2023年BEC中级0312写作真题讲解.doc

12月4日BEC（中级）写作真题
整顿：夏午茶.3.8
PART ONE
·You are a manager in an international company. You want to reduce the company’s spending on courier services.
·Write a MEMO to the staff in your department:
Explaining that spending on courier services has risen
Suggesting how savings could be made
Saying how the money saved will be used
·Write 40—50 words
·Write on the opposite page.

MEMORANDUM
To:
From:
Date:
Subject:

PART TWO
·You work in the customer services department of a large store. Your line manager has asked you to write a report on the results of a recent customer survey.
·Look at the information below, on which you have already made some handwritten notes.
·Then , using all your handwritten notes, write your report
·Write 120-140 words
·Write on the opposite page

Results of Customer Survey
Responses: Good Poor

Staff friendliness 30% 70% new training
for staff should help

Product range 62% 38%
suggest products to
attract more customers
Opening hours 87% 13%

give reason for this
Additional customer comments:
·difficult to find things new store layout next month
· not enough parking
say why this is no longer a problem

注：斜体字部分就是 handwritten

如下是我12月4日考试时写旳作文，但不是上面两题旳答案，仅供大家参照

To: Human Resource Manager
Subject: Temporary Staff
Mr Jack
As orders increasing rapidly these days in our sales dept, I need 7 (seven) temporary staff who is skillful in office software form 15/Dec/ to help us do some calculation. Could you arrange it ?
Thank you
Cole

规定写要几种临时工人，什么时候开始，具有什么能力，
Dear Annie,
Thank you for your letter dated 30/Nov/, and I am glad to inform you that the Aruon Industrial Park will be your best choice.
Our Arvon Industrial Park is near to the Airport (3.5km) and Train Station (2.0km),thus it is of convenience of transportation.
With reference to security services, I am confirmed that you are assured it is the first class in the city. Our guards will provide service round the clock and we have advanced alarming system.
Also we have a large parking which can hold 300 cars at same time.
Regarding the electricity supply, as we have upgraded last year, I am sure that electricity can be live up to your need.
We will offer a 10% discount for long-term rental contracts (5 years at least).
If you have any questions, pls do not hesitate to contact me.
Your faithful
Cole