的理由．
（写作要求）
1．写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3．不必写标题．
【分析】本文为读写任务类作文，时态以一般现在时为主，人称为第一人称为主，写作要点：1．用约30个单词写出上文概要；2．用约120个单词阐述你对网络投票的看法，并用2﹣3个理由或论据支撑你的理由．

重要词汇和短语：
on﹣line voting 网络投票
get sb involved in…涉及到…
be beneficial to sb 对…有利
dilemma 两难
in one's opinion 按…来看
inseparable 不可分的
in addiction 另外
make difference 对…有影响
regardless+n．除了…
work out 制定出
furthermore 进一步说，进而
instant feedback 及时的反馈
not because…but because…
hold a positive/negative attitude towards sth 对…持肯定/否定态度

高分句型：
句型一：
It makes no difference from ordinary voting events，in which①candidates go around to seek supports．
in which引导非限制性定语从句，先行词为ordingary voting events，in which在从句中作状语，表方式．
句型二：
To be honest，voters sometimes feel annoyed，not because①they hate voting，but because①they are divided between emotion and fairness．
not because…but because…表示不是因为…，而是因为…
【解答】Possible version one：

On﹣line voting becomes increasingly popular，and many competitions get people involved in it．It is beneficial to some people，while it puts others into a dilemma over whether to vote or not．（材料概要，陈述现状）
　　In my opinion，on﹣line voting is an inseparable part of modern life and should be welcomed，since it is no more than a way to participate in public life．（个人观点，表示支持） It makes no difference from ordinary voting events，in which candidates go around to seek supports．【高分句型一】（理由一）In addition，the Internet makes surveying and voting easy and convenient，regardless of time and space．Furthermore，voting on the Internet makes instant feedback possible．（理由二）
　　To be honest，voters sometimes feel annoyed，not because they hate voting，but because they are divided between emotion and fairness．【高分句型二】Things will turn for the better if we can work out some participation rules for people to obey．Therefore，I hold a positive attitude towards on﹣line voting．（建议）
【点评】评分原则
1．本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分．
2．评分时，先根据文章内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分．
3．词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分．
4．评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性．
5．拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面．评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑．英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受．
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